10 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2007 12:53 am Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up
ooh.. this is the best installment yet... LOVE! MORE!!
Date: April 26, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up
RE: #3. My brother got his first girlfriend when she said 'bite me' and he did.
Author's Response: Question: Where did he bite her? Because.... I'm just saying... have you ever been lightly biten on the wrist? Amazingly hot.
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up
Ooh! I love it! The tension is wonderful. Please give us more!
Date: April 26, 2007 09:24 am Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up
I don't get #6 and the phone. At first, I thought we had changed gears and a phone no longer meant a phone (I mean, c'mon, you know me, that's where my mind goes. Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar, and sometimes it... isn't.) But it seems you really meant he didn't put down the phone. So was he just overly distracted since Pam said "naked"? If so, maybe your less dirty-minded readers will figure that out right away.
I liked #2, but #3? Verbal foreplay, Muggins? Awesome.
#7 - so it's Filet Mignon and Lobster for Pam? To go? (Maybe some chocolate mousse for 2, with strawberries in a separate to-go pack.)
11. Orion's belt looks kind of blurry. Jim's belt looks kind of on the ground with his pants and boxers.
I'm out! (/George Costanza)
Author's Response: Ugh...I hate having to explain. Now I'm seriously thinking of doing a re-write. The phone's just a phone. It's his only link and physical proof that Pam's agreed to go on a date with him. As long as he's holding it, it really and truly happened. My boyfriend said he carried his phone around for an hour after first talking to me for the same reason and I thought it was adorable.
Jim's belt looks kind of on the ground with his pants and boxers Explain to me again why you're not writing fanfic? I could so see you writing a fic where you are Andy (or Ryan or Kelly or hell any tertiary character) describing Jim and Pam's first blurry moment. If you don't do it, I will.
Date: April 26, 2007 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up
Ooh, sassy Pam: "I plan on it". Yeah, that ought to do it...
Date: April 26, 2007 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. NEED MORE NOW!!!
Date: April 26, 2007 08:09 am Title: Chapter 3 - The week after the break-up
AW! LoveLOVE! This is the medicine I need for the Season3 Gloomitis from which I suffer!
Date: April 23, 2007 07:40 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
hee! This is so cute, so clever. Bless Pam's (well, ok, your) devious little heart...
Date: April 23, 2007 06:32 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
- Would you rather come to work naked or have Dwight come to work naked?”
Not Dwight please not a naked Dwight.
Date: April 23, 2007 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
Wow I'd sure like to see Pam do all those things.
10 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
HAH. My favorite would absolutly have to be 7. Then my second favorites would be 5 & 10. Nice work =)
Date: April 22, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
Beautiful story so far. You've written so many little Jam moments that I could picture actually happening (well, if Jim and Pam weren't so angsty). Cute and sexy and funny all rolled into one. Great writing!
Date: April 22, 2007 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
Okay, these are even better than the ones in the first chapter. My favorites are 3 through 7, and 9. Yeah, I have 6 favorites.
Date: April 22, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
Nice... If Pam pulled any of these moves on the show, I would possibly die of happiness. For now, your story shall have to keep me satisfied!
Date: April 22, 2007 11:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
This is cute and enjoyable! Looking forward to more!
Date: April 22, 2007 10:09 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
You've hurt my brain with number 10. I'd rather not have that image stuck in my brain. I hope you're happy.
Date: April 22, 2007 08:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
Pam as a Bond Girl? Like Jim doesn't have enough Pam fantasies... Love it!! :D
Author's Response: Can't have too many sex fantasies. Not possible.
Date: April 22, 2007 06:55 am Title: Chapter 2 - Mid Breakup
Hee! I think my favorites are the 2 hour phone call "oh, James!" and the car wash. I love Brazen!Pam
Date: April 22, 2007 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
I love bad!Pam, organizing the filling cabinet was just low Pam (pun intended); I love how she is slowly driving him insane, like truly love it.
Author's Response:
I love how she is slowly driving him insane, like truly love it. That reminds me of the Willie Wonka line "The suspense is killing me, I hope it'll last." I too love how Pam is slowly driving Jim nuts. Now if he could start doing it back to her. Hmmm.... Kama Sutra II - The Revenge (50 Ways Jim seduces Pam)...
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
AWESOME. You really are so, so funny! I just wanted to leave you a review to let you know that :)
7 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
"Several times Pam misses the bucket when she’s grabbing for a handful." What a great line! I'd like to grab a handful myself (am I talking too loud?)
Date: April 20, 2007 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
oh I love this! I love a good cheating Jim! not on the show but in fic it's so hot. I LOVED the one where she trails the pencil down his inner thigh, SO hot.
Date: April 20, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
The Bird's Eye Peas part is so funny- it's just like Michael to fall for something dumb and then hold a whole conference about it. Also, loved this sentence, in particular: Jim loses his train of thought and doesn’t make the sale. He’s okay with that.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: April 20, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
Hee! This is awesome. GO Brazen!Pam! Accidentally "touching" Karen? Damn -- Pam pulls out the big guns!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: April 20, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Before Jim and Karen Break Up
Love it! Humorous and sexy!