10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2010 04:29 pm Title: S3 - "Sorry Seems To Be The Hardest Word"
This is lovely! I've not seen beyond S3 yet, so can't read on. But these first two chapters are beautiful. :)
Author's Response: Sal, thank you for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it! And you haven't seen beyond S3?!? Get to it, woman! ;o)
Date: February 05, 2010 03:16 pm Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
Aw, I thought I had reviewed this, but apparently not. I loved each and every chapter of this, it was all very sweet. Your themes to the song titles were wonderful. Good job. =)
Author's Response: yanana, thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I'm so glad that you thought the song titles fit for each chapter because those were my original inspirations :o) Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 05:02 pm Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
I ADORE this so much. I don't want it to be over. I DON'T :(
Author's Response: You're so sweet! Thanks, Sally!
Date: February 01, 2010 11:10 am Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
My favorite scene of these was the computer scene. It felt very real and organic Jim and Pam, and incorporating the Ferrari from the registry was a stroke of genius. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks jazzfan! I loved their wedding site so I was excited to write something about that.
Date: February 01, 2010 10:57 am Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
:) Love it..Love the 25 years later
Author's Response: Me too :D Thanks for reading and reviewing, JHalpert!
Date: February 01, 2010 10:14 am Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
I love when Jim and Pam end up with a big happy family
Author's Response: I know. All I want for Jim and Pam is a big happy family.
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 09:32 am Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
Wow, these last two chapters are wonderful! I especially love the "25 Years Later" It's just so utterly perfect. And the song lyrics for this last chapter are perfect. I kind of got choked up at the final lyrics. I think I'll be re-reading this often. It's really lovely. You're a great writer!
Author's Response: Deedldee, thank you so much for being so wonderful in reading this story and letting me know. Your review really made my day! The "25 years later" idea is tied to another one of my stories, "Phone Calls", because I just love the idea of a happily ever after with our favorite couple in the far-off future. Thanks once again!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 07:26 am Title: S6 - "Somewhere Over The Rainbow"
Whatever Pam was expecting, it was not this. But then again, when it came to this amazing man, nothing was expected. Not when he first confessed his love, not when he asked her out on their first real date, not when he proposed. Not the house that they were making their home and then…their baby. And she didn’t realize tears were rolling down her cheeks until his thumbs started to wipe them away. So *sigh* great. I love seeing all these unexpected events tied up in one lovely paragraph. Fantastic job, my dear. ::presents bkwrm with one dozen roses and a tiara::
Author's Response: Flowers AND a tiara? You're too good to me!! You know I couldn't have done this w/o you, Nancy! *hugs* And I didn't realized that all of their events were unexpected until you pointed it out to me! You're the best, babe!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2010 11:12 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
Fave chapter yet,beautiful and amazing!!!
Author's Response: Awww, shucks! Thank you for the kind words, Sally :D
Date: January 30, 2010 02:38 am Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
the authors chapter notes reminds me of the killer song, b35;b34; i see london, i see sams town b35;b34; xD
gosh the part where Pam pushed him onto his back and climbed atop him, was great, shut him up with that, thats a really good way we should all learn, to make someone stop talking.
Author's Response: Hahaha...eso es una buena via a hacer callar a alguien (encontre este frase en mi diccionario :D ) Pero solamenta si ese alguien es similar a Jim y tu eres su Pam ;o)
Date: January 29, 2010 08:24 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
I get goosebumps reliving the whole OMG Pam's pregnant thing :) I love this chapter. I suck at reviewing, but I will go back and review all the chapters, because I love them all!
OH! And I love this: "(although they’d had this conversation before and he’d just tell her that that’s not how it works, this deserving business.)" Yes. That. :)
Author's Response: That moment in "Company Picnic" was such a great moment, wasn't it? Ang, there is no need to go back and review each chapter (unless you feel like it ;o) It really is enough to have such a wonderful review and to know that you've enjoyed this story so far :o) Thank you!
Date: January 29, 2010 02:45 pm Title: S3 - "Sorry Seems To Be The Hardest Word"
I really like the song you chose for S3. The lyrics are woven into the chapter so nicely.
Author's Response: This is one of my favorite chapters to write so I'm so glad you thought the lyrics and the story went well together. Thanks once again, VB!
Date: January 29, 2010 02:44 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
Very sweet! I like your choices of songs for each chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Vampiric Blood! This story is a case of "You Know You Are Completely Obsessed w/ the Office" when you listen to these songs and thought of Jim and Pam :D
Date: January 29, 2010 02:11 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
Sorry I have been aloof in reviewing this one. I love this story and this last update really got me emotional. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for the lovely review, khand3stooges! I'm so happy to know that you're enjoying this story :o)
Date: January 29, 2010 02:40 am Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
Sorry for the lack of in depth and constructive review but everything about this chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy. The happiness and love just radiates! Looking forward to your season 6 chapter :D
Author's Response: M&S, there's really no need for apologizing when you leave such a nice review :o) Makes ME all warm and fuzzy reading it ;o) Thank you so much!
Date: January 28, 2010 11:56 pm Title: S4 - "Fever"
im glad the last one wasnt the ending =, also "bp" jaja i love that, its like he's talking about an era, a really angsty but romatic era.i learn a new frase too "the post-coital bliss" lol that sounds good!!
about the review thing u can use the word "comentario" or i think the oficial word is "reseña" but that one is to formal. and one more thing, now that we're helping each other, i notice in most of your comments to me, u use the word "para" when the right one is "por" i thing it must be confising for u cuz they're both "for" in english, try to use "para" when its more like when u do something with a purpose(i do this "para" something)
anyway i hope this help u and also u are totally welcome to correct me too.
lol i talked a lot =/. now im going to read the next chapter *sigt*... this is bliss!!
see u
Author's Response: Siempre tengo problemas entre 'por' y 'para'. Es muy dificil. Pero muchas gracias por ayudame! Oh, tu ingles es muy bueno con solamente algunos errores (minor spelling). Estoy muy feliz que le gusta "bp" porque pienso que antes Jim estaba con Pam, era un tiempo muy diferente tan cuando el estaba con ella, conoces? Gracias por el comentario :D
10 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2010 09:36 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
That was great! I think it's my favorite chapter, the way you pieced together different moments surrounding one song was beautiful. I always listen to the songs as I'm reading and at the end think to myself 'wow, I wonder if the author was thinking about this song when they wrote the chapter' - then realizing that you had written the chapter based off of this song!
Anyways, great job, and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that you're also listening to the music while reading this! When writing this story, the music was what inspired me so it's very encouraging when readers like you enjoy the music as well as the story! Once again, thank you very much, pamela, for the lovely review :o)
Date: January 28, 2010 08:12 pm Title: S4 - "Fever"
I like how you ended the sexual fever with the real thing. Very cute.
Author's Response: Hee, thanks jazzfan! It was bound to happen what's with all the exchange of saliva between these two ;o)
Date: January 28, 2010 07:11 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
Lovely. I enjoyed this look at their journey.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks once again for the lovely review, nqllisi!
Date: January 28, 2010 07:07 pm Title: S4 - "Fever"
Beautiful work, tying the story to the lyrics. Nice, soft comedic touch with the last vignette.
Author's Response: I love these songs a lot and love Jim and Pam just as much so it was natural to combine the two. The bonus is having readers like you who enjoyed it as well :o)
Date: January 28, 2010 07:03 pm Title: S3 - "Sorry Seems To Be The Hardest Word"
“Say it again,” he whispered.
Oh, I like that. That seems precisely right. Enjoying this so far!
Author's Response: Thanks, nqllisi! That's one of my favorite lines as I imagine that Jim would want to hear Pam say that again and again.
Date: January 28, 2010 06:51 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
I loved it. Great mix of sweet and sexy. And I know just what you mean about that "world peace" look Jim gets. We need to see more of that on the show. I think each episode needs at least two moments where Jim has his "I have the most amazing girl on the planet" look.
Author's Response: I completely agree with you. Is it too much to ask that our favorite couple exchange more of those I-love-you-let's-go-home-and-do-it look? I think not ;o) Thank you so much for the review, andtheivy!
10 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2010 06:40 pm Title: S5 - "Crazy Love"
There was a young author from Seattle... Forget it--no way I can make that work : D Bkwrm, this whole story was a pleasure to read. Oh, forgot to tell you, I love the line at the end where Jim hugs Pam so tightly she squeaks. How joyful is that?! Keep it up, my friend.
Author's Response: I love that scene in "Company Picnic." The way he enveloped her and then pulled her tighter into him....GAH! I love these two so, so much! Of course, you already knew that ;o) Thanks, darling!
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2010 04:49 pm Title: S4 - "Fever"
Sorry, bad haiku form at the end there. Maybe I should go show it to my therapist (sorry, couldn't help myself! brownie points if you can guess my obvious reference!)
cute chapter! typing w/ 1 hand... apologies...
Author's Response: Oh no! I'm horrible at pop culture stuff, pamela! Even worse than Michael Scott! I guess that means no brownie points for me. Boooooo! Tell me anyways.
Once again, thank you! Also, I'm impressed that there you have no typos even when typing w/ one hand ;o)
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2010 04:44 pm Title: S3 - "Sorry Seems To Be The Hardest Word"
That was so sweet, and I loved the song, too! The ending was so perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, pamela, for continuing to stick with this story! I love this song too. A lot, as a matter of fact! And the last 5 minutes of The Job never ceased to make me smile.