Date: August 26, 2007 03:55 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
How did I not read this before? Oh well.
So, official verdict - sweet and fluffy and makes me happy. YAY!
Author's Response: Happy to make you happy. So glad you liked it!
Date: August 15, 2007 06:51 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Aw! That is so sweet.
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks!! :)
Date: January 27, 2007 04:28 am Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
*SIGH* You give me hope. You truly do. I love the detail of him having to come and get her and steal her away to dance- I don't think I spoke ten words to my husband at our reception after dinner. "I married you for you." Just perfect.
Author's Response:
Aww lis! I'm so glad you think so!!
Thanks!
Date: January 25, 2007 10:23 am Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Awww...I'm all choked up now!
I loved that you left it just vague enough at the beginning for doubt to creep in; that maybe they weren't at their own wedding but rather at Phyllis & Bob's. And then that very wedding was referenced later on. Very nice.
Author's Response:
Thanks belsum!! I'd already written a fic with them dancing at Phyllis and Bob's (which now makes me think this can be kinda like a sequel!) so I wanted to do something different.
I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to tell me so!
9 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 08:00 am Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Aww, sweeet!
Author's Response: Awww - thanks!!!
Date: January 21, 2007 08:11 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Great job
Author's Response: Thanks gotkona!
8 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2007 07:08 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
So sneaky...making us think that they were at Phyllis' wedding at first. Cute story.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks samsmom!
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2007 02:05 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
aaww.. beautiful in the way you made me think it was phyllis' wedding, but.. surprise twist! seriously, this was like the whipped cream on top of the godiva cheesecake that was last week's episode... (yeah, i just ate at cheesecake factory) YUM!
Author's Response: OMG - I am in love with the Godiva cheesecake! Only cheesecake I ever eat 'cause normally I'm not a fan. So glad you liked it. The story - I mean - not the cheesecake ;)
Date: January 21, 2007 01:34 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Xoxoxo, you never cease to amaze me. You are such a great storyteller. Loved this one as much as all your others.
Author's Response: Awww kittykat! I really appreciate that. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so!
Date: January 20, 2007 10:20 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Wow, you worked fast! And I totally knew I could count on you for fluff so thank you. This was all the loveliness I needed! :)
"My apologies. That was part of my vows right? To have and to hold, for richer, for poorer, in scented candles and serving bowls…" That was so funny. Maybe because I can identify with that? ;)
Oh, and as your trusty beta, can I just point out one little typo I found? In this sentence: "She already misses the feel of his lips on hers, she's already is craving much more.", you should have either "she's already craving" or "she already is craving".
Author's Response:
I'm speedy when I want to be. ;)
I'm glad you liked that part. Maybe I wrote it because I can indentify with it too seeing as I wrote this story on my Pottery Barn coffee table with my Christmas Cookie candle burning. ;)
Thank so much for the catch. All better now!!
Date: January 20, 2007 09:52 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
awww! gorgeous! Pam and Jim should totally hook up at Phyllis' wedding!
Author's Response:
They totally should. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: January 20, 2007 08:52 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
That was the most perfectly Jim-like way that Jim could have responded at the end! It makes me think of when he said it in The Fight. Squee! I needed this fluffy fic!
Author's Response: I love that part of The Fight!! Obviously. ;) Thanks Chicgeek!
Date: January 20, 2007 08:17 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
What a great little story. All I can say is, "Someday....someday..."
Thanks for making my night!
Author's Response: I think we're all repeating the same thing. You're welcome! So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: January 20, 2007 08:15 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
This is- I think I cry more at fluff fic that at angsty fic, because it's so happy and perfect and I get sad that it isn't this way on the show. But this was so cute and wonderful. Sigh. Thanks.
Author's Response:
You know - I think I do too. When you read something angsty your prepared for the emotions to hit you but fluff can be sneaky like that.
Cute was exactly what I was striving for. That you think it was also wonderful is a bonus. Thanks so much!
Date: January 20, 2007 07:36 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Damn you for making such a wonderful fluff piece. I'm grinning like a fool now. Thanks. Thanks a lot. ^_~ cheers. --Lex
Author's Response: I'm sorry. Should I stop? ;) Thanks Lex! Glad you liked it!
Date: January 20, 2007 07:15 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
This was all kinds of wonderful! I loved the twist that it was their wedding - made me feel all warm and gooey inside.
Author's Response: And YOU are all kinds of sweet! Thanks kaystar!!
Date: January 20, 2007 06:47 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Ooh...I thought the wedding in the title was Phyllis and Bob Vance's, but you tricked me! What a lovely story.
Author's Response: That's me - quite the trickster! Thank you so much!
Date: January 20, 2007 06:36 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
You know, there are some stories that are written in such a way and end on such a great note that I can't help but be put in a great mood afterwards. This was a great example of that. Thank you for that! You've made my night!
Author's Response:
YAY! Mission accomplished. Very glad to hear you liked it and happy to know I made your night.
The highest of compliments right there. :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2007 06:10 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Guh. It's bad to be all settled in your bed after an exhausting day, reading fic as a nice nightcap...then you find yourself all fluttering and holding in a gigantic squee. Sigh.
This was awesome - and you totally got me. I immeediately assumed they were at Phyllis and Bob's wedding; then I was all, ohhh, when I realized that they were finally together.
...Then the revelation that they're actually married, and I'm witnessing a happy ending unfolding before my eyes. (Ur...TWSS?)
Loved it - you do the happiness better than anyone!
...Seriously, though, can't you manage to get a job writing for the show? I mean...really?
Author's Response:
Hee girl7. Good job. You were supposed to think they were dancing at Phyllis and Bob's wedding.
I have no problem being a happiness peddler.
Oh please. As much as I'm quick to pull out my first aid kit to stop the bleeding I think the writers are doing just fine. They surely don't need me. I think I'm better off staying right here. :)
Date: January 20, 2007 05:38 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: January 20, 2007 05:21 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Ah, the perfect cure for what ails me. Love the surprise of it being their wedding. And he dips her. And he's shaggy. And they're finished being stupid. And...oh, hell. I'm sap-happy now. (She may not have married him for his body, but it's a hell of a perk.) Thanks for this lovely trip to The Land of If Only.
Author's Response:
I love the things you picked up on - because they were my favorites. Jim was soooo super shaggilicious (seriously - can I be more corny?) in the last episode that it was the only image I could see in my mind as I pictured him and I simply had to have him dip her. I mean - c'mon. And hee! Perk indeed.
I love the Land of If Only. If only Jim and Pam would really take up residence there... ;)
Date: January 20, 2007 05:18 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
that. was. perfect. Seriously. I really thought it was Phyllis' wedding and then you threw me...brilliant!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Yep. That was me being sneaky. :) Just trying to fast forward through the angst!
Date: January 20, 2007 04:47 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
"You married me for my body."
xoxoxo, just so we're clear, I'd marry you for your mind. ;D
Author's Response: Alrighty then. LOL! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: January 20, 2007 04:33 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
Yes, it was sweet and delicious and keep 'em coming... I've got both childbirth and sweeps to get through and tasty little confections like this are the only thing that seem to help.
Author's Response: Oh poor lisahoo! I'll do my very best!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2007 04:24 pm Title: To watch us dance is to hear our hearts speak
oh that's not fair!! All that loveliness should have to be REAL!!!!
*sigh* I'll be reading this one all night!!
Author's Response:
What? You mean it isn't? LOL!
Glad you liked it. Just a tiny repayment for your epic. ;)