10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2017 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Can't resist fics that offer alternative endings to Phyllis' Wedding, and this is great! It's only 100 or so words for every point of view but everyone's thoughts and emotions come across so clearly. Love the end, it's simple and yet we know exactly what it means.
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2011 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely beautiful. I love how even Jim and Pam's childhood dreams went together. I'm left with a smile on my face and I really needed that smile today.
Date: February 06, 2007 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww....Sir Jim. SO sweet...
Date: February 06, 2007 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
"I'm tired of pretending," he whispers.
"Yeah," she says softly, resting her head on his shoulder. "Me too." I love these, especially this ending. So sweet and gentle.
Date: February 05, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. It always amazes me how so few words can sometimes have such a strong impact. Also, I totally feel you on the "getting Jossed" thing. Thanks for sharing this!
Date: February 05, 2007 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is delightful. I love drabbles, and these were perfect little splashes of emotion and insight.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brought tears to my eyes.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoohoooo!
Date: February 05, 2007 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay - what a sweet story. Lovely ending!
Date: February 05, 2007 03:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Just terrific. So economical, but with so many great nuances. Pam imagining Jim as a child, weilding a stick for a sword was an especially touching detail. When he whispers to her at the end...oh, just a lovely, lovely thing. Thanks for this.
Date: February 05, 2007 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww! This was so beautiful!
5 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is too cute. I would definately expand on this a little bit more! Its great though!
Date: February 04, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, very sweet. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
very sweet and lovely! Well done!
Date: February 04, 2007 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed this. I just loved Jim's reaction to Karen catching the bouquet. And the last one was so sweet. I hope we see them both get tired of pretending on the show, too - and soon.
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. This is pretty amazing. You said A LOT in so few words and Jim and Pam's conversation at the end gave me chills. Beautiful!
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
She imagined him as a child, wielding a stick for a sword. I do think Jim has a "white knight" thing- he likes to rescue Michael and Pam, etc. This line gave me a lump in my throat that didn't go away until the end. What a beautiful, tiny gem you've created here.
Date: February 04, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Simple and lovely. Just what drabbles should be :)
I'm tired of their pretending too.
Date: February 04, 2007 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very good. I really liked that Jim wanted to be a knight. That's just the sweetest thing, really. He wanted to rescue people. ^_^
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex