Penname: susanita Real name: Uh, Susan. Yeah, just Susan, but over at the forum, I'm susanita.
Member Since: February 11, 2007

Bio:
Fanfic saved me from jumping off the ledge during the long lonely walk of loneliness that was most of season three. Thank you wonderful fic writers!

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Smile by invis Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 5
Summary:

This oneshot is based on a prompt at TWoP to write a fic based on a screen shot from Gay Witch Hunt showing that Jim has a note stuck to his monitor reading, "Smile!" This is what I imagine he was thinking when he looked at it. Oh, so, spoilers for Gay Witch Hunt, sort of.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 702 Read Count: 3101 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: May 26, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: from the inside out

I'm so glad someone wrote a fic about the Smile sticky.  The sticky seemed like such a minor detail, but it really says a lot about Jim's state of mind in S3.  

Love this part:

He just wants to forget, to smile and mean it, or to not smile and have no one notice. The person who’d notice his missing smile and try to bring it back is…not here. He looks at the note. He keeps practicing.

So good.  I'm so glad he doesn't have to practice anymore! Yay.


Author's Response: I know--SQUEE!!  All he has to do is look up and she's there and bam!--the smile comes right out.  Sigh...so happy.  :)

Giddy by Misao7 Rated: T [Reviews - 25] 10
Summary: Jim's pretty excited about his date. Spoilers for The Job.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Mark, Other
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1206 Read Count: 4636 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: May 26, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: dude, he's drunk

Yay for giddy, happy JAM fics!  

Love this: “Just the ones I like-like,”

That makes me wanna put my arms out and spin!!

Wheeeeeeee........ 



Author's Response: haha thanks! =D so glad you liked it!

Closer by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 44] 20
Summary:

Hmm....how to put this? At the end of Season 3, Jim asked Pam out on a date. I thought I might go out on a limb and fill in the blanks.... (SERIOUS FLUFF ALERT!)

You already have him, she told herself. He came back from New York because of you. There is nothing to prove tonight. She wished she could believe it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8365 Read Count: 23123 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2007 Updated: May 29, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: May 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: I've had enough of this parade

Crying?  There's no crying in fluff!  LOL  Aww, poor Pam.  She's had a rough year.   

"The desire to drag me to bed is a a very natural reaction from being so close to me. Trust me, I get it all the time."

*gigglefit*  Love, love, love this.

Great story. Just fun, fun, fun.  Some crying, and then more fun.  Love it!

Summary: Jim and Pam ditch the camera crew to enjoy their first date. Spoilers through Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1056 Read Count: 4444 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2007 Updated: May 30, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: May 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Planting Seeds

Sweet.  Love the bantering.  That's been so missed this season. The beet field is the perfect place to hide out.   :-)  Nice job! 

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you thought I did a good job with the banter. It was hard to write just the dialogue, so I'm happy you thought it was good.

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's Valentine's Day 2008....

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1225 Read Count: 5445 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: What a Day

*sniffle*  I need a kleenex. 

She said yes before he even asked the question.  Awesome.  

Summary: In the week following their first date, Jim's true colors start reappearing....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10089 Read Count: 38065 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Friday

Yay for fluff.  Such a sweet story.  Enjoyable as always, Moxie. :-) 

Summary:

unfold and I were talking and it lead to this, somehow.

Jim/Pam Smutcake.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Holiday, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5710 Read Count: 23712 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2007 Updated: November 24, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: holding lightly

"Would you..."

Wow. Just. Wow.  

*blinks*  That. was. awesome.   

Summary: Past Featured StoryThis was submitted for the Office Fiction Writers Challenge. Kevin Malone decides to try his hand at creative writing.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Kevin
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Office Fiction Writers
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 513 Read Count: 2306 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2007 Updated: June 17, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, that was just perfect.  Breasts or brownies?  Quite the dilemma for our Poor Kev.  Love it!  I hope you write more Kevin-fic.  There just isn't enough.  

Just Listen by Blondie Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 5
Summary: Jim and Pam's first date, Spoilers for The Job
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1770 Read Count: 2980 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2007 Updated: June 21, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, I love sweet first date fics.   Good job.  I really enjoyed it. 

Super High by bitterpill Rated: MA [Reviews - 19] 8
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe Monday after the sex.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 657 Read Count: 7228 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2007 Updated: June 23, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

After two months of taking it slow, she now knows what Jim looks like when he comes.

Best. First. Sentence. Ever.

 

Summary: Past Featured StoryA collection of loosely-related moments (more like a bunch of one shots than a WIP. So jump in and out as you like.) Unapologetic smuff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5010 Read Count: 23790 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2008
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Donuts

lisahoo's birthday and we all get the present. Niiiice.

I love all of it, but this part in particular is just... Neat.

Almost before she knew what was happening, her leg was flung over his shoulder, her panties hanging from her ankle,

Who doesn't like a good jelly donut, indeed.  Damn...



Author's Response: 'Neat' is one way of putting it, LOL. I owed Ms. Hoo a bit o'smut...and had this vision of jelly donuts. This is what ensued. Thanks, Susan M!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: June 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Boxers or Briefs?

‘Black?’ She choked out.

My brain just went *pfft*  Yeah, I can totally get behind that visual. (TWSS)  

Referencing JK's real life propensity for dickish behavior on the basketball court just adds another layer of hotness, nay, deliciousness  to this.  I love these snack sized stories and I hope you have more than just one left. Pretty please. :-)


Author's Response: Snack sized - exactly! I figured some of you would know that ref (I know who I'm dealing with, LOL.) Sorry about your brain, but so happy these are amusing you. At least one more in a couple of day...then we'll see if I can sustain the mood. Thanks so much, Susan M. !

Summary:

Jim and Pam having some bedroom fun, in response to the 55 word challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51 Read Count: 2075 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Smokin' hot.  Nice job, EH! :-) 


Author's Response: Hi dear, sorry I took so long getting back to you.  I didn't realize you had reviewed my little story.  Thanks so much.  Always nice to get kudos from a fellow hussy!

Summary: This is a spoof of License to Wed submitted for the 55 words challenge.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57 Read Count: 2043 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2007 Updated: July 07, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hee!  Pam rules.   This just cracked my stuff up.  Great job, Larry. :-)


Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

In Her Arms by larrymcg Rated: T [Reviews - 37] 10
Summary:

Sometimes it takes support from an unlikely source to help you through your darkest hours.

Now Complete!


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Angela, Jim
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11615 Read Count: 9394 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Starting Over

... Wow. 



Author's Response: Thanks! (I think?)

Birthday Girl by time4moxie Rated: K+ [Reviews - 34] 9
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's never too late to celebrate the people you love.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 930 Read Count: 6334 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2007 Updated: July 08, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Five Months Today

Aw, such fluffy goodness! Love this bit:

“Presents?” Pam smiled, but eyed him with some suspicion. “Real presents or 'Look what I have for you in my pants' presents?”

I know which one you'd take, hussy! ;-P

Happy Birthday Moxie!



Author's Response:

Me?  I suspect it's the universal response!  ;-)

Thanks for the review! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam's first date, using the constraints of the 55 word challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 589 Read Count: 4551 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2007 Updated: July 10, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Their First Date In 55 Word Moments

Wonderful.  So sweet. I was grinning the whole way through.

Pam for the win, indeed!  

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's about damn time -- not only for Pam & Jim to go on a date, but for me to get in on this whole fanfic writing thing. I hear it's the next big thing.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 5346 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2007 Updated: July 10, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yaaaaaaaay!!!!   About damn time, indeed!  Great job, lisahoo!  

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm not so good with the patience.  55 words is about all I can manage before someone is naked.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year or two before the cameras arrived, Michael takes the staff to the Poconos for a camaraderie event.  Much unresolved sexual tension and angst ensues (uh, between Jim & Pam, not the entire staff).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Roy, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90021 Read Count: 151284 ePub Downloads: 66
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2007 Updated: October 02, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

::bounce-bounce:: It's embarrassing how happy I get when I get the e-mail reminder that girl7 has written another amazing story.  Probably as excited as Jim was to see Pam show up.  :-)

This is a great set up to a verrrry [/jim] promising story.  Lovely location. Potential for mass consumption of alcohol. Jim.  I mean, what more could a gal want? ;-)  Can't wait for the next chapter.  (or for the kissing.... c'mon, you know I have to throw that in. *wink* <-- that's Smiley!Jim's wink, y'know. Hee!)



Author's Response:

It's embarrassing how happy I get when I see that I have a review from you!  And it's even more embarrassing that -- I swear to god -- I can't even think about your smiley!Jim icon without grinning like a jackass.  :o)

Glad you're enjoying the premise thus far (I was so worried that it was totally boring), and just for smiley!Jim icon, I will give you a slight spoiler: There will be kissing.  That's all I'm sayin'.  :O)

Thanks for reviewing -- and for making me grin like a jackass (always a good thing)!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Into the Sea of Waking Dreams

Guh.  The angsty-ness of it all. So, so beautiful, and yet...

Still no smooching. *shakes head sadly*  Why, girl7, why? 

You're killing us. (but in a totally great way)  :-)! <--love, Smiley!Jim

Can't wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response:

Oh yeah - it's angsty, baby.  (And - to borrow the phrase lisahoo taught me - hold onto your butt, because it's gonna get worse from here!) 

I'm telling you: Come the next chapter, Smiley!Jim icon should be very happy with me.  :O)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Man of Many Wishes

I'm really enjoying the alternating POV.  Love the small moments between Jim and Pam, and really who doesn't love that?  Sorta disappointed they don't get to bunk together, but hey, it's early in the story. Heh. Plenty of time to get Meredith drunk and passed out somewhere, not in their room. Hehehehe.

Seriously though, great story.  Love the characterizations. Can't wait to see where you're taking us all with this.

So far only one thing missing... *smooch*  :-)! <---Smiley!Jim's review.


Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  And yeah, I kind of hated to not have them bunk together, but I couldn't come up with a plausible scenario in which they'd actually end up assigned to the same room.  That said...well, there are ways around everything, and we fanfic writers are pretty crafty at finding them, hee. 

As for the smooch, Smiley!Jim....patience, my pet.  LOL

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Making Spells As the Shadows Close In

Guh. How do you do it?  I swear I can practically smell Jim Halpert. *dreamy look*  I am loving so much what you're choosing this story to be.  The flirting, dancing and giggling is just so yummy.  The dialogue is so fresh and funny.  Your Meredith seriously broke my brain!  Great rack?!  Hee!  

And then you bring the pain:
...he has to step carefully; if he comes on too strong, the guilt will send her scurrying back to that shell of resignation that she calls happiness.

Just so f'ing true.  *showers you in air-conditioners*  How'd you get to be so awesome? :-)!

I am loving the collision course Jim and Pam are on.  Don't chicken out, Pam! (We need us some smooches!) :-)!   ::bounce-bounce::  Can't wait for the next exciting chapter!  ::bounce-bounce::


Author's Response:

Hee hee -- thank you for the air conditioners (ours is working again, thank god).  I'm really glad you're enjoying this; I'm having a good time writing it, let me tell you. 

And I will say this: Your Smiley!Jim icon will be a very happy little icon before it's all over.  (That sounded incredibly dirty and just wrong, didn't it?  LOL)

Thanks, as always, for the review!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

While MTT was down for a brief time one night, I wrote a couple 55 word fics in the TWOP thread about Jim and Pam reading fanfic. I will likely continue this as a long running series, referencing my favorite stories and also newer stories as they come about.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1180 Read Count: 51862 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2007 Updated: October 04, 2013
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Guilty Pleasures

Oh, now you've done it!  You've outted poor Jimpert as a Claymate! :-P 

Such a dork...

Thanks for the shout-out!  :-D

Summary: Every couple have their fights. For Jim and Pam, the point of contention was something most couples never even have to deal with: being caught on camera expressing affection.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2760 Read Count: 4523 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2007 Updated: July 13, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The quarrels of lovers are the renewal of love

This is great Moxie.  I really enjoy reading your stories because they read so true to the characters and what is happening (or hopefully will happen) on the show.  I can definitely see how dealing with the camera crew would add to their in-office tension.

This bit is just the best:

"I play to win, Halpert."

This made me do that little triumphant fist pump that Pam does in Safety Training.  Hell yes, Ms Beesly plays to win.  Pam always wins.  Yay. 


Author's Response:

Yes, I have to agree.  FNB definitely decided to start playing to win once she did that coal walk.  I can't wait to see Pam sparkle next season!!

 

Third by NeverEnoughJam Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 8
Summary: My answer to the 55 word challenge; how Jim and Pam got together, in 55 words or less.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53 Read Count: 3373 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2007 Updated: July 14, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Third

Yay for third.  Third base.  Third time's the charm.  It's all good.

Loved it. :-) 



Author's Response: Yeah, I'm making certain assumptions about that third date which maybe aren't warranted, but what the heck. I think the idea comes through: time for these two to get together!