Date: June 05, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Karen
=( At first I was sad because I thought Karen was going to be having Jim's baby (good misdirect there). But then I was sad for Karen for not having a baby (not that I want her to have Jim's baby but I imagine it would be sad to think you are pregnant and then not be).
Date: June 05, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Angela
Hahaha...oh Dwight....love him thinking of the child as a beet farm worker before age 5. I love Angela using the "Noelle" and "Kurt" again. Very good.
Date: June 05, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Jan
Oh...crazy Jan. You wrote her at a very believeable level of crazy...and of course Michael couldn't keep that in...
Date: June 05, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Kelly
Haha...perfectly in character. I love Kelly's overshares with Pam and how she reacted. Very very Kelly.
Date: June 05, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Pam
ExtremelyGruntled, I LOVED this! You got the characters just right (I think my favorite description was Jan's) and you brought the funny and the angst, and I just really, really liked it a lot. I also loved that you thought out a timeline, because that's perfect. I hope you write a sequel!
Date: June 05, 2007 11:09 am Title: Pam
Yay for all the babies! Loved this!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 09:45 am Title: Pam
Loved all of these! Though, i have to say, the Karen one totally broke my heart.. I'm gonna go cry now..
Date: June 05, 2007 09:30 am Title: Pam
This was great! You had me worried from the order of chapters that Karen would be one of the four and Pam would be the one who doesn't. You really made me feel awful for Karen though, poor girl. Jan was particularly terrifying/funny with her approach to getting pregnant! Dwight and Angela were surprisingly sweet about it :) And I loved all the chapters' closing talking heads.
Date: June 05, 2007 09:15 am Title: Pam
Wait, so...Angela got her pair of boys?! Nice!
These are all very nicely done. Congratulations!
Date: June 05, 2007 06:47 am Title: Pam
Love how this is a bit of an epilogue with all the sleep deprived daddies. I suppose the mommies are not present because they are even more sleep deprived and their clothes are covered with baby urp. Nice series.
Date: June 05, 2007 06:44 am Title: Pam
Thanks for the timeline. that was very helpful. also thanks for writing baby fluff. we can never have enough of that. Jim and Pam's reaction was too cute. :)
Date: June 05, 2007 06:36 am Title: Angela
yet again, GREAT talking head. you're doing an awesome job getting the characters voices right. i love how Angela only wants to say expecting, and the scene with Pam in the kitchen is priceless.
Date: June 05, 2007 06:32 am Title: Jan
you NAILED michael's talking head at the end. i can totally see him saying this. too funny. Jan is absolutely out of control. i really feel sorry for Michael.
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 05:30 am Title: Karen
Oh, poor Karen. She didn't know whether it was relief or disappointment I know that feeling, and you capture it beautifully with your very quiet prose. All the details are so beautiful here...the rain, the way you describe her thoughts and her motions...it's lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 04:32 am Title: Angela
Dwight was in shock. He stood looking at her for quite some time before the corners of his mouth turned upward into a smile.
"Excellent," he said, simply.
Is it weird that this made me teary? I love these two together.
Date: June 04, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Karen
my Pammy right? It has to be...pretty pretty please???
Date: June 04, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Karen
These stories are awesome. I am really enjoying each one. You're writing the characters perfectly, and, as others have mentioned, I'm enjoying the TH's at the end.
Poor Karen...I actually felt bad for her, for about five seconds. Glad she wasn't one of the pregnant ones, though. That would be awkward....
Now on to our little Ms. Beesly.
Date: June 04, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Karen
This is such a cool story. You were able to capture the voices of all the characters very well and I love the talking heads with the fathers at the end of each chapter. Excellent job! :)
Date: June 04, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Karen
Oh, I hope this is because you are saving the happy for last! I like how you are doing the talking heads at the end -- sucker punch to the gut...
Date: June 04, 2007 05:59 pm Title: Angela
This was priceless: "if it were possible for a Schrute to experience nervousness" Loving this story/series, BTW
8 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2007 05:41 pm Title: Kelly
Oh, poor, poor Kelly! So excited, so happy, so naive not to use protection. And poor Ryan - his talking head said it all. Hopefully when the shock wears off, he'll rise to the occasion. (TWSS).
9 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Jan
Oh, these first two are fabulous! You definitely have the Kelly and Jan voices down pat...and Pam's too. I hope we get some Halpert babies somewhere down the line.
Date: June 04, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Jan
Oh, man. I'm such a nerd that I'm fretting over the Character list. If Karen gets pregnant by Jim, I'll get all nutty on you. Just a warning.
For the first two chapters, though, YEAY! You are doing a great job capturing all the characters perfectly.....
Date: June 04, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Jan
I love how Jan and Michael do it in the supply closet, but Jan calls Jim and Pam unprofessional for speculating on the same thing. You captured Jan's krazy well here.