Date: March 30, 2007 08:45 pm Title: Noodles
Very nice. They're so cute together...why don't the writers think like you?
Date: January 17, 2007 11:25 pm Title: Shampoo
Cute! I totally sleeptalk and my BF makes fun of me for it all the time. More than once I told him to be careful not to knock the plates off the bed! LOL
10 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2007 08:00 am Title: Noodles
Hehehehehehe!! OMG, so cute! "You're stealing all the noodles." If I had a boyfriend who said "you're stealing all the noodles" while he was half-asleep and really meant "bkankets", I'd probably totally lose it and laugh hysterically before completely ravishing him.
Author's Response: i'll have to tell my boyfriend you said that. (yeah, this totally happened. and it was so funny, i had to write it into a fic.) i keep telling him how ridiculously cute it was, but he's convinced that everybody who reads it is gonna think he's crazy. :0) thanks for the review!
Date: January 14, 2007 01:12 am Title: Noodles
LOL! That was awesome! There are tears in my eyes because I was laughing so hard! I hate sleeptalking, ha! I say weird stuff like that too. Loved it!
Date: January 13, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Noodles
Love silly Pam. Now let's see how Jim gets her back.
Date: January 13, 2007 07:13 am Title: Shampoo
Woo! Yay for drunk Jim (and Roy/Karen)!
Date: January 13, 2007 12:05 am Title: Noodles
totally charming. Something so adorable about Jim saying "you're stealing all the noodles" in his sleep. I love that.
Date: January 12, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Noodles
“You’re stealing all the noodles,” he slurred sleepily, obviously irritated. - what a cute line! This was so much fun!
Date: January 12, 2007 05:03 pm Title: Noodles
Don't think I've ever laughed out loud reading. This was awesome, it screamed Jam to me. Thanks, you have a knack for hilarity.
Date: January 12, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Noodles
aw noodles. That could be Pam's new pet name for Jim.
Date: January 12, 2007 03:49 pm Title: Noodles
Hee! Pam pranking Jim -- that is AWE-SOME! And he can steal my noodles anytime....
Date: January 07, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Shampoo
can't be bothered to sign in....but GREAT stuff! LOVED this line:
Their relationship right now was a badly xeroxed copy of the friendship they’d once had.
Date: January 06, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Shampoo
hehehehehehe... i love drunk jim... ^_^
Date: January 05, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Shampoo
Aw, I love the relief of the end. The sudden knowledge that maybe everything will be all right, even though almost nothing has happened yet.
Date: January 05, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Shampoo
Wow, these lines were so perfect - "To the left, disaster, in the form of pig-latin, frisbee golf, and ass-kissery on steroids. To the right, heartbreak, in the form of a dream she had let slip through her fingers."
8 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 03:23 pm Title: Shampoo
Oooh, that was just ridiculously yummy.
Date: January 05, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Shampoo
Ooh. Just the right amount of sexy. Thank you!
Date: January 05, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Shampoo
Aw. Sweet. I liked the line about their friendship being a badly xeroxed copy.
Date: January 05, 2007 02:41 pm Title: Shampoo
Ha! That was very funny: “Come on, Beesly. You know me how well? And that’s the thing that tips the scale towards perv for you?”
Poor Pam though, I really felt for her, with sentences like: "To the left, disaster, in the form of pig-latin, frisbee golf, and ass-kissery on steroids. To the right, heartbreak, in the form of a dream she had let slip through her fingers." This was so uncomfortable. Yet, a little moment with Jim can turn that around. Sweet.
Date: January 05, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Shampoo
Their relationship right now was a badly xeroxed copy of the friendship they’d once had.
Wonderful line.
Sometimes, when you weren’t paying attention, I’d run my fingers through your hair a few times
I don't think this is physically possible. There's no way someone would NOT feel that.
“Come on, Beesly. You know me how well? And that’s the thing that tips the scale towards perv for you?”
Ah. Wonderful Jim line. I can hear him saying this.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked (most) of it, lol. as for the fingers through hair thing, i really should have described that better. in my head, he's only playing with the ends of her hair. my boyfriend does that a lot, and i never notice it. most of the dialogue is actually based on a late-night conversation i had with him. re-reading it, i totally agree with you, so i'll probably change that a bit to get the visual right. thanks! :0)
Date: January 05, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Shampoo
Please let this be chapter one of a series! Sweet and fluffy, but still in character. Great job.
Date: January 05, 2007 11:57 am Title: Shampoo
oh. my. SexyJimVoice. *thud*
Date: January 05, 2007 11:46 am Title: Shampoo
mmm... jim halpert can sniff my hair anytime ;) this was cute, i love fluffy Jam stories aswell, so thanks
Date: January 05, 2007 11:41 am Title: Shampoo
I love drunk!Jim. Just too adorable.
I've also got a pretty good visual of Andy, Pam, and Jim sitting awkwardly on a small couch. *laughs*
And yey for Karen/Roy!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: January 05, 2007 11:27 am Title: Shampoo
Oh yum!!! That was perfect. Just the kind of fluffy fix I needed.
Thank you ever so much.