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Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2016 07:17 pm Title: Similitude

What ever you do, don't Let that toad get Pam!

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2016 07:17 pm Title: Similitude

What ever you do, don't Let that toad get Pam!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Similitude

It's funny, when I read this thinking it was Jim's POV, it was sweet. He was going to fight for the girl he loved. When I realized it was from Alex's POV, it seemed stalkerish. Great job!

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 07:05 pm Title: Similitude

Wow, ya got me on that! Didn't see it coming. But let me just say, Alex is no Jim Halpert. Let's just hope Pam realizes that! Nice job.

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 05:13 pm Title: Similitude

I can't believe so many people were fooled by this. I knew what it was even before I started reading it. That said, it's was very disturbing at how believable this could be. It kind of makes me feel less hateful towards the guy…just a bit.

Author's Response: Um... thanks?

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 12:57 pm Title: Similitude

oh, wow.

you got me this time, I really thought you were talking about Jim being the guy that had a plan.

did I mention I hate alex? xD

awesome story, I'd like it as a one-shot, but it's your story (:

Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 09:00 am Title: Similitude

Niiice. You totally sucked me in without being too heavy-handed with the descriptions. Cool.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 06:27 am Title: Similitude

oh SNAP! Did not see that one coming. Genius.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 06:25 am Title: Similitude

Ha! I guessed where you were heading, but I love the parallels you create between Alex and Jim. The difference, of course, is that Jim really does Get Her and Roy did not. Not that Alex would agree! Nicely done.

Reviewer: elliehalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 05:08 am Title: Similitude

Wow.
I think my heart seriously just stopped on the word "Alex." Was not expecting that. Glad I'm not the only one seeing the Jim/Alex parallels (I mean, duh). Still can't help hating his guts.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm not an Alex fan either.  

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 12:05 am Title: Similitude

I admit you had me, I did not see that coming, I just thought it was another Jim meeting Pam fic. Tbh I did not think Alex was into Pam or anything, but nevertheless I thought this fic was brilliant. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!  :-)

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 10:13 pm Title: Similitude

Ooh, nice twist.  It's really interesting how many similarities there are between the two character's storylines; nice play on it.



Author's Response: Thanks.  Hopefully it won't end as well for Alex as it did for Jim.

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 09:45 pm Title: Similitude

WOW. Totally got me there at the end! I was in the middle of eating cereal and my hand seriously stopped mid stream to my mouth! Woah! I hope this one has a happy ending that involves Jim kicking his ass!

Author's Response:

If I have interrupted perfectly good cereal eating, then I will have done my job.  Thanks!

Reviewer: upsidedown Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 09:31 pm Title: Similitude

Oh no. I didn't even realize this was about Alex until I clicked away, and then I came back and read it again because it was that good. I'm looking forward to what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 09:25 pm Title: Similitude

Nice job but I can't even read a fanfic involving Alex.  I admire your effort though. 

Author's Response:

Me neither.  No, seriously I know what you mean but for some reason I like writing stories from the point of view of people I don't like.  I wrote a couple of Karen ones too and I freaking hated her.  If it makes you feel any better, I can assure you this one is actually about JAM even if it's told from Alex's point of view.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Similitude

haha, you fooled me!

Author's Response: I'm glad it worked!  Thanks.

Reviewer: emwitz Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Similitude

Very intriguing! I hope you continue :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: epiphilly Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 07:18 pm Title: Similitude

Oh, that was good! Fantastic writing. You definitely got me. I totally thought it was Jim's thoughts right until the very end. I think you could leave it there if you really wanted to, but it does have wonderful potential for further development. In any case, well done on a great piece!

Author's Response: I decided I am going to continue it, although it may be a few days before I can get the next chapter up.  Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 07:00 pm Title: Similitude

Oh, you totally got me. I was thinking, wow, another Pam met Jim fiction (I should have paid attention to the title), this is nice, and then wham!

I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!  That was my intention so I'm glad it actually worked.

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 06:58 pm Title: Similitude

the ending was absolutely fantastic!
i thought i was reading early jim and pam, and then saw alex at the end - i love how you put him in the exact situation that jim used to be!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Teach Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Similitude

Ok, so I've read fanfic here forever without registering or reviewing. But your fic motivated me because that ending was such a surprise! I thought I was so savvy but I guess I'm not! Looking forward to the next installment...

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, that's awesome!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 06:42 pm Title: Similitude

The ending rocks.  Don't wait too long for the next installment please.

Author's Response: I'm working on it... thanks for reading!

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