Date: June 11, 2007 08:41 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
This is so cool. I loved the multiple POVs, Angela's was pitch perfect. I actually really liked the angst- but I loved that subtly fluffy (is that an oxymoron?) scene at the end even more. Pls write more fics! And the Angela bitch fight? Classic!
Date: April 06, 2007 07:35 am Title: Gentlemen, to your corners...
I have to be honest. I just found this site a few days ago because my friend recommended "Hey Jealousy" to me but .. I just wanted to say that I think you're an incredible writer. You capture each of the characters so perfectly -- even down to the diction and syntax. I think that's amazing.
:)
Date: April 03, 2007 07:31 am Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
that was just such a great ending. i loved that list. like, my heart broke with happiness!!!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:26 am Title: we can work it out... maybe?
that was... i mean, wow. it being one sided, and then the kiss and then more one sided... okay, i give up, i have to read the next chapter NOW
Date: April 03, 2007 07:07 am Title: Gentlemen, to your corners...
Wow, I loved Jim's insult. That totally made me laugh. I think insult fights are just hilarious! Specially when they are bad!
Date: March 23, 2007 05:39 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
She looked toward the conference room when she heard a noise. The blinds were all mangled and it looked like Jim’s back was pressing against them. Wonder how much that is going to cost the company.
"The two of them didn’t emerge from the conference room for another ten minutes and, when they do, Pam’s trying to fix her hair and Jim still hasn’t straightened his tie. Angela reminded herself never to touch either of them ever again. Filthy."
This is the best part. Makes me want more JAM!!! Ahh!
Date: March 23, 2007 05:35 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
OMG! Where is the next chapter? I need to know what happens next. Maybe from Dwigt's POV? Lol, that would be funnnay! :D Please continue, this is my fave fanfic right now!
Author's Response: This is your favorite? Aw, thank you! Well, technically it is finished... hehe. But I'm working on a new fun story that may result in some Jammy goodness ;) Its called 'The Mystery of the Disappearing HR Representative'-check it out and let me know what you think! (Maybe if I can think up another chapter I can add one more to this one)
Date: March 21, 2007 12:23 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Ok, those last two lines from Angela = gold. Great fic!
Date: March 16, 2007 08:16 am Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
I'm glad Pam did know things about Jim.
Date: March 16, 2007 03:38 am Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Ha! Karen *so* got what was coming to her. You don't mess around with Kelly's man! And I love Pam's list so, so much.
Date: March 15, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Gentlemen, to your corners...
If I were a more prolific writer I probably would have done a catfight. Hell, I may still - eventually. I prefer to joke about it though, rather than actually doing it. I'm just glad someone did it, and yours was so fun (I never expected Kelly to be first one in, but that's great too).
Author's Response: You may not be a prolific writer (yet), but I've really enjoyed all of your fics so far and I hope you keep posting :) I'm glad you had fun reading it!
Date: March 15, 2007 10:25 am Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
This chapter is DAWESOME! Angela was the perfect choice as a narrator....and I KNEW Pam would come through and prove Jim wrong! Yeay!
Author's Response: Yep, don't call her Pammy! Glad you liked the end :)
Date: March 15, 2007 10:10 am Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Ah HAHAHAHA. This story made me laugh so much. I love the fights -- and the Jim/Pam interaction? Oh my God, seriously. I almost wanted to cry when Jim suggested that he was more into than she was (very realistic) and then Pam and the list? So great. I really enjoyed this a lot! You do a good job with the ensamble, which is a hard thing to do.
Author's Response: That's such a great compliment, thank you! I love ensemble fic, and I'm glad I made you laugh since that's what I was going for ;)
9 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2007 08:27 am Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Oh my. That just made me love Angela so much more than I thought possible. Awesomely good story!
Author's Response: Yay for Angela love! Thank you :)
Date: March 14, 2007 11:55 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
That's freaking awesome! I really loved all the fights, and I'm not usually a fan of violent smackdowns.
Author's Response: I couldn't get that Jim talking head out of my thoughts as I wrote this, heehee, thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 10:27 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Lol! I love how you give a different person's perspective every time.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the different perspectives! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: March 14, 2007 10:26 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, that list is just AWESOME. And I love Angela, and her kick-ass ways. And Kelly going at it with Karen while everyone stares. Brilliant. Avian flu. Hee. Thanks. cheers. --Lex
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It was a ton of fun to write such a crazy scenario :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 09:15 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
excellent
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: March 14, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Gentlemen, to your corners...
that was AWESOME! If I was Ryan I would SO hate Karen right now :)
Author's Response: I know! Haha, he did mess up big time, but the whole office doesn't need to know that! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: March 14, 2007 08:56 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Heehee. I loved this.
"And then, in a flash, it was like yesterday all over again, only with more hair-pulling and the word “slut” being thrown around rather gratuitously." and "girl-fight-induced coma" were particular favorites.
Thank you for this! I didn't notice if it said "complete" or not - hope not!
Author's Response: Yes, it is completed, but thanks for enjoying it! It was fun to write a silly fic like this so I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: March 14, 2007 08:54 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
OMG, I am squeeing like Kelly! The list! The list!!
And I have to disagree with your author's notes -- some form of the list could totally make an appearance. That would be extra awesome!
And the Angela POV? Amaaaazing! I had no idea how you could introduce Pam/Jim cuteness with that, but wow.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the list! Hehe, I tried to come up with stuff that was pretty off the wall random, but that Pam would somehow know. I'm especially glad you liked the Angela POV!
Date: March 14, 2007 08:37 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Woah! Go, Kelly.
Good stuff - filthy indeed.
Author's Response: Its probably not a likely reaction, buut I could totally see Kelly going apeshit on a girl that goes after Ryan, hee. Glad you liked it!
Date: March 14, 2007 08:30 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
Just have to say that I almost did a spit take on my computer screen when I saw the sentence "Whatever happened to good old fashioned repressing?" I can totally see Angela saying that. Great story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line! Angela is so fun to write.
Date: March 14, 2007 08:27 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
I feel like I already used up my yearly 'awesome' quote in the past 2 chapters' reviews, but, oh hell, I'll say it again: AWESOME. I love the fact that Angela's been in a fight before, and it was one that she instigated. Pam's list is just adorable. And the last line...ahhh. So Angela, so perfect.
Author's Response: That's alright, awesome is one of the most awesome words, hehe (channeling my inner Kelly here), I'm glad you liked the ending!
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 08:24 pm Title: ohhh, the bitch is back
What a way to end this! I've been waiting for a catfight in this fandom forever. Sure it's not exactly likely, but damn, it's fun. And Angela getting in a fight is just perfect. I can believe that.
Author's Response: Haha, me too! I thought you'd be the first to throw one out actually, hehe. I can totally see Angela getting in a fight, she's scrappy!