Penname: invis Real name: April
Member Since: March 26, 2007

Bio:

I thought I was just here to read, but I guess I ended up writing a little. My bad. :)

I'm switching to Yes on beta-reader, because I should have more time now that I've finished my own recent story and I'll probably take a break from writing. I don't know how many requests will come from that, so I reserve the right to change back to No if I get overwhelmed. :) But I am an unrepentant grammar Nazi, and have edited a LOT in the past, so I'm totally up for a little beta.


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Summary: Pam announces her pregnancy. The reactions are...typical.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 423 Read Count: 6607 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2007 Updated: September 04, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed 8
Date: September 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Congratulations!

Michael's "real" comments at the end just about made me cry.  I mean, sure, I have my period, but still.  But still!  Great little story.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.


Author's Response:

Hee, I guess I only get credit for some of the emotions, then- thank your hormones for me! I'm glad you enjoyed this little peek into DM life.  Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam had gone along with Michael and Dwight to the convention? Was she ready to see Jim? Was Jim ready to face Pam?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29494 Read Count: 130851 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2007 Updated: September 29, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Don't you know it's the same sad situation?

Ooh, thank you for updating again so soon - and I'm just selfish enough to beg you to continue the trend.  :)


Author's Response: I'm going to give it a try. If not, please be patient with me. The next chapter is a doozie.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Bloodhounds On Your Mind

:(

Do we get any cheer next chapter?  Pleeeeease?  Or maybe a huge fight that leads to sex up against a wall.  Either way.  ;) 



Author's Response: Have you been reading my outline? I'm getting there...but there's a little more angst to go.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Doin’ Time in a Lonesome Prison, Where the Sun Don’t Shine

I LOVE Michael and Dwight's talking heads.  SO excellent.  You do a fabulous job with characterization.  I could picture all of this.  Great job.


Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the talking heads. I tucked them on at the last minute and wasn't sure they went. Thanks again!

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: I've Run Just As Far As I Can Run

Ooh, assertive Jim is fun.  :)


Author's Response: Yes he is...and according to Pam...kind of a turn on.  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Muddy River Runs So Deep

OMG.  I don't know whether I love you or hate you.  I thought we were gonna get that screw up against the wall, but noooooo.  Humph!

But, regardless, you had so many great lines in this that I can't fault you for furthering the fight for a while--as long as it's not permanent!

This was harsh, but so good:

“You told me you were going to marry Roy. What was I supposed to do? Walk you down the aisle?”

Excellent chapter.  Again!  No, please let's move on to the consummation part, hmm?  ;) 



Author's Response: I honestly wanted wall-sex too. It just didn't happen. Thanks so much for your review and I'll try to get us all to the consummation part ASAP.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: What You Get Is Not Quite What You Choose

Oh, Jim.  I'm so sad for him right now!  We need that happy ending: STAT!  :)

Summary: How Pam tells Jim.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50 Read Count: 5510 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2007 Updated: September 07, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw.  That was totally sweet.  :)


Author's Response: hehe.. thanks! glad you enjoyed!

Summary:

Pam's fears are getting the better of her.

For the Pam's Pregnancy challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 856 Read Count: 5971 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2007 Updated: September 09, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hee.  Oh, Michael. 

Such a sweet story.  I just loved the heck out of it.  What a way to start the day.  :) 



Author's Response: You are too kind!  So glad it worked for you:)  Oh, Michael, indeed! 

Summary: 55-words on what happens when different Dunder-Mifflin employees get drunk.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Overheard, 55, Kelly's Revenge, 55: The Kandy Edition, Drunk Michael
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2606 Read Count: 147873 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2007 Updated: April 11, 2008
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Jim

Ha ha ha ha ha!  Excellent.


Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Angela

Ha ha ha ha ha!  Yeah, a little creepy, but totally worth it.


Author's Response: Yeah, its not as creepy as Dwight's at least. Angela represses a lot, I think. Thanks for the review invis.

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Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Michael

OMG!  That was brilliant.


Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for the review invis.

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Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Andy

LOL--oh, Andy Bernard.  I love you so.


Author's Response: I love Andy Bernard as well. Hope to see more of him in Season 4. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Dwight

Bwah ha ha ha ha ha!


Author's Response: It's either laugh or cry, right? I'm glad that chose the former, and that you left me a review, invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Creed

Creed.  Creed Creed Creed Creed Creed Creed Creeeeeed.  Such a character. I suspect he's almost always chemically altered in some way, but, dang, it makes for good entertainment.


Author's Response: He does. I racked my mind to try to show a difference between Drunk!Creed and normal Creed....and got pretty much nothing. Other then maybe he wouldn't put vodka in his pea soup. So there you go. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Stanley

Ha!  Yes, absolutely, Kelly.  Get your revenge!


Author's Response: I think Ryan is in for it when the season starts. Between Kelly and Michael....he's in trouble. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Toby I

No, Toby!  Don't do it!


Author's Response: I don't think he's got a choice. I do wonder what Pam would have said if he had asked her, especially if he had played it off as "friends" or something. Probably, would have still been a no. Anyway, thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Toby II

Fabulous.  Simply fabulous.  I know Toby has that in him--I just know it!


Author's Response: I figure you get a little Bombay Sapphire into Toby, and he's good for a prank. HR be damned. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Karen

Hee.  The only one I know is You Oughta Know, but I got the point.  Good for you, Karen.


Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to pick 3 songs of which everyone would probably know one. "You Oughta Know" is definitely the most well known. I wanted to put in Janis Joplin's "Take Another Piece of My Heart" but it was too long for 55 words. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Jim II

LOL!  Oh, Jim.  Such a mushy drunk.


Author's Response: Writing Jim like I did in the first one is fun, but I really like the idea that hes like Pam and is sort of the emotional/hugging kind of drunk. Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Jan

Aww.  Just admit your feelings, Jan!  It's not the worst thing in the world to love Michael Scott!  Okay, maybe it's the weirdest, but not the worst.

Author's Response: Yeah, weird definitely. But Jan is pretty weird, who knows what happened with Gould? Thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Kevin

LOL!  Excellent.


Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the review invis.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: September 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Roy

That was priceless.  But I like to think Pam was an animal with Roy after that basketball game...just happened to be imagining someone else.  [whistles innocently]

Author's Response: I completely agree, of course. Watching Jim run around obviously..."pre-heated the oven" so to speak. (that came out kinda sleazy.) Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it, and thank you for the review invis.

Summary: Jim and Pam plan on teaching Andy a lesson - but does it go as planned? A short story told in 55 word chapters.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Andy, Jim/Pam, Kelly
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1224 Read Count: 48695 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2007 Updated: September 11, 2007
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Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Spring Affair

There is no way this plan can fail.  Jam and Kandy all in one story?  Sweeeeeet.

Author's Response: haha - failing will probably be in the eye of the beholder!  Glad you like it so far!

Summary: It’s a lovely afternoon in New York for Jim and Karen – well, let’s face it, not that lovely. Rated T
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4154 Read Count: 4525 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2007 Updated: September 10, 2007
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Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Troubled the Water

OMG, you totally made me mad at Jim for choosing Pam!  You made me feel sorry for Karen--to a degree I've never experienced before.  Dang.  I mean, just...dang.


Author's Response: yes! mission accomplished :)\r\n\r\nthank you - i\'m glad you enjoyed both versions.