Penname: notatoy Real name:
Member Since: February 26, 2007

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Too Late... by Shassafrass Rated: M [Reviews - 154] 56
Summary: Past Featured Story

With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...

WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9339 Read Count: 49871 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2008
Reviewer: notatoy Signed
Date: February 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

He loves her. He does.
Just not with all of his heart.

That line slayed me!  This is a wonderful creation you have here, I'm excited to see how each of them goes on.

 

A Simple Excuse to Come Over and Have Sex by bitterpill Rated: MA [Reviews - 25] 19
Summary: Some shower smut because they can.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 804 Read Count: 14439 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2007 Updated: November 18, 2007
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: November 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK wow - not usually this much of a fan of the smut, but I loved this!  Sooo good.  Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it:)

money can't buy you back the love that you had then by sophia_helix Rated: K [Reviews - 4] 5
Summary: "And Jim didn't say anything to her, but it wasn't like she said all that stuff to him looking for an answer anyway."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1971 Read Count: 3306 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2007 Updated: November 25, 2007
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: November 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK, so first of all, I am so glad to see your work here.  It's like an early Christmas present!   OK, enough fangirling, on to the review...

I loved this... the fact that there wasn't really any resolution, that there was a lot of frustration... but my favorite line was this:

Her heart's still thumping like crazy, banging against her ribs, and she's not entirely sure what she just said. Nobody died, though, and the lake didn't boil and the stars didn't fall and everyone looked a little embarrassed and a little guilty, but they were listening to her for once.

This was so perfect, so realistic and yet the imagery was so out of the norm...

So, thanks! 

 

Cameras Don't Catch Everything by malcolm lake Rated: T [Reviews - 41] 17
Summary: My version of what Jim and Pam may have been talking and thinking about away from the cameras during the first few episodes of Season 4.  An effort to fill in the blanks
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10926 Read Count: 29105 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2007 Updated: March 31, 2008
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 9
Date: November 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run

I love this, it is so cute, that is just such a funny idea for the motivation behind Pam's little p()rn surfing habit!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the beginning.  Hope I can keep if funny.  Thanks for the review!

Magic by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 11
Summary: Pam wonders about the fate of a fictional couple. Takes place in early season 4. Spoilers for Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 658 Read Count: 2558 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2007 Updated: November 30, 2007
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: November 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You. Are. Awesome.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Now, this is the kind of comment that keeps me writing fanfic (hee). Seriously, I appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

unthread the light by awesomeblossom Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 11
Summary: It’s blinding, sometimes, the force with which he loves her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 752 Read Count: 3463 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2007 Updated: December 04, 2007
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: December 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: unthread the light

OK - so wow.  This:

But when she learns to unthread the light, she sees that it’s made of a million tiny things, infinite shining strands of love woven together, and it’s easier. Easier that way, taking it a piece at a time. Comforting, to know she’ll never run out of it.

KILLED ME - knocked me back on my --- and left me with a gasp and a smile.  What a beautiful thought and what a wonderful fic.  Thank you. 



Author's Response: Thanks! =)

All At Once by StarShine Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 2
Summary:

He loves her. They are perfect together, for each other. She completes him.

Or so he tries to tell himself.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 550 Read Count: 3043 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2008 Updated: January 08, 2008
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 9
Date: January 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes the hardest thing and the right thing are the same

:)  I loved this - you got me!  Well done, beautifully written, and wow, the punch at the end! 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, notatoy! I love me a punchy ending!

Clay Pot by Colette Rated: T [Reviews - 78] 44
Summary: Past Featured StoryS3, set between Traveling Salesman and The Return.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4109 Read Count: 27901 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: August 13, 2008
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: August 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Same old story

"He’d chuckled back, but immediately looked around to make sure no one had heard them.

Now he regarded no one sitting alone in the dark."

I loved this little bit of phrasing.  This is, as usual, beautifully done.  Thank you!



Author's Response: Why thank you! No one...so totally the opposite of how he saw/sees her. Glad you're liking this, notatoy!

Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: August 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Artifact

"He ran his thumb slowly over the small spot of naked pale pinkish clay exposed beneath the pot's fanciful surface. "

I love the visualization here too - this is such an amazing little view into the utter hell  fanfic fodder torment that was S3.  Thanks again!



Author's Response: Thank you so much notatoy! Have to admit, that line got me a little choked up when I wrote it - they were all just so raw, and so stupid, back then.

Love, Translated by beruco Rated: K+ [Reviews - 10] 17
Summary: A phone call. Post-Weight Loss.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 336 Read Count: 3388 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know what I loved about this?  Everything, but especially the Hungry Man bit... it's so every day domestic and so them.  Thanks!

The Distance and the Damage by unfold Rated: M [Reviews - 24] 20
Summary: Past Featured StoryS3 AU. She twists the gold band on her finger around and around. She waits to feel regret or guilt or something else besides this buzzing excitement.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4207 Read Count: 5889 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh. My. God.  That was amazing.  The voices, the pacing.  Wow.  I promise - I'll be more coherent soon, but just, yeah, wow. 

Happenings by Nadienne Rated: T [Reviews - 4] 8
Summary: Love is more then coal walks, parking lots, gas stations or waterfalls. It's what happens between them.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 791 Read Count: 2556 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010
Reviewer: notatoy Signed
Date: November 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Enchanted

This story is great, but maybe you could add a few spaces or line breaks to make it easier to read?