Penname: bitterpill Real name: Jennifer
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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Summary: Past Featured StoryThe rain outside is drumming on the roof of her car and she loves it, hates it, doesn’t understand what’s happening but god, it feels good to do something unexpected.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2401 Read Count: 6774 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2007 Updated: January 29, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: January 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is just gorgeous.  Imagery, feelings....it's all right there.  Wonderful work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I really appreciate it. :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe sun is too bright when he opens his eyes.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, In Stamford, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1085 Read Count: 5743 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this!  Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Happy to hear you enjoyed it. :)

Flawless by SixFlightsUp Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 4
Summary: All of a sudden the sky was violet and the grass was red. Dwight was pleasant and you knew nothing.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 492 Read Count: 1975 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very emotional and beautifully written.  Loved the ending.

Author's Response: I'm glad you did! Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Written in response to the Evening Coming (aka the Scarf) challenge. Not usually one for prompts, but this one got me thinking.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Evening Coming
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1499 Read Count: 7972 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2007 Updated: February 03, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd have to quote the whole thing to express the love I have for this.  Amazing.

Author's Response: I really appreciate this, bitterpill. Means a lot.

Summary:

It's Valentine's Day.  Pam has something to tell Jim.  Wishful thinking - S3 per usual. :)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 368 Read Count: 4091 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2007 Updated: February 06, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Be Mine

Really wonderful.  You conveyed so much emotion.  Would love to see this on screen.

Author's Response: Oh yeah - bitterpill - me too.  I'm so glad you liked it!

Summary: Past Featured StoryA proposal. Pure fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2586 Read Count: 8900 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2007 Updated: February 11, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.

This was really beautiful and very hot.  Lovely proposal.  Wonderful job. 

Summary:

When you tell me your plan, a giggle laced through your words, I have to work hard to concentrate...

A companion piece to the parking lot had an element of danger. Title taken from "Lion's Mane" by Iron & Wine. Spoilers through The Return.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1972 Read Count: 2584 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2007 Updated: February 07, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: the earth is warmer when you laugh

Okay...this is unbelievable.  Sweet, sad, romantic.  Them.  Wonderful job.  Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you, bitterpill!

Summary: Silence and pinkies begin them.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237 Read Count: 2895 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2007 Updated: February 07, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Guh.  That elevator is one of my favorite places, and, once they are together, I'm sure it will be just as sweet and romantic for them.  Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Pam does create honest art...and she gets the courage to show it to Jim.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 747 Read Count: 2649 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: February 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really beautiful work.  The emotions and images are all right there.  Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured StoryFluff of the fluffiest order.  Jim and Pam move in together.  Set in S3 (fingers crossed) LOL!  NO SPOILERS AT ALL
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4018 Read Count: 6346 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Two's Company...

This was wonderful and so needed!  Great dialogue and a real sense of how good they will be for each other when they finally start a romantic relationship.  Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks bitterpill.  Happy to oblige.  I do believe they will be just this way when it happens. 

Fingers crossed it "happens" soon!!

That Night by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 57] 31
Summary: Past Featured StoryBefore, during, after (peas, waffles.) Post-Cocktails...but no fighting.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3232 Read Count: 13903 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  Never doubt your ability to deliver the goods.  This was such a release...all the anger, miscommunication, and sadness topped with a healthy dose of steam with heart.  Beautiful job, as always.

Author's Response: Yes! Steam with heart is so what I was after. And yeah, there needs to be a counter balance to all the misery eventually.Thanks for this, bitterpill!

Summary: A short example of the type of literary masterpiece that suits the new "Bad Fanfic" challenge. Please enjoy the glory of this great work of art.
Categories: Other, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 4115 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Abomination of the written word.

Hilarious!  Too many great lines to quote.  Brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I confess that I snorted aloud more than once while writing it.

Summary: Past Featured StoryMEMBER'S CHOICE - It's Michael's Birthday.  Pam remembers.  It's a whole lot different than it was just a year ago.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: let?s celebrate birthday month in style today.
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 887 Read Count: 5200 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2007 Updated: March 16, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: MandMs, Cup of Noodles, Fabric Softener....

You killed me(in a good way)throughout, and then revived me with "such a dork."  Beautiful, sad, and so well done. 

Author's Response:

That was the plan bitterpill.  So glad it worked!

Thanks so much!

Summary: Jim. Pam. Hotel room. Set at some point in the not too distant future.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1443 Read Count: 13810 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet, funny, and oh so hot.  Wonderful job, as usual.

Summary: Five loosely connected conversations, at various milestones in a relationship. Light, happy and a little spicy.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3116 Read Count: 25602 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2007 Updated: March 20, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: The Good Kind of Pain

Oh, Colette.  Just gorgeous.  It's so enjoyable to read them being a couple and growing as people.  Thanks for all of these wonderful conversations.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed them. Once in a while I owe them a story where they get to be happy! Thanks so much, bitterpill!

Summary:

Story formerly known as Spring Cleaning.  When he realizes she's asking him a serious question there is not even a moment’s hesitation before he answers.  “Sure.  What do you need?”  Future fluff.  Spoiler free, non-fat, as light as airy spun sugar. ;)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21874 Read Count: 34788 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2007 Updated: July 30, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: You can bury a lot of troubles digging in the dirt.

This is insanely sweet and hot.  Jim with the picking up and the dropping on the bed and the undressing?  Yeah, I'll take one of those!  Wonderful job:)

Author's Response: Seriously.  That image has haunted me for days.  So glad you liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She looked over the boxes with wide eyes, overwhelmed by all the choices. Words like clear and easy were jumping out at her and she had no idea what to do because this was the furthest thing from clear or easy that she had ever done.

Title Courtesy of a Muse song.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2591 Read Count: 5055 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2007 Updated: March 30, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: March 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really beautiful.  You captured the emotions perfectly and made me long for these two to get it together already and make some babies.



Author's Response:

I know!  As much as I love reading fic where they're together, I'd give up reading for a month (okay, maybe a week) if they'd just get it together on the show.  

Thanks so much for reviewing.   

Summary:

Post The Negotiation (no spoilers).

My attempt at working it all out. This will span ten chapters and will include flashbacks to previous episodes/seasons.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Darryl, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Roy, Toby
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36956 Read Count: 86628 ePub Downloads: 27
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 27, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a treat to see a new story by you!  Looking forward to more after such a wonderful start.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Hopefully I'll have the next chapter posted soon.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love a good cliffhanger!  Nice send off for Roy.  Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response:

Man, I am just aching over Roy; he killed me in that scene when he went to pick up his paycheck...guh. 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

My brain is broken.  The emotions are raw, the sex quite steamy and the grief bone kicked.  Amazing, as always.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! 

Summary: Karen doesn't date salesmen...
Categories: Other, Past
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: In Stamford, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1008 Read Count: 3619 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 11, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really well done.  I enjoyed the style and thought it was a good look into Karen.

Author's Response: thanks!!

Summary:

Over a year after Casino Night, Jim is really happy with Karen. But when Pam finally confesses her feelings to Jim, is it too late for them?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3950 Read Count: 11618 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2007 Updated: April 30, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Nothing Casual About It

I'm hooked!  Wonderful job, as always.



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Summary: Past Featured StoryGould won't... communicate with Jan. Five conversations that answer the question: Why Michael?

Categories: Other
Characters: Michael/Jan
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 662 Read Count: 2244 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really wonderful.  I think your version of Gould is spot on.  Glad to see a new story from you:)



Author's Response:

Just watch -- Gould is going to show up, and he'll be a sweet little lamb. And I will feel so bad for the libelous things I have written about him.

Oy, I'm so pokey with stories.  Swedge kinda poked me until I did this.

Friday by hoosabrat Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 7
Summary: Yesterday Pam's calendar revealed a startling possibility that could change her life forever. Today she deals with the consequences. General season 3 spoilers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5396 Read Count: 3584 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2007 Updated: April 17, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: April 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Friday

This is so good.  Seriously good.  The flashbacks worked beautifully.  Perfect execution!

You Make Me Shake by Swedge Rated: K+ [Reviews - 11] 1
Summary: Michael works on a new impression
Categories: Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 593 Read Count: 2115 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2007 Updated: April 18, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: April 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You Make Me Shake

This is absolutely hilarious.  Great job.