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Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Party Planning Party

Wow, I can definitely see Pam being a bit shell-shocked after hearing that Jim's going to move in with Karen.   Karen's dialogue in that scene seemed just like her, too.  Oh, boy.  Pam's been avoiding him for three weeks??  She needs to step up to the plate.  Seriously.  (Of course, I've been saying this for the last five months.  ;)

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Party Planning Party

i'm loving this so far! :D

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 11:04 am Title: Party Planning Party

This makes me want to smack Karen hard. I think that's a tribute to your excellent writing. Poor Pam. Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 10:47 am Title: Party Planning Party

I want some peanut butter crackers. I could make my own, butwhere is the fun in that. dammit though, now i really do want some. *goes off to make peanut buttercrackers* not as good as vendin machine ones, but they have to suffice

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 10:37 am Title: Party Planning Party

you're killing me.  seriously.  I felt so bad for Pam when she found Jim's boxers and then when Karen came in and said they were moving in together! That just killed me a little inside I think.  Please end on a good note!! Great job, I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 10:34 am Title: Party Planning Party

OMG -- I am not fine either!!!  Hoping ch. 3 has enough jam to wash down that peanut butter that is stuck in my throat.  Ow.

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 06:58 am Title: Renovations

Ooooh, so funny!  I love love the banter, and Pam turning on the childlock, not knowing how to turn it off, and just suffering in silence? HEE!  So funny, so Pam...

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 06:30 am Title: Renovations

Okay, I don't know how the hell I missed this fic, but it is fanTAStic! I love anything involving Karen/Pam interactions.

I looooove Pam finding Jim's boxers. LOVE it. Karen and Pam would get along so well if it wasn't for the fact that they both love the same guy. Heh.

Can't wait for the next part!

(p.s. I just read your end notes, and I expect your firstborn whenever he/she comes along) 

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Renovations

I'm excited to see where this will go :)

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Renovations

I can't wait to see where you take this because it's been so good so far.

Maybe Jim likes to go commando every so often...

Reviewer: slpchic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 12:06 am Title: Renovations

HA HA HA I thought the boxer bit was so cute and fun!  I wish I had a pair of John Krasinski's boxers under my futon....if I had a futon and I guess I would also need to know JKras...lol Darn! The awkwardness is great between them.  The Phyllis part made me giggle! Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 10:20 pm Title: Renovations

AAGGH!!! she touched his boxers! why am i squealling like an elementary school girl?! ok.. i'm calm. seriously, please write more, and quickly!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Renovations

Jim's underwear!  OMG!  [/Squeal like Kelly] How horribly awkward -- can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Renovations

Okay, I about spit a gut at Pam picking up those boxer shorts.  This is getting interesting ... 

Reviewer: Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 03:02 pm Title: Renovations

I love Karen and Pam being friends. If it wasn't for Jim they would get along so well!  I hate thinking of Karen and Jim together.  That last line was great!  I can't wait to see what comes next! 

Reviewer: LindsayLeigh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 02:38 pm Title: Renovations

No!!! Karen and Jim have NOT had sex! (Just like my parents have never had sex!) *Cries*. Okay, now that that's out of my system.... Great writing, great story! I can't wait to find out where this is going next! (It's going in the Jim/Pam direction, right? Please?) I wonder what prompted Karen to offer Pam a place to stay despite the recent hostility she's been showing towards her.... There were so many great lines: Pam's thoughts right at the end, the mention of the camera crew going into little boys' rooms at the CFO's house, Dwight's random comments, Michael's Michaelness, and of course, South Park and Ben and Jerry's. The perfect slumber party combo. Overall, a great read. Thanks for writing, and please do update soon!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Renovations

Haha...this was great.  I loved this line "Oh my God. I just touched Jim Halpert’s underwear."   Can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: colorblind Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Renovations

Jim, why didn't you notice you didn't have your undies on when you left?



Author's Response: see now, i was waiting for somebody to realize that. i'm planning on doing a fourth epilogue sort of chapter involving jim and pam and something like that, and uh that's going to be explained. i promise. =D good eye for details! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Renovations

Pam touched Jim's underwear. And ignoring the Karen factor! This proves to be interesting, so, yeah, write more!

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Renovations

Wow. This is really great so far. I can't wait to read about the other two times. Your characterization is dead on, and I loved the little interjections from Michael and Dwight. So funny! Keep up the great work!

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