Michael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.While I'm of course a Jim/Pam fan...I am all for a little detour along the way--however, I REALLY hope that the Pam/Ryan thing doesn't go too far b/c even if Kelly is annoying, she's still Pam's friend and that would just be way too hard to come back from...but as long as the two of them just stay friends (without benefits) and drive Jim insane, I'm all for it
Author's Response: Thank you for the comments! I definitely like hearing everyone's perspective on what may or may not happen. Hopefully I won't disappoint!
Thanks for all the quick updates! I'm enjoying Jealous Jim....very fun to play with--and I like that Ryan is able to help her out so she isn't stuck with having to deal with Jim and Karen (and Michael of course) all by her lonesome
Can't wait for more
Another great update...I'm loving the suspense and playfullness
Can't wait for more!!
Uh oh! I would looooooove to know how that bathroom conversation went--I hope Ryan told Jim that he wasbeing an ass for passing up his opportunity to be with Pam (and I hope that eventually Jim makes it up to Pam and Ryan goes back to kelly...or maybe he takes up with Karen...)
Whatever you've got I'm excited to read it! Update soon!
OK what were you thinking ending it there???????
Please update SOON--I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Uh oh....I feel bad for Ryan, but I'm still sooo in love with Jim and Pam, you have me so torn
Can't wait to see what happens at lunch!
“I get it now, she’s everything I’m not.” She says as a few tears slip out from beneath her lashes. His subconscious realizes at this moment that she’s unconsciously mimicking a line from the Royal Tenenbaums, one of their joint favorite films. When he replays this conversation in his mind later, this will break his heart.
Great update!
I loved this line
“You LEFT me, alone. I gave up my past and my future for you and you LEFT, but I forgave you and I loved you and I wanted you and you broke my heart a thousand times over. Every time I reached out to you, you pulled back until I gave up and went back to something safe. Until I made a mistake, and now you hate me. You told me you Hate me”
That was just awesome--and I hope that if the show does go more towards this kind of a show that the writers have already planned Pam saying something just like that
Keep up the good work, I love all the emotion you are pouring into the characters!
Where is she???
Hope you update soon, I'm glad Jim realized he was being an ass
Great job--whatever route you decide to take once they're through that door (or not if Pam decides to slam the door in his face) I'll be all for it
More soon!
Wow! That was not what I was expecting (well the sex yes, the Vegas not so much)
Nice little twist there--after years of being in slow motion it's nice that they're really making up for lost time
AAwww soo cute! I loved the nervousness on both their parts and the little glimpses into the future (chocolate bunny was my favorite)---please keep churning out great angsty/fluffy fics!
Another story telling the aftermath of "Cocktails".
Loved the "I'm trying not to be line"--by far my favorite so far
can't wait to read more soon
Just caught up on the last two...
I definitely liked Jim's musings in the last one about getting ready to be the boss, I think you totally nailed that one
And I'm glad that Pam is going to paint for herself for awhile...I think she'd be a great art teacher, but I don't really see her as doing the whole gallery thing all the time
Them at the baseball stadium was so cute--and Jim is the best husband ever!
Keep up the great work!
Ha! I like Lisa's take charge attitude...can't wait to see if it works!
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned...
Story formerly known as Spring Cleaning. When he realizes she's asking him a serious question there is not even a moment’s hesitation before he answers. “Sure. What do you need?” Future fluff. Spoiler free, non-fat, as light as airy spun sugar. ;)
Very cute....I like fluff with Jim and Pam sharing a life together
Great job
"Whatever. Like I didn't hear you tell Jane the other day to "Make it work." "She needs to take more risks." Pam shrugs. "It's onesies all the time for her. She's totally in a fashion rut." I literally laughed out loud when I read that...such a great line. Well worth all the drama that followed where I was biting my lip worried for them. Glad they made it work at the end :o)
Author's Response: I am on the edge of my seat waiting for Project Runway to start. And I might have a crush on Tim Gunn - obviously not in the same way I have a crush on Jim Halpert but - you know what I'm saying. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the review.
Awww that was so cute. I love that Pam was so nervous and the banter between her and Jim was spot on! Great job! I can totally see Jim reading pregnancy books (I wrote a fanfic for another couple a while back and had a whole bunch of titles in it--my fave: "My Boys Can Swim: The official guy's guide to pregnancy" No clue if it's any good, but I have a feeling Jim would have that kind of humorous taste)
Can't wait to read more!
You know - I saw that title when I looked up books on Barnes and Noble. Too funny!!! I agree he'll probably be reading that one as well.
So glad you enjoyed it!
She looked over the boxes with wide eyes, overwhelmed by all the choices. Words like clear and easy were jumping out at her and she had no idea what to do because this was the furthest thing from clear or easy that she had ever done.
Title Courtesy of a Muse song.
Ok this is already so freaking good--I love Jim Pambaby stories so please continue with the cute little fears and such
All the lights are changing red to green. From denial to truth in an enclosed space. Spoilers up to Cocktails. Hiatusathon request for Moxie. CUTE! I'd give anything for the two of them to be locked in a confined space for an extended period of time! Glad they got everything worked out :o)
Author's Response: Me, too. Now if only this weren't fiction! Thanks for commenting, JRAddict!
A Roy-less Phyllis' Wedding---fabulous...keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Michael’s leaning forward on his elbows, staring at her across his desk. “That was definitely heroic and, if I may say so, romantical of you. Well done.” While he shoots her what is meant to be a congratulatory grin, Pam stares down at the teal glass shards in her laps, still clutching the ice pack, trying desperately to pretend that the tears have stopped.
Post-Cocktails.
HOLY CRAP! This was fantastic! I loved every word that Pam said to Jim--she's soooo right and I'm pissed at Jim that he tried to hurt her so badly
I hope he feels like crap for a good long time...and I'm more than a little worried about Pam right now--update soon!!
That was fantastic!!! I'm so thoroughly addicted already! I can't wait to see where you go with this (at least I hope it wasn't a one parter--there's no little 'Yes' next to 'Completed' so I can only hope that that means you plan to continue....)
The emotions and detail you put into this were really amazing--it was heartbreaking, but oh so good---please continue!!
Pam moves to New York for 3 months and finds herself
This is great---I would love to see Pam get a second shot at that opporutnity on the show! Can't wait for more
Post The Negotiation (no spoilers).
My attempt at working it all out. This will span ten chapters and will include flashbacks to previous episodes/seasons.
I can't wait for the next chapter!! I'm so sorry that Pam is going through this agony, but at least she realizes that Jim had to deal with this too--hopefully the letter warms him up a bit!
Author's Response:
I know; I'd really love to see/hear Pam articulate on the show that she realizes in full what he went through. I do feel for her, because the poor girl has had her share of heartbreak this season as well...
Thanks again for the review!
Just finished chapter6 and that was amazing! That break room scene broke my heart and you just broke it all over again...off to read the next one!!
Author's Response:
I never know what to say when reviewers tell me I broke their heart, because it just seems mean to respond, "Yay! I broke your heart!" (I'm totally kidding.) I'm glad it moved you, because that scene was one of the catalysts for this fic, actually.
Thanks for reviewing!
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