10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 02:19 am Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
I love Jan's last talking head! So sweet! Awesome story!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Wow! I can totally see Michael planning this crazy wedding that no one would ever forget. I loved that even Stanley and Ryan were dressed up for the party. This is for sure going in my favorites!!
Date: March 08, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Phyllis and Bob had better watch out if Kevin gets hungry...
7 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Hilarious. As expected. Moxie, I don't know how you do it every time. Jim and Pam as Minnie and Mickey? Of course! And the Bride of Frankenstein? Oh, poor Jan. Or lucky Jan. For the rest of her life (or at least the rest of her marriage) she'll be hitched to a guy who always surprises her, always amuses her, and sometimes embarrasses her. It will be very rollercoastery, as Andy would say.
I thought it was funny that Kelly, who came to the office Halloween party as Dorothy, was admiring Angela dressed as Dorothy. Was Ryan dressed as Grumpy? Cute shout-out. And of course Dwight was the Scarecrow.
You did very well with this challenge. Congratulations, and thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! and I have a whole new appreciation for Mickey Mouse now that I've invented Mickey!Jim. I'd be his mousketeer any day of the week. (Just call me Annette!)
Thanks for the support and reviewing!!
8 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2007 10:56 am Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Oh! I love this! Jan and Michael made me tear up a bit too. I especially liked Jan's last talking head. I firmly believe she cares for Michael more than anyone could imagine, and you nailed her(TWSS.)
And nice job on the classic Dwight. Hee. Now I want to see him in a scarecrow outfit. Heh.
Author's Response:
thank you for your sweet review! I'm convinced as well that Jan feels something deeper for Michael than she lets on, even now. That's why I think they can resolve Pam and Jim and move on to focusing on Jan and Micheal - they are such an unique couple!
Thanks for reading and reviewing - it's always appreciated to know how my writing has gone over. :-)
Date: March 01, 2007 08:49 am Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Aww, so cute!
“I didn't mean fat - can you edit that part out? Because she's not fat, she's just in full bloom because she is carrying my child. Our love child. So there's no way I would consider her fat.”
That line rules.
Author's Response:
haha! I'm so glad someone else liked that part - because I could completely see Michael saying Jan had gotten fat, then realize how Jan might be mad if she ever heard he said it, so he does his Michael backpedalling to try and save face.
Thanks for reading and reviewing - you're awesome!!
Date: March 01, 2007 08:02 am Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
That was highly entertaining. You just know Michael would do anything to make Jan happy, and playing dress up is certainly one of them. Nice job with this story! I love Michael/Jan stories.
Author's Response: Thanks, MA - I appreciate your comments immensely!! I've always loved Michael, and I do think that there is so much potential between him and Jan. I agree with Melora Hardin's assessment that under her hard exterior is a soft caramel center! I debated putting Jan's last line in, then I thought if she married him, she's reached the point where she knows on some level that she loves him.
Date: February 28, 2007 11:02 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Is it weird that I now kind of want a Halloween wedding?
Nicely done!
Author's Response: Not weird at all! I'd like a halloween wedding, if Jim could be frankenstein to my BoF!! ;-) Thanks for taking the time to read and review - I so appreciate it!
Date: February 28, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
It's hours later and I'm still laughing. Excellent job my dear. I have more randomness at my desk. Hee! In case you're looking to continue. :)
Author's Response: It scares me to think what might be on your desk. But I might take another dip later today. Thanks for being the spark behind all the fun I had writing this fic!!
Date: February 28, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Hee! A Halloween wedding! So completely unique and so ridiculously Michael. This was very funny and cute.
Author's Response: Thanks, Semby! I have no idea where the idea came from (except the wedding idea was lifted from a friend of mine!); but it just all sort of fit together when I sat down to write it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 28, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
The image of Jim dressed as Mickey Mouse - hee. And how sweet that Michael would make sure Jan had the wedding she dreamt of as a child...the absurdity of it is somehow so right for them. Big aawww when he kisses her stomache too. Really fun.
Author's Response: I am going to have to ask LisaHoo to make me a photoshopped pix of Jim as Mickey now - and I never even liked that mouse before! I felt the story was a little on the crazy side, and I've never done talking heads before, but someone it just seemed like something that could really happen between those two. I think underneath the insanity Michael and Jan do have a connection they care about. Thanks for leaving me some feedback!!
Date: February 28, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Wow -- there is something more bizarre than a Michael & Jan wedding! And that is a Halloween wedding with Mickey & Minnie Mouse in attendance.... and a pregnant Bride of Frankenstein! DAWESOME!
Author's Response:
hee! Yay for pleasing the Mistress LisaHoo with my humble submission!! :-) And you know, I wasn't even a Mickey fan when I turned Jim into the famous mouse. Now I guess I'm going to have to reconsider that damn rodent.... :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, babe - you know I love you to pieces!!!
Date: February 28, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
this was so great! I loved the idea and michael totally would do this. i liked how Michael & Jan really are cute and tender people. And Mickey!Jim? Come on. Just awesome.
Author's Response:
You made me laugh - I will be thinking of Halpert at Mickey!Jim for quite some time now. Oh, if only my photoshop skills were better...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - you totally rock!
Date: February 28, 2007 02:29 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
Aww...How cute are Michael and Jan in love? I could totally see Michael doing something like this. And a little happy Jim and Pam thrown in for good measure. This is very fun read :)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you liked it! I wanted to show a glimpse of Jan as a more 'human' person, I guess. I think she had a whole bunch of crazy ideas when she was a girl that somehow got locked away. I think that's why she loves Michael - it's like she gets a chance to get some of her old self back after all these years! Thanks for reviewing - you are the best!!!!!
Date: February 28, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Wedding bells and pumpkin soup
haha, i laughed so much. so very michael with the halloween wedding. and it was... hehe, a good funny break.
Author's Response: Thanks - I just love Michael - especially Michael in love!! Thanks for reading and reviewing; I really appreciate it!!