1 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2018 08:20 pm Title: The Girl
All of my feels. All of them. Heartmeltingly wonderful. I always wanted to see Jim’s reaction and them talk through that moment with Alex.
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2009 12:41 pm Title: The Girl
That was too sweet for words!! I just want you to know that I have the biggest grin on my face right now. :)
Wonderful story!!! All the characters were written perfectly! :)
Date: June 05, 2009 11:07 pm Title: The Girl
Lovely lovely lovely! Another great story JAMhands.
Besides all the JAMmy goodness, I really like the way you wrote David Wallace. I share his hatred of multiplication tables too.
Date: November 16, 2008 08:28 pm Title: That Guy
This was SO GOOD! I heart this couple. I loved how Pam reacted to the idea of a terrace. Funny how cute boys want to buy houses for their girls, huh? :)
Great story Ma..I mean, JAMHands!
Date: November 13, 2008 01:16 pm Title: The Girl
That was perfect. Absolutely the right resolution. I liked the mislead that they would move to NYC. That felt very in character with Jim and with the show itself. But it was even more right for Pam to not actually want that. To call bullshit on the Manhattan art scene elitism. Excellent work.
Date: November 12, 2008 09:51 am Title: That Guy
Second reading. Can't remember if I reviewed the first time. Calling DW was an excellent idea, their scene in this seems dead on to me. First time I've seen the idea of Jim initiating a backup plan, and you wrote a great story. And there's another chapter now I see! Yay! :)
Date: November 11, 2008 06:05 pm Title: The Girl
WOW! I am so glad they talked it out. I hope it works that way on the show.
Date: November 11, 2008 05:50 pm Title: That Guy
So Sweet. Jim will really do anything for Pam.
9 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2008 07:04 am Title: The Girl
This story = fabulous.
I've been struggling with that last scene from last week's ep all week long trying to think of a way that it wouldn't cause drama...and you came up with it in a perfect little two chapter piece! Love it! And of course the fluff is wonderful. :-) Yay!
Date: November 11, 2008 06:39 am Title: That Guy
Wow, you write some of the best Jim dialogue out there, and you throw in his body language as well. I simply loved this.
Excellent job.
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2008 12:39 am Title: The Girl
“You’re not mister urban, let’s go clubbing until dawn, glued to your blackberry guy. You’re the get a big goofy dog, mow the lawn, have a basketball hoop in the driveway kind of guy,”
THAT is so freaking Jim.
You scare me, it's like you climed in my brain and wrote what I wanted to read, seriously it was perfect.
I love how as soon as he mentioned the terrace she got all excited... it was just amazingly perfect.
I think you should KEEP on writing lol.
9 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 10:18 pm Title: The Girl
I really liked this piece. I loved that Pam and Jim are in completely different places and mindsets after Alex's little speech and I liked that Pam was able to talk Jim off the ledge. I hope that Jim is able to curb his tendency to jump in and try to solve everything before he talks to Pam as they go forward because I think it'll save him a lot of stress. I loved Pam's description of Jim's ideal living because I could totally see that too. Really great, realistic resolution to the NYC issue.
Date: November 10, 2008 10:14 pm Title: The Girl
Ok...when he said "I just want to be your guy", I nearly died. This was beyond romantic. Very, very good, JAMhands. I loved this!
Date: November 10, 2008 08:34 pm Title: The Girl
Yay! So much to love about this fic -- Jim having the guts to admit that he identified with Alex -- and that Roy got under his skin, and realizing he should talk to Pam about that house!
Yes, Jim is totally the goofy dog & basketball hoop in the driveway sort. And Pam has been in a relationship before -- she knows what she wants (now).
I could totally see this being how the Jam!Angst is resolved, but the writers will probably want to put us all through the wringer first. Nicely done, JAMhands.
Date: November 10, 2008 08:06 pm Title: The Girl
Dang. What another great chapter and another great story. I like how you tied their discussion back to Casino Night and Crime Aid, instead of Boys and Girls. It was kind of a surprise that Jim still thought that Alex was trying to make a romantic play for Pam. “You’re slipping away, soon you’ll be gone. It was his last chance”. Loved the discussion of his insecurities too. It’s nice to hear them talk about the house together. I have a feeling we won't get that luxury from the show. Again, excellent story. I’ve really enjoyed all 3 of your stories and can’t wait to read more-keep writing!
Date: November 10, 2008 07:58 pm Title: The Girl
Great story! I really enjoyed it and I thought Jim's idea of offering to move to NYC would be something Jim would definitely entertain if Pam showed the slightest interest in staying. But I continue to get the gist from this entire LDR thing, that Pam realizes that she's a Scranton gal at heart, and that there's nothing out there she wants more than her guy.
Thanks for this sweet story.
Date: November 10, 2008 07:15 pm Title: The Girl
Woohoo, let's see him talk his way through it. Can Jim put his money where his mouth is? I'm not sure what "money" would be in this context, but there are such things as money shots, and yes, I think there's a that's what she said somewhere in there.
Great job! I loved Pam getting all excited about the house and her whole thing about NY being the only place being crap. I hope you have plans to take this long term because I'd love to see them working on the house and moving in. Keep it up!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 06:54 pm Title: The Girl
This makes me happy. I'm a big fan of copious fluff when it's written this well. Very sweet and romantic. Thanks for continuing.
Date: November 10, 2008 03:10 pm Title: That Guy
Very well written. I wish this is what would happen on the show, but I'm sure they'll be giving us more drama first.
Date: November 09, 2008 11:35 am Title: That Guy
Keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2008 06:09 am Title: That Guy
As much as I love both Jim and Pam in Scranton, this is what I would want to happen if the other option is to break them up. I think that this is great! Definately continue (and maybe forward it to the Office writers)!!!!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 11:43 pm Title: That Guy
Great! I like this solution to the NY/Scranton problem.
Date: November 08, 2008 07:57 pm Title: That Guy
No time for a proper review tonight but I'll add my vote to the others that I'm sure are there already. You should definitely continue!
Date: November 08, 2008 07:06 pm Title: That Guy
This is fabulous. I really liked that Jim took the initiative to see if it was possible to make things work for Pam,even though I think she's going to want to come home. I'd love to read more, please continue.
(I so love David Wallace.)
Date: November 08, 2008 06:19 pm Title: That Guy
Oh this is very nice. I especially loved the scene with David Wallace -- I think you really nailed his voice. Can't wait to see where you take this.