Penname: thedominantmalekitty Real name: Rachel
Member Since: March 16, 2007

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Summary: Past Featured Story

Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40335 Read Count: 157493 ePub Downloads: 42
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: April 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: How is New York?

I'm really enjoying this story.  I like the complexity that you have created here, with Pam and her dad not having had the ideal "Daddy's little girl" relationship.  I also really enjoy your writing style.  The paragraph where Pam watches the firefly that turns into her father's cigarette is just beautiful. I'm looking forward to more!

Summary:

Sometimes a cheeseburger is worth waiting for. Based on "His Cheeseburger" over at YouTube.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99 Read Count: 2066 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 01, 2007
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: His Precious Cheeseburger

Love it!  Love the song, love the video, love the drabble.  Now excuse me while I run to youtube to watch it again.  You made my night!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it! Perhaps I'll watch the video again, if only to laugh at Karen being compared to Denny's, which is hysterical.

Summary: What happens after the documentary airs and all the Dunder-Mifflinites are bitten by the acting bug?
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1645 Read Count: 34279 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2007 Updated: December 05, 2007
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: December 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Pam and Jim

I. AM. IN. LOVE. WITH. YOU. That was glorious! I can't even tell you what my favorite part was.  Toby? Daryl? Kelly? God, I wish they were all real and this all really happens.

Lets get married, k? 



Author's Response: What would your Aunt Judy say?
Thanks for all the love, you are dawesome.

Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: December 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Kelly

Forgot to mention Ryan and Jay Leno, the douche tagteam.

Again, the love- just in case you forgot. 



Author's Response: I never forget your love! The douche tagteam is one I'd like to punt into the ocean, but at least Ryan will likely go through some sort of redemption.

Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184376 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hope everything is going ok for you! I miss this, and Gifts, and hope you are able to write more soon! This is one of my favorite WIPs:)

Author's Response: Hi, tdmk!  Somehow I missed this comment.  Thanks for leaving a little reminder.  I will get back to it soon.  You know I did finally finish Gifts.  I guess writers like me are the reason some people refuse to read WIPs!  Thanks for keeping up with mine.

Summary: Three years have passed since 'Casino Night'. Jim didn't return to Scranton and Pam has left Dunder Mifflin behind. With more than just an ocean separating them, Jim and Pam struggle to find their way back to each other.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: David Wallace, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37585 Read Count: 23388 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2009
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: June 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Landing in London

Ohh, I love this! I recently got back from my first trip to London, so these places are very clear in my mind and fun to read about! (Camden Town was my favorite!)

Author's Response: Thanks, the dominantmalekitty. I used to live about 15 mins walk from Camden Town and it was just my most favourite place to hang out on a Sunday afternoon. I loved the markets, the creperie stall (probably more than was healthy)and just the buzz of the place. I miss it. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.\r\nBA\r\nx

Summary:

I cannot wait to visit Ryan in prison. I'm gonna wear my hottest track suit, and get my hair done, and then be like, "Hi Ryan."

Kelly visits Ryan in prison. Post Good-Bye Toby.


Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2289 Read Count: 2937 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2008 Updated: June 07, 2008
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I was nowhere near your neighborhood....

You did such a good job with Kelly's voice. I think it can be a really hard character to capture, but I really could hear her in my head saying this dialogue. Nice job!

Oh, also, the story itself was really cute and funny! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I was really worried about capturing Kelly here.  It was hard to strike the right balance for Kelly (she's a tough one, I think) so I'm glad that it came across as believable to you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, thedominantmalekitty.

Summary: "She sits in a cramped bathroom stall alone and cries in relief when the negative sign appears."


Five times Pam thinks she's pregnant.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2033 Read Count: 3092 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: August 29, 2008
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: August 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: How are you feeling?

I really liked this! You write Pam very well!

Summary: The branch scores a trip to Walt Disney World, thanks to an amazing deal by Michael (and a semi-plausible explanation by Little Comment!). Same office workers, new place...hijinx a-go-go.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Andy, Angela, Angela/Andy, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Ensemble, Holly, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kelly/Darryl, Kevin, Meredith, Oscar, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: Humor, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62605 Read Count: 75094 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2008 Updated: October 13, 2008
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: September 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this! Your enthusiasm for Disney and your story is infectious and cute! Also, anytime anyone mentions anything Mi/Detroit related I get major dorky excited, so bonus points for the Tigers hat! 

Author's Response: Thanks so very much! And as a Michigander (Michigoose?), myself, I\'ve gotta throw a not-so-subtle shoutout in there every now and then. If only that shoutout had helped our Tigres have a better season...grr... :)

Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVED. Wow! I think I only reviewed once, but I want you to know that I really enjoyed this story. For me, it was one of those where I would get that happy excited feeling every time I saw it updated. Well done! And very fun! And I think Judy is one of my all time favorite AU characters.

I'm glad you clearly had as much fun writing this as I had reading it! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much; what a kind review! I had a BLAST writing this - it\'s hands-down my favorite piece I\'ve ever written (quite frankly it makes me want to throw in the towel!), and it brings me no small amount of joy when others have fun with it too! I\'m so pleased you liked Judy...she\'s no Jonathan, but she\'s got spunk. ;) Thanks again!!!

Summary: Our favorite couple makes some long-term plans. Set shortly after Goodbye Toby, and about as fluffy as cotton candy. Cross-posted on FF.net, so don't make the mistake of reading this hasty oneshot twice!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1593 Read Count: 3920 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2008 Updated: September 06, 2008
Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10
Date: September 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That dog is too cute. I am being such a girly squeeling girl right now. Also really cute? This story!

I really like how you have Jim continuing to play his game throughout the beginning of this. So often Jim is painted as the Superman boyfriend, completely in tune with everything Pam might be thinking or needing. You have him as a real guy- someone who would keep playing his video game while his girlfriend hems and haws. But ofcourse someone willing to stop immediately when he knows she needs him to.

Did that make sense? Well anyhow, I like it! 



Author's Response: Thank you!! I\'m really glad you noticed that about Jim; I don\'t like when he\'s portrayed so unbelievable like that, so I tried here to make him as real as possible. Like, he knew she wanted to tell him something, but he wasn\'t going to push the issue unless he could tell she really wanted to talk. So glad you liked it!!