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HA! Oh man, I will never look at Lincoln Logs with a straight face again! Nicely done!


Author's Response: lol... thanks!

So, I don't know that I ever fully expressed how much I love this plot. You have a great way of coming up with these scenarios that I (I'd guess most others as well, but you know what happens when you assume...) read and say 'YES! That is what was supposed to have happened next! The writers obviously just lost those last 20 pages or so.' You're doing a great job of keeping in character with the interaction that Jim and Pam had going on circa mid-S3. Just awesome. I can't wait to see the next part!!!

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Holy God am I in love with you right now. I literally did a happy dance at reading the intro to the first chapter. MSR and  JAM?!!? I am so excited about this story, it's really a little ridiculous. I can't wait for more!!! 

Author's Response:

hahaha!! Thanks for this awesome review! I have more already written, i just have to edit and then post so keep your eyes peeled.  MSR and JAM is so much like a dream come true that I think I'm a little over-zealous in writing it ;-) So I understand your enthusiasm.  lol.

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Is it odd that I'd kinda hoped that Dwight would turn out the hero?

I'm SO excited everytime I see a new chapter of this! I can't decide if I'm happy to get to the resolution or ridiculously depressed that this might end soon... But I love it and thank you for continuing to mesh my favorite worlds!

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  I'm re-commenting due to massively screwy formatting...

So I definitely just did a head!desk at work when I checked and saw that not only had you added chapter 4 and I missed it (and have it sitting on my computer with comments and yet never sent it back...) but you've added chapter 5! GAH! It is unforgivable on my part. As pennance, I shall comment on this chapter thoroughly before allowing myself to move on to chapter 5. Somehow that seems to fit....

<<His voice is sort of grumbly, if that makes any sense, and his eyes don't stay on hers, which is new. >>

 I believe this was spotted in Survivor Man! I went back and watched the ‘do you think it's a good idea' scene and couldn't figure out why I liked it so much. It's the voice!

 <<"No, I mean, this... is huge,">> 

How did you pass up the giant ‘twss'?! (Oh, an when I say "giant twss"? ...twss.) 

<<"It's not stupid.  We could just call a contractor,">> 

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!  

<<"I was going to text her." >>  

It says bad things about me that I find this semi-reasonable.... It also explains a lot... 

<<"That's not all they spread," Pam mutters.>> 

Aaaaw snap! Nicely done! 

<<"Oh... I said that out loud," Pam muses. >>  

HA! I love it.

<<I just split chapter 4 in two bits.>>

... Oh. Well, now I feel less guilty... Off to chapter 5!!! Yay! 

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<<"But anyway, I powered through and ended it. I just had to be aggressive."

Another pause.

"Jim." Pam's voice had a warning tone.>>

Awesome. Simply awesome. (A.W.E. - S.O.M.E)

<<"Don't be coy, Jim. Not every woman in this office finds the deviant boyish act charming," she hissed.>>

Pretty sure Jesus isn't a big fan of blatant lies there, Angela.

<<She left a drunk and clearly amorous woman on the doorstep of an untrustworthy doe-eyed rogue.>>

<the reviewer is unable to supply witty comment in response to indicated awesome line as she is laughing her ass off, specifically at the 'doe-eyed rogue' comment. She would, though, like to know how your finals-addled brain was able to come up with that>

<<"Nerfherder?" Pam suggested.>>

... 'scuse me. A what?

<<It was probably more painless that it happened now than it would have been if I'd waited until a month before my wedding.>>

Touché

<<"I will take you home. Where are you staying now?" Angela asked.

Pam floundered for a moment, unable to reply. Finally she smiled sheepishly and managed to spit out a half sentence.

"Funny story...">>

I am so ridiculously pleased, I'm almost ready to forgive you for having to go get yourself edumacated, and subsequently go all MIA.

<<The next morning Dwight came in the office to find a Baby Ruth sitting on his desk.>>

Yay!!!!

I'm so happy you finally got a chance to finish this! It turned out, as usual and expected, wonderfully!

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I've been loving this fic the entire time, but I really like that things seem to be heating up. Also... I especially liked this 

<<Oy, with the poodles already!>>

Well done. And I definitely have Gilmore Girls paused behind me. 

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Shan!!!!!!!!! A new story from you is a glorious thing to wake up to. And a jimpot story nonetheless?!

I was so anxious/excited/nervous with Pam as she re-opened the gift. I'm happy to be able to attribute this to your amazing writing (and not my sad obsession... not entirely anyway).

That turtle dove card is genius. Where did that comes from?

Also, I may have enjoyed the ass-grabbing portion a little too much... Mmmm... that is one fine a-- Am I still typing?

You know what acts as a catalyst in the CO2 + reviews = O2 reaction? Fanfic. 

I'm just sayin... ;-)