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Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 04:20 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Is it hot in here? Cause it feels really hot...Damn!

I wore my burgandy Converse today in honor of this story!!! hahaha

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 03:14 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

*wipes the fog off glasses*
wow.
I can't tell you how much I look forward to an update to your story. Seriously, it borders on pathetic.
*laughs*
thanks!
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 02:33 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Gah, Mox.  Umm....yeah.  Good chapter. 

More coherently - you had everything I love about them - and everything I imagine I love all wrapped up in a pretty bow here.  Them being playful, Jim taking care of Pam, and then both of them um...taking care of...other things. 

Great job.  Get to typing you. :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 01:26 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Hmmm, wow.  That was indeed full of hotness and sweetness on all accounts.  Lovely!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:59 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Breakroom make-out sessions, roof top naps, adorable IM conversations AND phone sex? So much to love! Thanks!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:57 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

HAHA! Jim showing off in front of Roy! And Strictly Ballroom! Love! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:18 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

If their phone sex is this hot, what's it going to be like in person? You really have a gift for extended....verbal foreplay, Moxie. Can't wait for the next encounter (oh, and btw, I think they can leave their pajamas at home.)

Author's Response:

I wish I could say the gift was based on extensive knowledge of Jim Halpert.....

And I have an 8 hour plane ride to get Ch 11 right.  Pity the person sitting next to me!  :-)

Thanks for the confidence building! 

Reviewer: Clare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:09 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

Holy fricken hell woman...... wow! If my brain ever returns from it's current liquid state I'll write something intelligent until then I offer: HoooooooooooBoy!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:00 pm Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Freaking Chucks and phone sex -- you are too freaking much, Moxie!  Love the exchange about the word 'date' -- I felt the same way about my husband when we met. 

BTW -- you have me looking forward to Friday, for once (Day 11, anyway....) 

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 11:58 am Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Great - so how am I supposed to get any more work done today, Ms. Moxie? You'd better finish up these last two chapters soon because you cannot keep us waiting until Valentine's Day! Or maybe you are just that cruel... ;-)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 11:57 am Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Oh!  I loved this chapter!  So, so good.  I swear, you are so creative with these gifts.  A pair of Chucks is such an awesome idea for Jim!  And the phone call at the end?  Oh my God.  So hot!  Please please please update soon!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 10:57 am Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Loved the coversations in this chapter.  Very witty and hot.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 10:54 am Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

That was all kinds of hot. 

Reviewer: SixFlightsUp Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 10:34 am Title: On The Tenth Day of Christmas

Wow. Damn. Yeah....

Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:10 am Title: On The First Day of Christmas

ok, i thought you were killing me before with the whole one chapter at a time.. but now.. TWO DAYS!! two days i'm waiting for an update.. you're just cruel... ^_^

Reviewer: Petty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 03:30 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

Okay, I just discovered this fic and I only have one thing to say

You must update. You must update NOW.

I am so in love with this fic! (Okay, that was 2 things, but hopefully you don't mind)

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 10:49 am Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

10-11-12

I-CAN'T-WAIT.......

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 08:03 am Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

After all the debate on this chapter, I think it turned out nicely! Realistic that she wouldn't stay this way. Okay, looking forward to a dramatic ending over the next 3 days! ;)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 06:43 am Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

Curious as to why she had to leave but a wonderful chapter overall.  Dancing lessons could be a whole new fic.

Author's Response:

all in good time!

Heh - I like the idea of the dancing lessons fic.  ;-) 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 04:19 am Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

She absolutely needs to be the one to tell him first. I looove the way you're unfolding this, little by little.

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 10:10 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

oh no! What's Pam's mystery errand?
Parma makes the ornaments!! So cute!
Strictly Ballroom is one of my fave movies ever (the whole Red Curtain series rocks).
These are just random facts that you must do nothing with.
Thanks.
Can't wait for the next part!
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 06:00 pm Title: On The First Day of Christmas

This is one of my favorite stories right now. The research you did on each gift was amazing. I'm enjoying how adult these two are being in your story. Can't wait to see how the last three chapters unfold.

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 02:13 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

love love love this story! cant wait for the next chapter! please continue soon!

Reviewer: SugarSpunSister Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 01:34 pm Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

Awww - this story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!  Looking forward to Chapter 10.

Cally x 

Reviewer: Semby Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2007 08:02 am Title: On The Ninth Day of Christmas

OK, so with my suspicions about Pam's acting skills, my new theory is that Parma, as Pam's friend, is sending this stuff on her own to look like they're coming from Pam as a way of setting them up, and is basing all the really personal details on all the many stories Pam has told her about Jim and how awesome he is. Or else she has a crush on Jim and is still totally stealing info from Pam.

Or something. I have no idea, obviously.

The image of them dancing together was too sweet for words. 



Author's Response: I'm wondering if I should start a betting pool before the12th day arrives...  I am loving all this speculation almost as much as writing this.  I worry the truth's going to sound almost boring by comparison!!  ;-)

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