9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2009 09:29 am Title: As Pretty As You Are Cruel
So glad you continued with this great story, Strawberry Fields. This chap really broke my heart. Excellent job. Don't be a stranger, OK?
Author's Response: I'll try not to be! I really let school get in the way, but I'm back on track and hopefully I'll be updating weekly (at least until finals. And then all bets are off!). Thanks for reviewing! Hope you'll continue to enjoy the story.
9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2009 08:24 am Title: As Pretty As You Are Cruel
The only problem with taking so long with your updates is that I have to reread your story to get back into the flow. Really...it's no hardship. ;) I'm glad you're back at it and I cannot wait to see how Jim does in Scranton. I'm hoping he turns it around both himself and the sales team. Go Team Jim!
Author's Response: I have to go back and reread my story myself! I'm glad you enjoy it! I think things will be a lot better for Jim in Scranton, and we'll be finding out soon! Thanks for taking the time to review, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
Date: March 10, 2009 09:54 pm Title: As Pretty As You Are Cruel
Wow, you're even slower at writing than I am. Congratulations!
Author's Response: Thank you. It takes a lot of effort to be this slow...glad it's appreciated!
Date: March 10, 2009 09:34 pm Title: As Pretty As You Are Cruel
I'm so glad you brought this back. I love your other stories, especially Graceless, so it's great to hear more from you. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: I will definitely keep writing! I'm hoping to start posting weekly, and all of you are welcome to come after me if I don't! Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
Date: November 30, 2008 06:03 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
This is really dark but I like it. Very different and I like the angst and how torn Jim is over Karen. I can't wait of course until he meets Pam and Karen becomes a distant memory :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 09:59 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
It's nice to see this picked up again. I must say I'm on pins and needles here...quite excited to see Jim in Scranton and meeting Ms. Beesly for the first time. I'm enjoying this story, thanks for posting!
Date: November 18, 2008 11:46 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
I don't know how I missed this one before, but I'm really enjoying it! Great work and I can't wait to read more soon!
Date: November 18, 2008 06:29 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
I really like this story. It's dark and different, which I really like. I feel bad for Jim, Karen is just using him. I can't wait to see when we meet Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2008 04:07 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
really love this, hope to see more!
Date: November 18, 2008 02:18 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Add me to the people who are ecstatic it's been updated. Love where you're going with this. I can't wait till he meets Pam and see how he feels then. Only thing to improve though is update quicker! :P
Author's Response: Yeah...I didn't do so well with that! Hopefully I'm going to get better! Glad you like the story and I hope you'll stick with it!
Date: November 18, 2008 02:07 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
Good, good, good for Jim! Realizing it would save him an entire day of misery and deciding to spare himself by telling her no. Excellent.
You are no fun, Halpert,” she sighed.
“Emily and Sophie would disagree.”
totally made me giggle
It would have been VERY hard to explain to little girls why he was late ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2008 01:10 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
I'm so excited you updated! This is one of my favorite WIPs and I can't wait for more, especially when you finally get to some JAM. :)
Date: November 18, 2008 12:54 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
I'm so happy you haven't forgotten about this story! I was really excited at the idea before and I still am. Can't wait to see what you come up with!
8 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2008 06:38 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Wow. This was amazing. I just loved it and can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
Date: September 17, 2008 08:10 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
ok, i am loving this. it's such an interesting AU. i don't like how Jim's letting himself be abused, but I do like the idea that he was desperate to find a forever kind of love, he just looked in the wrong place. i'm very excited to read more!
Author's Response: So I'm really late, but trying to catch up on responding here. Thank you for taking the time to review! Jim is kind of messed up right now...let's hope Pam can straighten him up! :-)
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 10:14 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
What an interesting concept! I'm really curious as to your next move here. JAM you say? I can't wait to see it. This is very good so far and I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Date: September 15, 2008 01:10 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
This is fascinating. I'd always sort of debated within myself whether Jim would have been with Karen (and been happy) if there hadn't been a Pam. I'm completely on board with your interpretation and I can't wait to read more!
Date: September 15, 2008 01:00 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Pleeeeease write more soooooon!
6 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 12:11 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Ooooh, I am intrigued! I have to be honest, when I first read the summary, I wasn't sure, but you have really done a great job. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: September 15, 2008 06:30 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Very nice start. I'm not a big Karen fan but I always try to give her a chance in these stories. You have got my interest with this one.
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 06:27 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Very interesting idea for a story. I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out. When I read the summary, I was wondering how you'd pull off a S2-Pam-like relationship w/Karen. I think the way you did it is just plausible enough to carry the rest of the story. Looking forward to the rest!
Author's Response: Sorry this is months late...thank you for the feedback! Hope you will enjoy the rest of the story when I get time to post!
8 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 06:03 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Nice set up, SF. I was intrigued by the premise and didn't know how you would work out the reversal, but you did!
“I do have a life, Filipelli.”
“No, you really don’t,” she shook her head. “Come on, Halpert. We can’t go tomorrow. I have a date.” Ouch.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Karen can be a little oblivious! The role reversal has been a bit difficult and I've obviously taken some liberties with the characters (mostly Karen), but I hope you'll continue to enjoy it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: September 15, 2008 05:53 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
OOH, I am intrigued! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: September 14, 2008 09:34 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Very, very intriguing...I can't wait to read more. I like where this is going, and I like how you've portrayed Karen.
8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 09:18 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
MORE I want more. This looks different and interesting. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it will continue to pique your interest! Thanks for reading and reviewing!