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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 10:39 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

perfecto!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 10:27 pm Title: What does that even mean?

BOOOOOOOOO Karen!!!!!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2008 01:47 pm Title: What does that even mean?

VERY good, I loved this!!

Reviewer: jillyree Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2008 09:06 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

OK. so how had I not read this before?  So sweet and steamy...sweamy?  Or, a better description - GREAT!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Awesome!

Reviewer: pinkiepie172 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2007 06:53 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Wow!! That was such a great story!!

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 03:59 pm Title: What does that even mean?

I have a question: Does this happen before or after Jim sees Dwangela making-out?

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Wow...that was hot.  I wanted to slap Karen when she came back...but then Jim made up for it...so yay!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 11:36 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Nookie now. Talk later. Mox, you are too good, because I'm the prudiest prude ever (I could make Angela seem like the spawn of Satan), but I wholeheartedly believe THAT'S a perfect way for Jim and Pam to get together. And that's what I love about your writing, it's never just smut for smut's sake, everything has it's beautiful purpose. 

Reviewer: super_perfect Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 01:35 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

moxie is a dirty little vixen of a steamy fan fic writer. and i love it.

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Moxie, this was so lovely. Sexy as hell, but also very sweet and touching. Really a joy to read, thank you!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Aww, happy ending and a nice interlude between Squirrel chapters. This was much needed.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 04:14 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

This was great, as always!  Whenever I see you've posted a new story I tell myself that this time I will read it s-l-o-w-l-y and savor it but of course instead I speed read through it to get to the happy ending I crave.  Thank you for your part in allowing me to live in my happy, rose-colored glasses MTT world.

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Nailed it!  Pun intended!  Awesome ending to an amazing story!

Reviewer: kth201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

This story is fantastic. I think the characterization of Pam is dead-on, when she starts to talk to Jim from behind him. 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Let's give them to something to talk

yay! best ending ever! The sex was completely unexpected, I thought they would talk and fight and maybe kiss, but man was I wrong.  This story was awesome! great job

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 10:17 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

The two things I like best about this story are that a) you didn't make Jim and Pam dance around too long before hopping into the sack (three + years of foreplay is enough, already), and b) their joking during lovemaking. I thought that was beautifully in character. Thanks so much for this. I've been needing some good smut, and you came through as usual!

Author's Response: Thanks - the whole time I was writing this I just kept feeling this intensity about it - sort of a darkness where things really have reached the point that they just had to get straight to the point, as it were.  They weren't going to be able to do the talking they might need to do until certain things were out of their system.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 09:16 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

*grins*

Oh yes. Nothing beats angst like a little nookie. Hee.

Seriously, how is it that you're so good at this? Always leave me satisfied and smiling.

twss.

thx.
cheers.
--Lex

Author's Response:

Jim Halpert is my personal love slave.  We walk through these stories all the time just to make sure they sound good.  I know, it's a tough job, but I do it for you guys.  ;-)

Seriously - thanks for the love.  I can always use some!! 

Reviewer: breadandjam Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 08:38 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Ohhhh Moxie, the JAM definately needs some stirring.... Thanks for this feel good chapter.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 08:28 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

Oh, this is so nice.  Not just nice smut (although it is that!), but just lovely all around.  Thank you for this.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 07:53 am Title: Let's give them to something to talk

SQUEE!  I'm totally going to just believe that happened.  I'm in denial, but I don't care.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 04:44 pm Title: What does that even mean?

I hope Pam cracks soon and really lets Jim have it.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: super_perfect Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 12:27 am Title: What does that even mean?

sooooooooooooooo...will there be a chapter 2 mox? or are you just THAT evil?

Reviewer: cam3150 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 04:41 pm Title: What does that even mean?

So, so good :)  *sigh*  If only this would happen on the show.

Reviewer: maryuc Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 11:23 am Title: What does that even mean?

OOOOOOH!!! I like it! - Jim is such an idiot - do you really think he doesn't see taht Pam is so in love with him now???  I hope you continue - i like where this is goign!  Good writin!

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