9 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
The world needs more Jan fic, especially good Jan fic like this one that doesn't turn her into a needy yet heartless bitch (though it's really a kick in the junk knowing that she's just going to get heartbroken at the end of this).
Date: November 05, 2006 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww. Such a sweet picture of Michael. Love the line abouthow he wants to give affection no one wants from him. And poor Jan, so confused and lonely. Very nice piece. Thanks.
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like to think jan thinks like this... maybe they are meant to be together. micheal is just so sweet sometimes, but then the way he treated her on casino night... ugh. great story!
Author's Response: I know - their dynamic is so twisted and I guess that's why I love their characters so much:) Thanks:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
...despite being so clueless, he is full of affection and warmth that no one really wants from him.
What an amazing insight. This is wonderful work. Poor Jan.
Author's Response: Thanks. I think this is the most heartbreaking thing about Michael. I can't forget little Michael on that TV show, saying he wanted kids so that he would have friends... He really needs someone he could take care of.
8 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job! Like the Jan analysis a lot
Author's Response: Thanks:) I think there's still a lot more about her to analyze:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I think we finally have a plausible reason for why Jan would have entertained staying over when she clearly finds Michael so awful in the light of day. Good insight into Jan.
Author's Response: Thanks:) I guess I needed a reason, too, so I wrote it:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! You've nailed Jan (TWSS!) and it's very well written!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah, poor, lonely confused Jan. The way you've shown her, I can totally see why Jan would appreciate a little Michael lovin'.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
8 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1
...he is full of affection and warmth that no one really wants from him.
That line is a punch in the gut. Terrifically sad.
I love that Jan has shaved her legs twice in one day and doesn't want to think about what that means. And your description of their conversation provides a nice "lost scene".
Author's Response: Thank you:)