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Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2010 09:48 am Title: Plan A

VERY nice! I forgot about "Plan A". Cool revisiting!

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2010 12:53 am Title: Plan A

What a fantastic story. Glad to see you back!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2010 02:27 pm Title: Plan A

Finally have a lull at work and catching up on fics slowly. This is such a great 'Jim's first day' fic. Not over the top or anything, nice and subtle, and your characterizations are spot on. I really like this!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 18, 2010 07:15 am Title: Plan A

I have missed you *tackles to floor*

Loved it. I really enjoy reading stories from the past, how they became Jim AND Pam, you know? Thanks for sharing this with us

Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you! It's awesome to be back. I drifted away from this site for a while, especially after that hacking incident thing, but I'm back now with a whole set of new ideas :) I'm glad you liked this, I love stories from their past myself. It's so tempting to make their first meeting this momentous thing, because it totally is, but also it's just a meeting between two people. I totally got a little carried away on the momentous side of things though!

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2010 07:23 pm Title: Plan A

This is definitely one of my favorite fics of Jim's first day. I love what you made of his first impression of Pam, and how that one thought that was just "fleeting" was going to be stuck in his head for a long time (forever). All of these old stories are so great to read now that they're so much more, married with a family and all. Thanks for writing this! Beautiful, as is all of your other work.

Author's Response: THANK YOU :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's so tempting to make their first meeting like this big momentous change-your-life moment, because it *was* but at the time it was also just a first meeting between two strangers who sort of have this spark. Yeah I'm a sucker for the older stories now they're happy in the show, it's so much more fun to read them knowing the ending.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Plan A

Positively LOVED this take on Jim's first day at D-M! Characterizations were spot on. Great dialogue. Don't know why but "And then there were two." really just hit home with me. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: THANK YOU :) I'm really thrilled you liked this, especially the characterisations because I've had a massive hiatus from writing this pairing and I was a little nervous to post this.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2010 03:36 pm Title: Plan A

Aw, this was so sweet, shootingstars. Very nice account of how that first day might have gone. And to think just how much PresentDay!Jim could tell Young!Jim...

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed. Bless young!Jim, so much coming in his future!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2010 11:08 am Title: Plan A

Oh, that is just gorgeous. Pam's kindness, their instant spark, and that last line...OMG, that last line. Beautiful.

Author's Response: THANK YOU :) I'm really thrilled you enjoyed this.

Reviewer: Katie J Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2010 11:03 am Title: Plan A

Awww :) That was such a sweet story, with great characterisation - the Candy exchange amused me and I can just hear them saying it :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you felt the characterisation worked because it's been a while since I wrote these two so I was a bit nervous of getting back into things :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2010 07:20 am Title: Plan A

Hey, shootingstars!  How nice of you to visit :)  Such a fun story.  You've perfectly captured that momentous first meeting.  Your characterizations were spot on. 

Pam gestures between them both. “And then there were two.”
And now there are three :)  So glad that thought stuck with Jim.



Author's Response: Hi! It's great to be back :) When MTT had that hacking problem my firefox stopped letting me get onto the site for a while and I just drifted away but I am so totally back now. I've missed this fandom and all the awesome people on this site. I'm really glad you liked this, it's always lovely to hear your thoughts!

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