Penname: Mr Bill Real name: William Murphy
Member Since: April 28, 2007

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Wicked Jim by sachiel Rated: M [Reviews - 15] 10
Summary: It's winter, it's snowing. That doesn't stop them from going to work, and it doesn't stop Jim from being a bad boy.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1847 Read Count: 1994 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 05, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice to read another's take on what might happen between Jim and Pam during a snow storm!  

Summary: Just a Christmas party at Dunder Mifflin, back in the day before the camera crews began capturing every moment of their work lives.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1711 Read Count: 1568 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: July 05, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Good

Nicely done!  I really liked how you used the ring to symbolize Pam's confusion over her feelings. 

 



Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Summary: Passionate JAM one-shot. Set during Pam's time at Pratt - after a particularly long week.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221 Read Count: 1793 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Reunion Under the Spray

Very nice...very evocative!  Keep going! 

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing! makes my day. i\'ll update as soon as i can come up with a new idea - any suggestions?

Honeymoon by bkwrm Rated: MA [Reviews - 11] 6
Summary:

Jim and Pam honeymoon in Mexico. Lots of sun, sand, and.....what honeymooners do :D


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Romance, Steamy, Travel, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3011 Read Count: 8091 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: July 09, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Itty Bitty Black Bikini

Well, that certainly got the blood boiling...nice!  And, I sort of like "impetuous" Jim...and I kinda think Pam does too!  



Author's Response: Thank you Mr. Bill! I think you\'re right about Pam liking \"impetuous\" Jim :o)

Abeyance by callisto Rated: M [Reviews - 30] 24
Summary: The week after Beach Games. Jim has a decision to make.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5304 Read Count: 5640 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: we work our way around each other

"Please just give me a fucking sign."  Callisto...I like your style!  That was great!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mr Bill! Glad you liked it. :)

Summary: It was her first family event that she had been to in years. Ever since she and Roy split up, almost 3 years ago to date actually, she tended to stay clear from anyone but her immediate family’s parties. Tonight though, she was ready. She had a fiancĂ© now. One she was actually happy to call hers.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1093 Read Count: 2397 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: July 17, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Niiiice!  I always like the idea of Jim or Pam meeting each other's families and their reactions.



Author's Response: thanks. i always like reading fics where they met each others families too...if only there were more

Summary: In which Pam Beesly writes a weird, sort of stream of consciousness, rambling, silly, excessively mushy, and possibly out of character love letter to Jim while she is in New York.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 980 Read Count: 2094 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful...and oh so romantic!

Summary: The aftermath of Casino Night and what could have happened.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1550 Read Count: 2213 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Just Sorry

I really liked this:

 

"I don't know how to feel,"  she whispers to the sun... 

Very nice.



Author's Response: Thank you very much!!

Summary:

Jim and Pam want to try something new in the bedroom. Takes place between "Dinner Party" and "Goodbye Toby".


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Webcam
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3126 Read Count: 15355 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: August 02, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Idea

Was that a sly little gleam I saw in Pam's eye as she sauntered her way to the bedroom?  Oh....I think this is going to be verrrrry interesting! 

Author's Response: Darn...I want to steal that first line now, Mr. Bill. Jim & Pam + webcam = minds explode ;o) So yeah...I hope I won\'t disappoint! Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Idea

This story has sent a tingle of lusty anticipation down my spine...and it comes down to Jim hitting the wrong button...but Pam, that little vixen, won't let him erase it until they get to watch.  I love it!   

 

And, I especially liked this:  "The next few moments were a flurry of motions, frenzied hands touching everywhere, Jim's clothes tossed to the floor.  There were moans and gasps as the became impossibly lost in the touch and taste of each other." 

 

I love when Jim and Pam get "impossibly lost" in each other. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mr. Bill! I was planning something more...er...explicit than how this story ended but changed my mind because it might just be too explicit. So yeah...hope it wasn\'t too disappointing.

Summary:

Pam is five weeks away from her due date and Jim is there to help her get to the finish line.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Married
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9772 Read Count: 22946 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 35 Weeks on Friday

"Assistant to the pregnant person."  Okay, that just made my morning.  I just love the intimacy of this story...great job.  I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment.

Author's Response:

Wow! This coming from the fanfic writer that used to make many of my mornings with your "Why Albany in February is Like Paris in April".  I am honoured!

Thanks also for noticing the intimacy.  When my husband and I were having our first baby it really did feel like it was just the two of us against the world, so I am trying to portray that feeling.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.

Temper by jazzfan Rated: M [Reviews - 27] 15
Summary: Set directly after Casual Friday, Pam and Jim work through some misunderstandings and some formative events from Jim's past are revealed, resulting in some life changing consequences. Now complete.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Inner Monologue, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7698 Read Count: 8660 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: August 17, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Staple it Together and Call It Bad Weather

Just had a chance to read this last night....and, I don't know...but even "shrill" Pam makes me smile.  This is fun...great job! 

Author's Response: Mr.Bill, if I didn\'t know better I\'d think you have a thing for Pam. *grin* Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.

Reflections by shortlatte Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 12
Summary: How I imagined Jim and Pam's first date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2156 Read Count: 2573 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Exquisitely touching...well done!

Summary: Toby is dead! Secrets are revealed. Sex tapes. Blackmails. Office romances. A hidden motive and a suspect no one saw coming.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Horror, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8981 Read Count: 27595 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What the...?!?

This is really fun!  And I love that you've settled the Phyliis "one night stand" question that's sort of just lingered in the background of this show for way too long now!  Way to go!  Anxiously awaiting the next "clue". 

Author's Response: *high five* I knew I wasn't the only one who was bugged by Phyllis' "one night stand" comment that was never addressed again on the show so I figured, why not Toby? I mean, if I'm going to kill off the guy, might as well let him have some fun first ;o) Thank you!

Summary: Jim and Pam's reception and wedding night. No spoilers, because this won't be in canon. Just a piece of unabashed sap - you have been warned.

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Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Andy, Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Michael, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4149 Read Count: 2879 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What Are You Doing the Rest of Your Life

Jazzfan...Grandma Halpert...sharp as a tack and offering sage advice!  Will we something along these very lines?  Here's hoping!  Very poignant and so well done!

Author's Response: I had the best time writing Grandma Halpert, I admit it. I don't know where they'll go with the actual show, but it wouldn't disappoint me if Jim had a sharpie for a grandma. Very glad you liked it and thank you so much for your comments. Only a few weeks now...

Summary: An AU based on a scene in "Phyllis's Wedding" episode. Spoilers up to that episode. This is what might have happened if Jim would have gone after Pam after she saw him dancing with Karen.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5139 Read Count: 9397 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh what  might have been.  I remember having had such high hopes for something "happening" between Jim and Pam at Phyllis' wedding...something to get them back on the right track...and back to each other.  Something so much like what you have given us in this story.  Nice job! 

Narrative by yanana Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 10
Summary: I'm totally wiped out, and I'm so stalled with my other story, but this came out because I was extremely drunk and pretty much collapsed onto my bed and popped in Company Picnic. And the fluff just came out of that instantly.

Pam and Jim get to meet someone.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2347 Read Count: 3264 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What can I really add that hasn't already been said...beautiful...simply beautiful!  But I'd be totally remiss if I didn't acknowledge the absolute perfection of the sentiment that defines so much of what is wonderful about Jim Halpert...."That girl, your mom?  The one passed out over there?'  He smiles.  'Our whole thing in life. We just take care of her.  That's our girl, alright?"

That is just "emotionally magnificent" [/Michael Scott].



Author's Response: Haha, "emotionally magnificent." Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Summary: The obligatory JAM piece or a bad parody off my own story One Week (BadFic!)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Parody
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1127 Read Count: 1586 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh...that gave me a good laugh!

Author's Response: Aw, glad it did! Thanks! :)

Summary: Jim is out of work. Now complete.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Inner Monologue, Married
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9247 Read Count: 7715 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Here's That Rainy Day

Beautifully, beautifully done!  You had me scared there for awhile...but it all fell together, perfectly.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mr. Bill. Is it wrong I'm glad you were scared for a little while? Never fear, Jim and Pam will always fall together in the end. Your comments are very much appreciated, thanks for reading.

Summary: Some small moments that make parenthood totally worth it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1417 Read Count: 12769 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: September 27, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Spiderman Bandaids and Sloppy Kisses

Each little vignette is adorably heartwarming.  Nice job!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. So glad you liked!

Summary: “Do you remember how long it took you to teach me to drive a stick?”
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3520 Read Count: 4989 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I think it was the moon.

Charming!  The little details provide the perfectly subtle means to communicate the feelings stirring oh so close to the surface between these two.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's the little details I like to write the most. Glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Jim on his way back. Post Beach Games
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 944 Read Count: 3702 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Smiling like a crazy monkey

"Why did I try to move on if I knew, really knew, that I'd end up here again? In this same position. Ready to throw caution to the wind, to give up everything. All because I have another chance to have her."   Niiiiiice! 

We're all so glad Jim got the answer right.  Nice job!

Summary: A little fluffy ficlet about Jim and Pam and their nigh swimming in Bio Bay.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 496 Read Count: 3076 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2009 Updated: November 01, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Untold:  Great job!  I really liked this passage:  “You’re mine,” she says with disbelief in her voice. Your misbehaving mouth is smiling again and her fingertip has found that dimple in the left corner. She kisses you soundly, “My life, my family.” 

 

 

 

Summary: Jim tends to someone early in the morning.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 825 Read Count: 2811 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: November 09, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"...little buddy"...I liked that.  Jim's a great dad.  Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Us by bashert Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 6
Summary: Past Featured Story"She knows that she’s supposed to sleep when the baby sleeps, but she can’t help but sit and study tiny little fingernails, and the way her nose wrinkles up when she’s about to cry, and memorize the lines of her face."


Pure baby fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1056 Read Count: 3399 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: November 09, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: they made a statue of us

Very sweet and so nicely done.  How about a sequel for baby number two?