Date: February 08, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
I don't think that I've ever read a story when Jim tells Roy about what happened on Casino Night.
Much less one where Roy actually encourages Jim/Pam.
It's different, revolutionary.
and SPECTACULAR.
(though, I'm not sure Roy would take it as well as he did here)
I cannot wait for the next part.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: February 08, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
I love how you had Jim & Roy connect and instead of having a huge fight, they are understanding and more adult about it. Nice change to what most people do. Please continue soon!!
Date: February 08, 2007 01:41 pm Title: Breaking Hearts
wow, this keeps getting better and better (and yet worse and worse for the characters).... there has to be a happy ending, right?
Date: February 07, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Something to Give Up
this story freaking rules, but um...it is not fluff.
Date: February 07, 2007 06:18 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
This is great!! She does need to give him a little of what he gave her...Please continue this soon!!
Date: February 07, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
Ouch, another angsty cliff-hanger! I don't see how Jim can fix this one, as much as I wish he would. Please update soon!!
Date: February 07, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
OMG! Wow. You end these chapters so gracefully and so powerfully and so... awesome-ly. Haha. I love that Pam is moving to NY. This chapter rules.
Date: February 07, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
oh please continue this! I have to know how Jim is going to fix this!
Date: February 07, 2007 04:21 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Oh, man. Excellent story. You are great with the angst. Your whole story is so realistic. I can see all of those things happening. Please write another chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat!
Date: February 07, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
is he gonna kick her window in and kiss her? please let that be it!
Date: February 07, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
i can totally see it happening this way. as much as i love light fluff, this is a real conflict that is annoying like life is. so, yeah, enjoy it and please continue so there is at least some happiness for them
Date: February 07, 2007 03:39 pm Title: Caught In The Middle
OMGMYGODWHAT'SGOINGTOHAPPEN?????
I'd just like to say that I like that Pam is standing up for herself to Jim, and that it's not easy for either of them. The things that are really worthwhile are worth working for.
Can't wait for more!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: February 07, 2007 09:46 am Title: Something to Give Up
holy hell, you can't leave it like that! there has to be more! fluff, i tell you! fluff!
Date: February 05, 2007 09:00 pm Title: Something to Give Up
I loved this line: "I gave up my marriage for you." OMG. I can so see this happening. I so want this to happen! It isn't fair for Jim to use his relationship with Karen as something holding him back when Pam gave up her marriage. So awesome, I can't wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the awesome review. I am actually writing the second chapter now. So, it will be up in a few short days.
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Jim interrupted as he put his hands on her arms, “Don’t. I don’t want to hear that.” OUCH, painful, but perfect phrasing! I can definitely hear Jim saying that. Great job on this fic, I hope you'll continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I appreciate all the support!
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 04:18 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Damn!!!
Author's Response: Haha....thanks for the review.
Date: February 05, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Yes, please do continue! And soon! I don't know how long I'll survive with my heart ripped out from this chapter. Wow, you can write the angst!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review. I appreciate you taking out the time to read such a LONG story and go the extra step to review it. It means alot to me!
I will be working on another chapter shortly. I have some ideas in mind and will be jotting them down this week. Thanks again.
Becky
Date: February 05, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Something to Give Up
Very intense but I'm glad you made Jim feel a little of what Pam was going through that night.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely review. I love to hear what the readers are saying about my work. I am thankful for people who leave comments! So, thanks and keep an eye out for another chapter!
Becky
Date: February 05, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Something to Give Up
first of all, i just wanted to say that i think your writing has dramatically improved in such a short time. this was really really good and i think i might have been holding my breath at the end there! great job.
i know it is a recurring theme in a lot of fan fic that pam shows jim what it was like to have this bomb dropped her (turnabout's fair play, indeed!), but you did a great job with it. i really liked it and sooo....
secondly: yes, please continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your REVIEW!!! I appreciate it soooo much. Thank you also for the compliment about my improvement. I have felt like my stories are getting deeper and more meaningful. I have a great BETA reader who takes care of me...so, thank Peskipiksi too! Um, thanks again and I hope to create another chapter.
Becky
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 11:12 am Title: Something to Give Up
Nope, nope, nop!
Nope, sorry! You simply CAN NOT leave it there!
That was seriously one of the most heart wrenching stories I think that I have read here!
Pardon me, while I grab a tissue...
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!! You're comment made me smile. I appreciate all the support here on MTT! You all are great. I hope to be writing another chapter to this story so keep an eye out. Your review was great. Thanks!
Becky
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 07:28 am Title: Something to Give Up
This is great! I loved how realistic this was!! I loooooved this line, “I gave up my marriage for you. Goodbye, Jim.” Poor Pam. :(
Author's Response:
Thank you sooooo much for the wonderful comment! You have made my day! I appreciate all the support from this site! I hope to continue...so, make sure you keep looking out for another chapter soon. Thanks again!
Becky
Date: February 05, 2007 05:48 am Title: Something to Give Up
Wow. I wasn't expecting that. It's definitely a unique perspective and I'd be very sad if it happened in real life.
Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I didnt want to leave it that way because, I am a total JAM fan, so I would really like to see them together too...so, I might more to this...thanks for your review...
Date: February 05, 2007 05:44 am Title: Something to Give Up
good story. as much as i hate the ending, its incredibly realistic. i mean, yeah.but continue so we can have them be all happy together
Author's Response: Thank you for your Review! I hated to leave it that way too, so I might add somemore to it. Thanks for reading!