1 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2020 09:08 pm Title: The Secret
wow, i didn't know reading texts could make my heart wrench like this! great work!
Author's Response: Much belated response but Thank you!
Date: October 08, 2016 11:14 pm Title: The Secret
"You already do" ?! ugh, right in the feels... thanks :'(
Author's Response: Broke my heart to write that line, my poor bb Jim :'(
Date: August 16, 2008 08:32 pm Title: The Secret
I totally got you with aim =) As usual FAB!
Date: September 27, 2007 02:50 pm Title: The Secret
okay, seriously, i get back from test, and you break my heart with that last line. wow... wow.
Date: September 07, 2007 02:45 pm Title: The Secret
Oh, I LOVE the missed message at the end. Awww!
Author's Response: Yeah, I do as well. I like having my heart broken for some reason.
Date: September 06, 2007 12:41 am Title: The Secret
Oh, Jim! Weep!
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 09:48 pm Title: The Secret
I just discovered this story. It's fun to read and feels in character and in the spirit of the show. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Yay, thanks, that's what I'm aiming for.
Date: August 31, 2007 09:23 pm Title: The Secret
Wow. Until right now, I never really connected that Pam finds out that Jim has the crush, and the next episode, she's back from a week's vacation.
Um...she was sort of excited about the crush, and then he immediately told her he was totally over it. Then she has her big vacation with Roy, and perhaps throws herself into her relationship with Roy even more, with that little reminder that Jim's not her guy...
Am I making sense? Is this the way you are thinking as well?
Also, it's good you explained the old AIM business, because I never IMd back then...so I saw the "previous message" thing and thought - "wait she'll get that when she signs on!"
Good chapter!
Author's Response: I can see that being Pam's reasoning for going on vacation so early in the year, especially if we say Booze Cruise and The Secret happen back to back. Those were a couple of emotionally exhausting episodes for both of them and I can see Pam at least subconsciously thinking "I need to get away from this for a few days."
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2007 10:10 am Title: The Secret
Great ending... wow.
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2007 06:17 am Title: The Secret
Ohhh, I think my heart just broke a little.
Date: August 29, 2007 09:11 pm Title: The Secret
oh this chapter was so so sad! I wanna cry for poor Jim-Bag.
Date: August 29, 2007 07:44 pm Title: The Secret
WOW. Those last few lines changed this from a light, easy read (which is good) to a powerful piece of work. Good job. But poor Jim :(
Author's Response: Thank you very much
Date: August 29, 2007 06:35 pm Title: The Secret
Awwwww! Break my heart, why don't you!
Author's Response: Hey, it broke my own heart to write it. Ugh, these kids.
Date: August 29, 2007 06:32 pm Title: The Secret
oh ouch... Jim!!! Like talking to a dial tone.
Date: August 29, 2007 06:27 pm Title: The Secret
Oh Jim... the things we say when noone can hear us... sigh.
Date: August 29, 2007 05:43 pm Title: The Secret
Oh, break my heart, why don't you! Another great job of tapping into the Season 2 angst. I wonder if Roy really needed to use the computer or Pam just didn't want to hear what Jim had to honestly say. Great job as usual.
Author's Response:
Ah, well, I guess it's left up to your interpretation then . . .
Date: August 29, 2007 05:43 pm Title: The Secret
That ending make me gasp. Oh Jim!!!
Perfect.
Date: August 29, 2007 05:41 pm Title: The Secret
No need to explain, I totally got it, and sighed. Another great one! We're getting close!
Date: August 29, 2007 05:38 pm Title: The Secret
The end of this chapter just shattered my heart. I love this series so much.
Author's Response: So you love getting your heart shattered? hehe, thanks
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 05:38 pm Title: The Secret
Oh, ladama... this was a heart-breaking chapter. Heh... I hope you are having a good time in Japan.
Gambatte ne!
Author's Response:
I'm having a pretty good time, but I also haven't offically started working yet, so we'll see.