Date: October 12, 2009 07:42 am Title: October 12th
Too cute! I hope you do keep going with this. 'sunny side up' had me laughing! Great jonb!
Author's Response: hahaha. Glad you liked that line more than Jim did! ;-)
Date: October 12, 2009 06:36 am Title: October 12th
Lovefool, my darling, you can continue to write about nothing and I would be perfectly happy. Really.
Ever since the wedding he'd found himself in sort of this blissful state of intoxicated fatigue...It was just her...and this place...and married. And her. You make me feel all schmoopy with stuff like that, and schmoopy is just fine!
"I think I want to take a bite out of your tush for dinner." Love. It. The tush and that line ; ) ::settles in for more nothing::
Author's Response: Aah...thank you Nan. I love feeling schmoopy too - obviously. Thanks so much for the words of encouragement. You want more nothing? I got more for you coming up soon! ;-)
Date: October 12, 2009 12:31 am Title: October 12th
Nothing at all??? That was SO GOOD. I don't know - I kind of like how this was about nothing in particular. I am so with Pam, I wanna take a bite out of his tushie - and LMAO at the denying your child line, oh she is gonna have him WHIPPED, wait, she has already, love it.
Write more please, like right now. I'm not allowed out of the house because of swine flu :( OINK, so this so made my morning!
Author's Response: Aw...I'm sorry you're sick! I will do all I can to make you feel better! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Stay tuned!
9 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 11:56 pm Title: October 12th
Wow...you are killing me with this multi-chapters story of Jim and Pam's honeymoon! It's so sweet, sexy, adorable, and everything in between.
Also, thank you for bringing back the image of Jim in his tighty whities. Now I can go watch "Niagara" over and over (like everyone else on MTT ;o) and eagerly wait for your next installment!
Author's Response: Sweet, sexy, and adorable...three of my favorite words. THANK YOU! Also...I consider it my duty to bring back Jim in the tighty whities...no thank you necessary. ;-)
Date: October 11, 2009 11:33 pm Title: October 12th
Okay, take this as a compliment. You write boring very well, like one of the best people on this site. You pull off "casual" for them in a totally believable way. It irks me when people have them living normal lives in fics and they're completely dramatic or sappy or just way unrealistic. But this is totally great. And I love that this update came on the day that I've been celebrating some of your fics, lol. I swear on everything I read Baby Talk pretty much straight through about four hours ago, haha. Over a plate of fried chicken, ironically. Kinda like wings, I guess. Anyway, awesome job. I can't wait for the next chapter, this was pretty cute! =)
Author's Response: Oooh! I must be psychic! I love that you were re-reading babytalk! And thanks so much for saying that this comes off as real and not too schmaltzy. I like fluff, but not the saccharine stuff...so thanks for that. That's a huge compliment!
7 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 07:32 pm Title: October 10th
Awww, this was so sweet. Great honeymoon fic!
Author's Response: thank you ma'am! :-) Glad you're enjoying it and hope you continue to!
Date: October 11, 2009 07:14 pm Title: October 10th
So adorable!! I love the spider line, I literally laughed out loud. You really did a great job of capturing both their personalities so well, even Jim asleep was perfect Jim.
Author's Response: Jim asleep was one of my favorite parts to write for some reason! So weird! Glad you're weird too! ;-)
Date: October 10, 2009 04:36 pm Title: October 10th
Sooo cute, and mmm I can definitely see Jim being a boobie man :)Love how you are on a fic writing spree!
Author's Response: ROFL. I'm glad that came off as real to others! lol. Jim is a man afterall...haha
Date: October 10, 2009 10:39 am Title: October 10th
Very cute. Will you be writing more of this?
Author's Response: Yes ma'am! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: October 10, 2009 08:22 am Title: October 10th
Ha! Loved it. If I had an option of bungee jumping or lounging around a hotel with Jim Halpert then I'd pick the "boring" one too! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: You better freaking believe it! I totally agree!
Date: October 10, 2009 07:33 am Title: October 10th
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Huzzah for honeymoon sex! Huzzah for lovefool! I'm so 'cited--keep going!
Author's Response: ROFL. That cracked me up! Huzzah for NanReg!
Date: October 10, 2009 06:52 am Title: October 10th
ooh I wish I could be that bored! So great. You never let me down LoveFool - another great story! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Why thank you WildBerryJam! I wish my life were this boring too.
Date: October 10, 2009 06:33 am Title: October 10th
Love this, and you should definitely continue. Very, very cute
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!!!
Date: October 10, 2009 05:32 am Title: October 10th
If this is what boring means, I so want to be boring. Please say you're continuing this - it will make the thought of no honeymoon insight so much more bearable and plus, I LOVE it. :)
Author's Response: hahaha, well I'm sure you know now that I am indeed continuing...it's a lot of fun. I'm glad it's fun for you too, lady!
Date: October 10, 2009 02:23 am Title: October 10th
I love this. I love how you took the accusations of Jim and Pam being boring now and owned the hell out of them. Love your boringness, people! Embrace it! Plus I totally remember both me and my husband being sooo tired after the wedding that all we wanted to do all honeymoon was eat, sleep and take long, leisurely walks. Well, maybe not all, but you know. So points for realism there.
Author's Response: Oh, awesome! I'm glad this is ringing true for you...and yeah I'm with you on the borigness. For me...this is what makes these two so very "real." They're not the typical couple on TV who have to have all this drama to be interesting...I find their quiet little relationship infinitely interesting, and it lends itself to great fanfic!
Date: October 10, 2009 12:18 am Title: October 10th
i totally and completely agree with all these much better writers who reviewed ahead of me. i've decided that the only thing i like writing is reviews. so there.
and i'll just give you a ten again.
Author's Response: LOL. You responded just PERFECTLY my dear! :-)
Date: October 10, 2009 12:17 am Title: October 10th
ah, (extremely audible sigh) that was perfect. thank you SO MUCH for shutting up the persistent voice inside of you and posting this anyway. i love how casual they are, all they really need is the two of them and their love for each other takes care of the rest. great job with this, and i loved every single last word of it! i swear i will find a way to give you an 11 for this. absolutely i do promise. :)
ah ha, i'll review again and give you another 1. there we go!
Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you for my 11 Pamelamorganhalpert! so glad you enjoyed this. And you know...now I'm glad I shut off my internal posting monitor too! ;-)
Date: October 10, 2009 12:10 am Title: October 10th
Ahh, I was waiting for your post-ep contribution! Honeymoon fic needs to happen for months, I'm glad yours is one of them out so soon. This is adorable, I love how you write these two. Impatiently waiting for moooore. ;)
Author's Response: Why thank you Ms. Yanana! I couldn't seem to help myself from jumping into the fray.
Date: October 09, 2009 11:41 pm Title: October 10th
EEEEEEEE!!! I love it! can't wait to see more!
this totally makes me weird, but i kind of like the idea of "first married sex" being the morning after. to quote pam: "never underestimate the power of a good night's sleep."
Author's Response: hahaha! Finally that line makes something good happen! ROFL. Thanks for reading and reviewing FlonkertonChamp!
Date: October 09, 2009 11:21 pm Title: October 10th
WOW!! That was incredibely perfect. Like...seriously. That is exactly how it happened in my mind, but you managed to get it on paper (so to speak..). WOW.
Author's Response: Aw...I love that you were thinking this is how it went too! Awesome. Thanks for reading!