Date: January 02, 2010 03:12 am Title: The First Date
i heart first dates stories. well no more than first time stories lol but still they are LOVELY..;)
and its officially 4 am.
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2009 02:03 am Title: The First Date
man man man that was sooooo good, I actually squeed when he took her dancing. I loved Paul and Edna and just the fact he took her there, guh I wish you continued lol
Date: May 18, 2007 08:10 pm Title: The First Date
Abso-freaking-lutely adorable. I love how he asked her out...very them. And the whole dancing was too cute for words. Lovely story.
Date: January 23, 2007 06:24 am Title: The First Date
Wonderful first date. I could so see Jim taking Pam to a place like that.
Date: January 23, 2007 06:11 am Title: The First Date
You are my favorite writer...I squeal with anticipation when I see your name on a story! I have so enjoyed this entire series. You have really captured Pam and Jim's warmth and humor. Will you please send this series to the writers of the Office so that they could see that if they bring Pam and Jim together that they would not lose their spark or playfullness! Please keep going! Thank you!!
Date: January 22, 2007 09:31 pm Title: The First Date
Oh, so cute! Nice to see this other side of Jim's personality and life - dancing with elderly people is a very sweet first date!
Date: January 22, 2007 05:47 pm Title: The First Date
I absolutely love this series. You are so talented! Everytime I see an update, theres a definite smile/mini dance I do. I love that every story, it just gets better and better. I love this little world you've created and the banters and all the little details. Great work and keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm smiling thinking of someone doing a mini dance over my stories! That's awesome! Thanks so much for the feedback and I'll try to continue providing you with a reason to dance!
Date: January 22, 2007 04:21 pm Title: The First Date
No offense, but you might look into a beta. I think you got "anecdote" confused with "antidote"- which was very distracting. Additionally, make sure you're fluent with Pig Latin before you use it in a story. The term "Whatay" made those of us who ARE fluent in Pig Latin cringe. ;-)
Author's Response: Aw, yeah I can see where that might be just a bit distracting. Sorry about that, hopefully you got some enjoyment out of it anyway.
Date: January 22, 2007 04:12 pm Title: The First Date
Pam is seriously in love with Jim...well, I'm seriously in love with this series. SERIOUSLY. And this just might be my favorite installment. Maybe. If I had to choose.
And I think you've proven just how much fun Jim and Pam could be together as a couple. Hilarious and sweet and charming and just plain FUN. Angst doesn't have the monopoly on good storytelling.
Author's Response: Wow...do you know my roommate? She gave me that same feedback almost verbatim!!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the series so much. I do enjoy angst I must say...but with as angsty as my JAM are on the show right now I have to give them some lightheartedness...nerves and all. THanks SO much for the feedback! Now if only TPTB at the office thought the same thing....hmm....
Date: January 22, 2007 03:48 pm Title: The First Date
THIS WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER.
no, seriously, I can't get over it. Swimming in warm and fuzzies.
Absolutely wonderful.
And props to you for making them have awkward moments. Because they totally would.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Lex! I appreciate your feedback so much! "Swimming in warm and fuzzies" - that's awesome. THat's what I like to hear!
9 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 10:35 am Title: The First Date
“Dallas Cowboy Cheerleader training camp.”
Pam smiled slowly. “We’ll have to talk later about why you know about that show...”
Loved this. My husband loved that show for the same reasons that Jim probably would.
This is how I imagine their first date to be...awkward, but them.
Author's Response: LOL. That show was like a really bad habit for awhile for me as well...there's something oddly interesting about it. All those girls are willing to go through to do that....anyway, I'm sure Jim and your husband are into it for entirely different reasons. hehe, thanks so much for leaving feedback!
Date: January 22, 2007 09:15 am Title: The First Date
Is it weird that I was listening to Collide by Howie Day when I was reading this? Seriously, when I read that line I almost spit my coffee out...
Author's Response: Oooh totally freaky! And meant to be apparently! I LOVE that song and it just makes me think of Jam all the time now that someone put up video on Youtube. It's so awesome....anyway, thanks a bunch for taking the time to leave feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 08:05 am Title: The First Date
this made me all kinds of giddy! seriously, a 13 year-old jim taking his grandmother to the Y to take her dancing? this is gonna be tough to beat, lovefool. and yet, i won't be all that surprised when you do!
Author's Response: oooh no pressure. ;-) Thanks so much Starshine you always have such awesomely nice things to say. I appreciate it so much!
Date: January 22, 2007 06:58 am Title: The First Date
Adorable.
"I want to hold it." <- That's what she said. ;D
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHA!!!! Niiiiiice.
Date: January 22, 2007 06:30 am Title: The First Date
oh, happiness! This is freaking adorable! You have totally captured the weirdness of a first date ~~ and of course for Pam & Jim it could be this sort of delicious awkwardness since they have known each other for so long. And the YMCA dance is so freaking adorable I about burst! (Pam & Jim ballroom dancing - yes!!!)
Author's Response: Oh thank you Lisahoo...seriously, I think it would be awkward for them! I imagine that after holding back your true feelings for so long and then being able to just spill them all would completely change the dynamics for awhile and things might just be a bit...off. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!
9 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 06:27 am Title: The First Date
Aww, really sweet. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Keep reading!
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 06:07 am Title: The First Date
This was sooo sweet and so much fun. I could totally believe Jim would be involved in that dance scene. ;-D
Author's Response: hahaha "dance scene" I love it! Thanks for the feedback Time4moxie!!!
Date: January 22, 2007 05:43 am Title: The First Date
So adorable, I don't know how you can write so great! Simply amazing. :)
Author's Response: Wow, that's so nice. Thank you so much!!!! Keep reading! :-)
Date: January 22, 2007 05:19 am Title: The First Date
You really own the happy, sweet, romantic JAM genre. The dialogue sounded like both of them at their most giddy and smitten. Do the foxes know about this? Loved that for some reason. Charming, start to finish.
Author's Response: LOL. That one almost got tossed! So glad I kept it in now! Thanks so much for your awesome words of encouragement!!! It's so much fun to write.
Date: January 22, 2007 05:11 am Title: The First Date
Adorable. Just so cute I can't even. I love these fluffy glimpses of the future you've given us. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks xoxoxo! So glad you enjoyed it! I live for the fluff, man. :-)
Date: January 22, 2007 04:51 am Title: The First Date
Wow.... more please!!!!!! Second date, third date,proposal...
Author's Response: Hehehe, THANKS! FYI I did indeed write a proposal fic. It was called "Indecent Proposal" - l(I'm doing them a bit backwards as they come to me) et me know what you think.
Date: January 22, 2007 04:25 am Title: The First Date
OMG love this story. It was such a fresh take on a first date, and it really didn't fall into the cliches that we sometimes get. I hope you will consider writing more.
Author's Response: This was definitely a tough one to try from sinking into cliche land. Thanks so much for commenting on that aspect. This was so much fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2007 12:24 am Title: The First Date
Wow! I loved that! Well I've read most of the other parts, they are all great but I loved this one! It was just so adorable! The ending was great. I can't wait to see what you come up with next for the series!
Author's Response: You rock Amy! Thanks for the kind words and I'm glad you're enjoying the entire series.
Date: January 21, 2007 11:53 pm Title: The First Date
You are my favorite! This is seriously one of the best Office fics ever! I hope you will continue this! It's beyond great.
Author's Response: Wow, that's high praise! Thanks so much Marcine! I will definitely continue to post.