Date: March 02, 2009 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! It's great when story is in bits and pieces and then everything comes together in the end. Thanks for the good read.
-steven
8 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! I'm glad that Roy found someone, too. Nice work!
--Strider
Date: January 30, 2008 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such a sweet and emotionally charged story -- poor Roy! I'm glad his daughter still had a relationship with him. I loved the flashbacks and how Pam and Jim found their way back to each other. That was really sweet.
Date: January 19, 2008 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
oh wow...did expect that to happen...great job!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a wonderful story. I think it would make a WONDERFUL book.....and I mean that. This seems like a short summary of a romance novel...I think you did an excellent job. truly truly excellent...i think you should expand and tell us the whole story :)...this is a book i would LOVE to read
beautifully done
6 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Even Dwight and Angela came, bringing along their clan of little thirsty Schrutes.
That is one of the scariest lines I've ever read in fanfic. :)
I like the way you have threaded the present and the past together with your backstory and frame story. You even made me sad for Roy. Well done, as usual!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
a.maz.ing. !!! you made me cry! i love the fact that Jim really connected with Natalie and loved her like his own daughter. simply incredible!! great job!! =)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, my belly is all fluttery after reading this. This was a beautifully written story, so many little intricacies - lovely.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you lano!
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for responding to this challenge! Your entry was great. So well written, with great characterizations. Love how Jim and Pam grew up separately, but ended up together, stronger than ever. Great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for kind comments!
8 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! *sniff*. That was so sweet and so well-written. Poor dead Roy. I'm glad he had a happily-ever-after, too.
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I felt sorry for Roy - he deserved a good life too.
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
WONDERFUL.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you!
Date: August 10, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice story! I loved this line - I think it just perfectly captures the essence of Jim.
Halfway through the ceremony, Natalie got fussy so Jim scooped her up and held her as he spoke his vows. It was the most beautiful sight ever.
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too. I thought that Jim would love Natalie simply for being Pam's daughter and move past the fact that Roy was her dad.
8 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1
When she sees him in the meeting after all this time, a little squee came out of me. Hee. Interesting take on what Pam and Jim's life might be down the road.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that scene. I was tempted to make it more dramatic. Then I decided that these two had already experienced enough drama, so it became more sappy.
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh YAY! I loved this. So glad despite the bumps in the road they ended up together. Fantastic job!
And gosh. I'm so sentimental and teary eyed about Roy. I never dreamed that would happen. LOL! Who knew!?!
Author's Response:
Oh thank you, xoxoxo! As much as I want Jim and Pam together, I kinda feel sorry for Roy. That's why I wanted him to have a happy life too.
8 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this! Well written, and I loved the flashback scenes, especially the one about the documentary airing.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
7 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
"Before she could stop herself, she blurted out, “I’m not married anymore.” This line made me laugh out loud :) Nice response to the challenge!
Author's Response: Thanks nomadshan!
Date: August 10, 2006 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Just...there are no words.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you.
8 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done characterizations. I think you found just the right voice for each of the characters. You had me smiling through my tears.
Author's Response: I'm glad. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you did a great job with this challenge! I loved this story and how you went back and forth between the past and the present. It was sad and happy and just beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you for the great comments!
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
such a beautiful story, i practically have tears in my eyes. amazing :]
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! Didn't mean to make you cry.