Date: December 17, 2009 06:52 pm Title: That’s the second time he’s wanted to attack you
I'm sorry for not posting sooner. This is one of my favorites and was so happy you had updated!
Date: December 03, 2009 11:38 pm Title: That’s the second time he’s wanted to attack you
This story is so cute. I love Ellie and Ben and how much Jim and Pam clearly enjoy being parents.
Date: December 03, 2009 07:16 am Title: Memories that Fade
I'm enjoying this... Atleast someone is updating these days.
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2009 09:03 pm Title: That’s the second time he’s wanted to attack you
Please do not jump off a clip, I'm really enjoying this :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2009 03:53 pm Title: That’s the second time he’s wanted to attack you
you should jump off a-- no, just kidding. ;oP
i'm so glad to see an update! i was wondering if he would show her the documentary.
can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: November 01, 2009 01:21 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Great chapter, I always get excited when I see this updated. I love seeing that Pam is remembering more and the sweet moments with Ellie. Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and also reviewing. I'm glad you are liking this story.
Date: October 31, 2009 09:56 am Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
That was seriously beautiful. I can't wait to read more of this, so get busy young lady :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really aprreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2009 06:10 am Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Wonderful chapter! Looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much =)
Date: October 30, 2009 10:27 pm Title: Memories that Fade
good for chapter. one thing, i'm surprised you didn't have pam or jim reacting to the hospital setting more, seeing as pam was there for so long post-accident, and jim had a lot of trouble with her while she was in her coma. still a good chapter though; i can't wait to see more of pam remembering. update soon? =)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you are liked the chapter.
I actually had a small scene about Pam and Jim remembering the hospital and going through all the emotions that the setting evoked. But, it was taking away from what I wanted to get out of this chapter. It was becoming a basket case of emotions so I just decided to focus on one thing, rather than overwhelm everyone. Even towards the final editing I wanted to put it back, but I didn't. (Maybe I should have)Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: October 30, 2009 08:50 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Scary. I am so sorry your friend had to go through that. I couldn't imagine. I am enjoying this story immensely and can't wait for you to continue.
Author's Response: It was a bit scary, but her daughter is fine now. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2009 06:06 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
wow. that was amazing! you are so good at all the trauma and realistic situations - you always leave me impressed! great chapter and i can't wait for the next half!
my only suggestion, which sadly is a little late since this chapter is already posted would be for jim and pam to be a little more nervous by being at the hospital. well, maybe not nervous but feeling a little reminiscent of the last time they were at hospitals - for the birth of their kids and the accident. i just thought maybe they'd have some bad memories which might trigger some different reactions or mannerisms while in the facility. just my two cents! :)
anyway, this was a great chapter - and hopefully ellie will be better, or at least they'll figure out what happened to her. and of course finish their date. it's so nice to see pam starting to remember certain events - it's a lot of fun to read those moments happening!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I was a bit hesitant to write about it. It was an scary event for my friend as well as for me. I take a lot of Ellie from the her little girl and it became very close to me.
About the hospital scene. I actually had a whole scene about the anxiety they felt about returning to that same place. But it was kind of stealing from what I wanted to get across. There was too much emotions overlaping... so I decided to cut it.
Thank you so much much for your input. It makes me very happy to know that people are paying attention and actually thining about it after they read it. It's all I ask!
Thanks again
Date: October 30, 2009 05:28 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
:) can't WAIT to see the second half, I'm very very excited@!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! =)
Date: October 30, 2009 03:34 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
love it. can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: October 30, 2009 03:00 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Aw this was really sweet... Loved the title of the chapter and how it came out in the story. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you are liking it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2009 02:22 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Another fabulous chapter for me to adore. Thank you! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: October 17, 2009 10:24 pm Title: Memories that Fade
ah, you're so sweat. i got to watch the whole thing - totally the best episode yet. i loved the few jam moments we got to see, especially the boat and the scene in the church when jim cut his tie -that was the best. jim is so good to pam, such a beautiful moment! keep going with the story, i cam't wait to see what happens next now that pam knows whats going on. will jim ever bring up roy? where is he in the story?
can't wait for the next chapter as much as i can't wait for thursdays! that was cheesy, so what!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 03:40 pm Title: Because I never stopped loving you
Ellie dancing on her Dad shoes was so sweet!! I remember when my Dad did that with me and I loved it. You know I never realized how comical JAM's story sounds. When you watch the story play out, it just seems nomal, when you try and recap it... well I'm just glad Pam saw the funny side right away. Again, you write the best last lines, I had a Awww moment just reading this one.
P.S What was the snippet?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. The image of Ellie dancing on Jim's shoes was one of the first scenes, including Jim dancing with Pam, I had planned for this chapter. I also remember dancing with my dad too!! JAM's story IS very comical. Writing made me think about ALL they went through. Kind of made me appreciate the weddign episode much, much more. And I had to make Pam see the funny side of it. I couldn't write her angry, they are together now, right? The snippet is the last line of the chapter where Pam whispers "I Love you" into his heart for safe-keeping.
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 03:27 pm Title: You have no idea how long I've wanted to do that
Oh I have not reviewed in forever. Bad, bad, cacw. Okay back to the story, You've done a great job showing Pam's, feelings with out saying anything directly. Like when she's enjoying the tea that Jim stocked. It really seemed to me, like we caught a glimpse of Pam, still not being sure that it's her life, that she has the right to be a part of it. I love how she's getting these little bits and pieces back, it's sad to think that she can't remember all the moments we love so well. Ellie and Ben are as cute as ever, it's great that Pam knew just how to handle Ellie's clothes and poor Ben can now take a calm bath. Loved that Pam is now falling for Jim, and that last line? So perfect. Jim maybe a great guy and all, but come on, he's still human!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking the story, and thanks for reviewing! =) A little spolier, Pam will begin to remeber the little moments. And I know Jim is human, but it's just soo awesome writing him a little on the perfect side! =)
9 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2009 09:40 pm Title: And always it will be
I can't wait for the next chapter. I get excited every time I see a new update! I love that she remembered the rain :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm happy you are liking the story. I had to make her remember the rain, cause I'm sure it would be lodged in my brain somewhere such a momentous occasion. Hopefully I'll get the next update up soon.
Date: October 07, 2009 08:11 pm Title: And always it will be
Oh my gosh I was so excited to see that you updated. I LOVE this fic. This was so cute. I love him taking her to the office and the gas station. I cant wait to see what's happening next. I'm all for a mix of fun family stuff (Ben is too adorable) and of course happy near newlywed material too :) Hurry back!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story. The next chapter will definetly focus on the kids, Ellie in particular. It's time for Pam to remember how Ellie came about! And I didn't mention any wedding memories cause I was waiting for the episode to air, now I have a lot to work with. It will be good to incorporate all the little things (Jim's tie). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I will update as soon as possible.
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2009 05:48 pm Title: And always it will be
oh wow. that was fabulous! what a great idea of jim's to take pam back to the location of all their biggest memories, good thinking Dedeen! i still love this story as much as the first time i read it, if not more so because now pam is slowly remembering and their relationship seems so strong now.
i'm with you, i can't wait for the wedding! i think it truly will be the best episode yet. sadly i'm babysitting tomorrow night, so i may have to stop watching halfway through and go home. too bad. then i'll pick up where i left off on the computer later. anyway, great job with this chapter, i think this was my favorite so far, and i can't wait to talk about the wedding with you later!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much. Your reviews always leaves me smiling! The idea for Jim to take Pam to those locations, seemed ideal. It is an enormous part of their history. Especially the office.
Sooo, the wedding, when I firsr watched it I thought it needed more JAM moments. I wanted to see them together ALL THE TIME! But that didn't happened. But when I re-watched it (again and again, and again... You get the drift) I loved it. Best epidsode ever! The end with all the scenes from the boat had me crying. I hope you didn't have to stop halfway.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: October 07, 2009 04:38 pm Title: And always it will be
yes. awesome =] can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you soo soo much fore reading. I'll be posting soon. =)
Date: October 07, 2009 03:22 pm Title: And always it will be
ahhh so good! I'm a huge fan of this story and EH so I'm happy you're continuing on with it! Keep going! I'm really getting giddy for tomorrow night already!! :D This isn't helping me not be so giddy! Lovely job! I can't wait to see when Pam remembers it all or where this is going. Thanks- can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I plan to keep it going. Pam will remember slowly and the memories will become more frequent and more vivid (I tease, sry!). I will try my best to update soon! Thanks you so much for reviewing. =)
ps. The wedding was awesome
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2009 02:42 pm Title: And always it will be
So worth the wait. I love how you have Jim taking Pam on an adventure to rekindle her memory.
Can't wait to see her remembering more, and some interaction between Jim, Pam Ellie and Ben :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking the story. The next chapter there will be lots of interactions with the kids, specially Ellie. Pam needs to know how much of a surprise she was! I hope to update soon. Thanks for reading =)
Date: October 07, 2009 01:02 pm Title: Memories that Fade
Loving this story so much. I was so happy to see an update today with all of the wedding anticipation floating around. You're very patient writing out this story the way you do, letting Pam slowly come back into herself. Has to be very tricky. Great job, I can't wait for the next update. Get to typing! The only break I'll allow you is a one-hour intermission. The time is your choice. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking this story! I've been pretty patient with Pam, but not so much on the following chapters. It's time to crank it up, right? Pam's memories will become more frequent, and a little spoiler here, the next chapter Pam will know all about Ellie's surprise appearence. Thanks for reading and reviewing.