He should've been happy that Karen had finally warmed up to his joking ways. He wasn't.Pam's MySpace name is pure brilliance. Love the internet flirting, and how they both mention Legally Blonde. Can't wait to read more.
Another beyond excellent chapter. The flirting and the cuteness is killing me. This is hilarious, especially this line: you can tell the difference because all my sex invitations are printed on ivory vellum and come with a pressed flower in the envelope
Hehe!
So perfect- loved how Pam was both shy and teasing, and how Jim just sat when she ordered him to, like a dog, and just all of it.
WOW. Very interesting and original idea, and powerfully written.
Excellent. Really moving and well-written.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
Sometimes Ryan and Kelly talk about babies. Okay... a lot of times. Excuse my language, but that would be a fucking hot baby.
Hehe! Yes, it would. Another great fic- you're single-handedly turning me into a Ryan/Kelly fan.
5 chapters tell 50 Ways that Pam seduces Jim.
The Bird's Eye Peas part is so funny- it's just like Michael to fall for something dumb and then hold a whole conference about it. Also, loved this sentence, in particular: Jim loses his train of thought and doesn’t make the sale. He’s okay with that.
Can't wait to read more!
Aww. This is incredibly sweet andwell-written. I love this line, especially: "freedom of being in love with him and not just being in love"-- the distinction is excellent. Great job!
So well-written and in-character. I love this line in particular: She stops nagging him about joining her at church, hoping that maybe if she just keeps him in her prayers while she's there they will still be able to be together when this is all over.
The idea of Angela loving Dwight enough to want to be with him in the afterlife is just adorable.
In the interest of honesty, I humbly propose some new warnings and disclaimers for rated MA fanfic.
ROUND ROBIN: any writer can add a chapter! What do YOU think our readers should be warned about? Oh, and remember to put your name on your chapter so we can offer you appropriate adulation.
WARNING: Normal humans don't bend this way.
Hehe! Hilarious.
"You are now leaving the world of fact and reason. "
Hehe! Hilarious.
WARNING: This is not Scrubs fanfic. At no point will Jim become totally emo, move to New Jersey, hit on Natalie Portman, and do whatever he can to distance himself from Dunder-Mifflin for a lucrative movie career.
Oh, awesome. ZB can be such a tool...
More on topic- this is hilarious, please write more!
Amazing. I love how Ryan gets tangled into the Jim/Pam drama, not b/c he actually wants to or cares but b/c he's slowly being sucked into the Office environment and he doesn't have the desire/strength to fight it. Loved the Ryan/Kelly in the kitchen, with the parellels b/w his babbling and Kelly's. And the string cheese! And giving Pam the photo! And Ryan getting all kinds of action! Awesome.
No matter how much this couple is perfect for each other, they are bound to have flaws. Jim and Pam head to marriage counseling, and learn to deal with their issues in a semi adult manner.
I love this story so much. I can really imagine Pam wanting them to go to counseling at the first sign of trouble, b/c they both waited so long for this relationship and neither wants it to ever end. I love the jealousy over the exes, and their lists in the last chapter were excellent- a great miz of minor complaints and genuine concerns that suit their characters perfectly. And don't even get me started on how spot-on the Jam interactions are! I think I love this chapter the best, though, b/c it seems oddly reminiscent of Casino night- Jim doesn't get the answer he wants right away and he has to leave. It's a frustrating character trait and I'm glad you're addressing it. Can't wait to see where this story goes!
"Jim, you also have to extend an olive branch to your brother in law."
"I did, and he tried to break it."
Hehe. Snarky!Jim is hilarious. I think this might be my favorite chapter. I really like the idea of certain members of Pam's family not liking Jim- it's not something I've ever thought about, but it makes perfect sense that Pam's family would grow attached to Roy after 10 years and wouldn't be very eager to get to know Jim. And I love how they turned the scavenger hunt into a competition- reminds me of 'The Fire' and their Deserted Island game. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Another awesome chapter. The doc wanting to start a slow clap is hilarious. Loved this line, in particular: "P.S. I hope you didn't think I literally put my heart in the teapot. That's gross Beesley. I love you. Just had to say it again"
AWESOME, especially the last part. I love how Ryan gets lumped in with the women of the office, and how it's Creed hitting on him that finally makes him snap. And how Kelly doesn't want to learn about her culture and Jan's curt ""just... no. Please, please just go." So great.
Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much!
Jim, Pam and a weekend in New York - set in the fluffy future. Not a spoiler in sight.
"You think that's sexy - wait till I tell you about Cubism."
He steps back, seemingly horrified. "Pam. We're in public. Control yourself please."
Tee hee! Awesome- sweet but not overly fluffy. Can't wait to read more.
sweet but not overly fluffy
Always my hope and intention Rowena. Thanks so much!!
"Beesly. Behave. You're insulting our good friend Gloria here."
Could Jim *be* any more adorable in this story? [/Chandler] Great chapter.
Summer picnics, maps, rain...things change year to year. (No spoilers.)*Love* the image of them in the care with their hair blowing and Jim singing goofily. And everything's all warm and free....until she goes back home to Roy. Such a great start!
Author's Response: Yay..hoped that carefree summer feeling would come across. And yes, it all kind of grinds to a halt when she goes back to her 'real life.' Thanks so much, Rowena.
You trust they know the way, because you’re not sure how to get home from here.
*such* a great way to convey how lost Pam is at this stage in her life. another great chapter.
You’re not microscopic anymore. You are here.
Besting ending ever. Seriously, this fic is awesome.
There will be other picnics.
Heh. Excellent ending to a great story.
This is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.Awesome, from start to finish. Love how Dwight knows that Angela won't respond, the way Ryan is alternately bored and jaded by his marriage with Kelly, the make-up making out, Jim not knowing when their first date technically was...all of it. Can't wait to read more!
" Maybe there’s something in the office water cooler, or maybe they just don’t get out much."
Hehe. So true.
(Commercial) Tonight on COPS, the Scranton P.D. deals with a drunk driver who has lost more than his sobriety. (Footage of Todd Packer with no pants on, handcuffed and bent over a police car)
(Todd Packer) (Slurring) “Ociffer, I’m not drunk. I don’t (bleep) care what your (bleep) brefalizer says. I just had a couple of cocktails. Hey, where are my (bleep) pants? Did you take my pants? What are you, some sort of (bleep) queer?
Awesome. Such a hilarious fic.
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