Penname: invis Real name: April
Member Since: March 26, 2007

Bio:

I thought I was just here to read, but I guess I ended up writing a little. My bad. :)

I'm switching to Yes on beta-reader, because I should have more time now that I've finished my own recent story and I'll probably take a break from writing. I don't know how many requests will come from that, so I reserve the right to change back to No if I get overwhelmed. :) But I am an unrepentant grammar Nazi, and have edited a LOT in the past, so I'm totally up for a little beta.


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Summary: Post-'Negotiation', spoilers through it. Jim's fed up, Pam's a little pathetic. Jim POV.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4330 Read Count: 12167 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
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Date: April 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: It Will Only Make Me Colder

Whoa.  Angry!Jim has the mad skillz, huh?  I hope Pam wakes up and tells him she loves him soon.  It's not like her to punish him for so long.

Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE - "Here’s the thing Jim, sometimes being in love means doing things you don’t want to do for the other person. For you, right now, it means just being her friend. And I think you’re selling yourself short, you are strong enough to do this."

Jim gets some much needed advice about Pam and a little push in the right direction from Mark's girlfriend Jane. Spoilers through the Negotiation.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Other
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27221 Read Count: 72144 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2007 Updated: September 22, 2007
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Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Roy did What? What did Pam Say?

They definitely need some cheese fries.  As I understand it, it's the only way men can talk about their feelings.


Author's Response: Cheese fries or wings.  That's the drill I think.  :-)  Thanks for the review!

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Date: April 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Don't Blame Me, Blame the Alcohol!

Okay, Jane is my new best friend.  I love that girl, telling Jim to grow a pair.  LOL!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I picture her something like Ainsley Hayes from the West Wing or a good friend of mine from High School who was definitely spunky.  But she tells it like it is our Jane, and he does need a grow a pair.  :-)

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Date: April 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Jim, Why on Earth Did You Act Like That?

I love Jane, with her "I'm scrappy" and her "She keeps not choosing you?"  She's fun, she's got a good sense of humor, and she's uber-perceptive.  I think I want to be her BFF.  ;)

Author's Response: Hee Hee Yes I think Jim needs a Jane in his life.... don't we all?  Yes I think I love her too!   Thanks for the review, hopefully I can update soon......

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Slow Down Kelly (TWSS)

Aw!  Yes, yes, yes, Jim!  Get her back!  Even if you have to go to Starbucks--ANY MEANS NECESSARY, you hear me?  :)


Author's Response:

Oh he will, I'll make him.  Or Jane will.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: May 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Coffee Tea or Me?

Awwwwwwww--Supportive!Jim.  I love that guy.

This was freakin' awesome:

Then of course his mind slipped into thinking about how he could get children that looked like Pam.

What a perfectly Jim thing for him to think - LOL! 

Very, very sweet chapter.  I love Jim in this.  Of course, I love Jim in anything.  Shirt and tie, no shirt or tie, tie but no pants, swimming in a pool of tapioca pudding...you name it. 



Author's Response: Yeah normally I love Jim too, although his is pushing me right now.  I mean c'mon.  But it was fun to write something where Jim cares about Pam again.  And ok course he more than cares, so he might entertain a dirty thought here and there ;-)  Thanks for the review!

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Date: May 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: New York Minute

I love Jim's CN confession being turned back on him in the breakup with Karen.  But it's fitting.  Yes, NBC, do that, why don't ya?

I also appreciate that Jim didn't immediately go to Pam after breaking up with Karen.  That would be a bit tacky, considering what we know he wants from her, as far as a relationship.  If they were the kind of friends who talked about their significant others, that'd be one thing, but since they don't, I think it's the right decision not to call her right away.  But the next day?  Totally.  :) 



Author's Response: Of course he's gonna talk to her the next day.  Did you like how they did do it on the Office, I really liked it.  Understated but lovely.

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Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: That's What Friends Do

Hooray for movie night with Jim & Pam!!!  And I'm pretty sure Pan's Labyrinth will make them take the leap.  If ever there's a movie that makes you appreciate your own life, it's that one!  :)  (Awesome movie, by the way.)

Author's Response: It is a terrific movie.  I am really loved writing them just talking and being there for each other, probably because I've missed it this season.  Thanks for the review.  BTW, you have very cool websites!

Summary: Title says it all.

Categories: Future
Characters: Other, Todd Packer
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 975 Read Count: 1256 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
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Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And that? Is the best end I can imagine for Todd Packer. Bravo.

Summary: "I'm going to play a prank on Dwight, he's frustrating me today."
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Karen
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1000 Read Count: 2159 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2007 Updated: April 11, 2007
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Date: April 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Way To End It

Haaaaa!  Okay, yeah, that was kind of mean about tasering Karen, but you know on some level she deserved it.  And the prank was hilarious.

Summary: Not everything that Michael sends out is spam...

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2233 Read Count: 3959 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2007 Updated: April 12, 2007
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Date: April 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Subject: RE: RE: RE: RE: 25 (actually 23) Relationship Questions

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!  That was the best email forward I've ever read.  LOL!


Author's Response: LOL. I'm happy if you're happy. And by that squee, I'm going to get that you're happy.

Summary: Past Featured StoryFive first kisses and one hundredth one...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Prior Meeting
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2592 Read Count: 22472 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2007 Updated: April 12, 2007
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Date: April 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.  That was so good I can't stand it.  So utterly sweet.  What a perfect first-kiss story for them!


Author's Response: Thanks! And isn't it just like them to have several "first" kisses? They never do anything the normal way. Of course, that's probably because they're fictional characters on a tv show... I keep forgetting that minor detail.

Summary: Jim has learned a lot of little things from all of his big sisters.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 527 Read Count: 2830 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2007 Updated: April 12, 2007
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Date: April 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Life's Little Lessons

That was perfect.  Just like our Jim, the boy with a thousand sisters.  ;)


Author's Response: Thanks! I wish there were a thousand Jims...

Summary: Thankfully, Jim pays attention when Toby gives seminars. Takes place during "Safety Training" mild spoilers. Pure smut, no talking, no angst...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1772 Read Count: 10891 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2007 Updated: April 13, 2007
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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: This is not a toy

Haaaaa!  "This is not a toy."  "Actually, it is a toy."  LOL!

That was fabulous.  I thought it was just going to be the one chapter for some reason, but I'm pleasantly surprised to get another one.  And how much do we love the moon bounce?   



Author's Response: I thought it would only be one too, but like Jim said I couldn't let that bounce house go to waste!! 

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Toby's not totally useless...

That's a hell of a lot better than a brisk walk around the block.  No wonder Jim got that promotion.  He's always looking out for the welfare of the team.

Author's Response:

of course he is! He's a brilliant man

:) 

Summary: Human love is such an interesting topic of study. Some talk about X-Files inspired this crazy idea which could only be called Bad!Fanfic.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1032 Read Count: 1376 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2007 Updated: April 13, 2007
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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bwah ha ha ha ha!  Great badfic.  I love it.  Angela, an alien!  LOL!


Author's Response: It could explain a lot, no?! ;)

Summary:

What can you do, she thought.  That’s Michael.  He was ready to celebrate because while up on the roof, he had stared death right in the eyes, and death blinked.  This called for a celebration.    ....pure fluff.  SPOILERS for SAFETY TRAINING.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1515 Read Count: 10413 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2007 Updated: April 13, 2007
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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww!  Okay, I can forgive them for jumping in the moon bounce--even though it's made for children and not adults--since it's led to this.  :)

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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So sweet!  Update soon, please.  I can't wait to read the chapter where Jim double-bounces Pam.  ;)

Summary: Post Safety Training. Moon bounce fic.

Categories: Past, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1790 Read Count: 4272 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2007 Updated: April 13, 2007
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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

TGFTMBS!  (Thank God For The Moon Bounce Story)

I said on LJ last night that if someone didn't immediately write a moon bounce story, I was going to die.  Thankfully, I did not have to cross over at this time.  Woo!

Loved this.  I actually like that you didn't end it on a blissful note, because that way it can work into the canon of the show.  I can always imagine that this is exactly how it really happened, without having to write off anything in the show.  Great job.

And I LOVE this part:

“So I think the point of the moon bounce is to bounce…”

“Oh, really? They’re not meant for just standing awkwardly like this? Huh.” 

So great!  LOL! 

Summary:

Pam and Jim are getting to be friendly again, and engage in a little instant messaging.

Post-Safety Training


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5267 Read Count: 19513 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2007 Updated: April 15, 2007
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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Friendly Flirtations

Ooooooooh.  You must update this soon, because I love it.  Especially "that's what she said."  Hee!


Author's Response: Will do!

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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Ahem, Moving On...

BAH HA HA HA HA HA:

wait is this a SEXUAL fantasy, beesly? i'm appalled! here i was thinking there'd be unicorns! this is highly unprofessional.

Unicorns!  I love Jim.  I also love the chapter ending.  That was fabulous.  Such a fun story!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: This Is Going to Be a Long Day...

Ooooooh, Pam!  You little minx!  Hee.  I love it.


Author's Response: I think Pam needs to let out her inner-minx...

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chinese Food and Other Things

Hee!  "I'll blow you first and then we can cuddle."  Aw, it's so romantic.  ;)

Summary:

Post-Safety Training. Pam accidentally eavesdrops on a conversation between Jim and Karen. It only hurts when I laugh…


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 886 Read Count: 3045 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2007 Updated: April 13, 2007
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Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i wanna see it from space

Potty-mouth Pam??  Ha!  Unexpected, but then if I saw Karen and Jim kissing, I'd say that, too.  Poor Pam.  :(


Author's Response: =] Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

Summary:

Over a year after Casino Night, Jim is really happy with Karen. But when Pam finally confesses her feelings to Jim, is it too late for them?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3950 Read Count: 11626 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2007 Updated: April 30, 2007
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Date: April 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Alive Again

Sigh.  I am so ridiculously happy.