9 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Poker Faces and No More Lying
hope you decide to finish! ;-) It's been a really fun read so far.
Date: April 01, 2007 12:44 pm Title: Poker Faces and No More Lying
I just started reading this from the beginning and I'm really enjoying it so far! It's keeping me guessing about what's going to happen. I have no idea.
Date: April 01, 2007 10:14 am Title: Poker Faces and No More Lying
I did like it! Let's see, Jim and Karen have broken up, Pam has ditched Andy at the restaurant, there was a hint of Angela and Dwight... I don't know, it was a good chapter. (/Pam, Michael's Birthday)
Date: April 01, 2007 08:41 am Title: Poker Faces and No More Lying
Oh Andy, he just needs a girl who's completely insane.
Good job!
Date: April 01, 2007 08:40 am Title: Poker Faces and No More Lying
ARGH! This is great! I'm only aggravated because there is no "Next" at the bottom of the page! Curses!
Great job...I especially thought the Jim/Karen breakup was true and well done.
Date: April 01, 2007 06:11 am Title: Poker Faces and No More Lying
welll, i did like it. it is probably spending so much time in andy's (andrew's) head that is making you angry. :)
but yet another good installment. and karen is out of the way!!!
Date: March 28, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Shock and Awe
good pam, two dates with andy (andrew) is more than enough for the average person.
i can't wait to get more
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad you're excited for more of this. And yeah, poor Pam, but it's all for a very worthy cause!
Date: March 27, 2007 11:25 am Title: Shock and Awe
I think she'd still take a shower to be gorgeous and clean for Jim, even if she has no hopes that the date's really with him tonight. I LOVED Jim's section, especially how he liked taking care of Pam at the Dundies. That was so sweet!
See, and I didn't have to cringe at this one. No actual Pandy-action. Crap. Now I'm cringing.
Author's Response: Yeah, you're probably right. But I think she's just really frustrated that her plan didn't work on the first try, so now she's worried that Jim doesn't care like she thought he did. All of which, I realize, should have been more apparent in the actual story, so... sorry about that. And don't worry there's only a little more cringing left. I promise.
Date: March 26, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Pandy's First Date
I'm literally cringing at the thought of Pam on another "date" with Andrew. And in front of Jim and Karen? It's like coming back from "that" with Michael, like as a human being. I have to go read something sweet and fluffy and not involving Andy.
However, your Andrew journal entries are still lots of fun and don't give me the willies (or maybe I should say the "andys"). Brrr!
Date: March 24, 2007 06:01 am Title: Pandy's First Date
i would critiize, but honestly, i suck at it. i never know what should be changed. you've got the voices down. you sent shivers down my spine thinking about andy on a date (pam, no prank is worth it, really). it has me hooked.
Author's Response: You'll see a little bit more of Pam's reasoning in the next chapter, but I really think I stretched her character into A/U with this story. Which I'm okay with because I'm having a blast writing it. Is that wrong?
Date: March 23, 2007 10:12 pm Title: Pandy's First Date
THis is a cool idea poor Andrew. I'm actually really looking forward to the new Mr. Bernard on the show and this is definately somewhere he might go.
Really cool idea.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm starting to feel a little sorry for Andrew too. Poor guy just has no clue.
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Pandy's First Date
I love what you're doing with this. I especially love that we are in Andy's head for a while - it's such a scary place to be! I also love the Jim/Pam competition aspect. I can't wait for the double date.
Keep it up and I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Yes. Being in Andy's head is downright frightening. But I'll keep going back there as long as I have to, if it'll mean getting Pam and Jim together in the end!
Oh, did I just ruin the suspense? Sorry folks, I meant I'll go back because Pam is so happy with Andy and they're going to stay together FOREVER!
Date: March 23, 2007 02:17 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
I like it. It's fun to see an Andy (sorry, Andrew) POV, and I think you did well with his voice. Andy would definitely think he was "this close" to sleeping with Pam, with absolutely no concrete evidence of that!
Jim's reaction is really good too.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Oh good, you're still with me! I thought I'd try something a little different this time around, so I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: March 23, 2007 07:59 am Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
It's interesting already. Pam with Andy? Should be funny.
Author's Response: Thanks, but I'm really hoping Pandy doesn't last too much longer. This whole thing is giving me the heebie-jeebies.
Date: March 22, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
I can not wait to see where you go with this. I really love Andy which I know is weird but maybe it's because my brother in law looks exactly like him! Please don't leave me hanging!
Author's Response:
Yikes! Having a relative that looked like Andy would freak me out. Even though I'm sure Ed Helms is a great guy, and I'm not saying he's bad looking, but... he's Andy, so....
Also, I will definitely be updating in the near future. Probably tonight or tomorrow. Sunday at the very latest.
Date: March 22, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
Hee hee -- I'm definitely interested, and I want to know what happens next!
Thanks for this; I'm so curious about what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for your interest and don't worry you'll find out what happens soon enough!
Date: March 22, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
I think it's safe to say that I'm more creeped out that all of you - though I think you should have played it straighter and not given away Pam's reveal until the second chapter. But I like to torment people, so...
Author's Response: Yeah, I probably should've kept up the ruse. But Pam just wouldn't stop smiling! And you really can't deny that girl a smile.
Date: March 22, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
this is awesome! i love jealous jim!
Author's Response: Me too! Oh wait, I love every Jim.
Date: March 22, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
haha, oooh,i can't wait. i loved reading andy's thoughts. and i can't wait to see how jim reacts to the news and pam and andy hehe... um... pandy?
Author's Response: Yes, Pandy. I thought of that too a few nights ago and I've been groaning inwardly ever since. At this point I'm not sure who's more creeped out by this whole thing, me or Jim.
Date: March 22, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
Pure. Gold. Loving the unique perspective---can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aw, shucks. Gold? Really? Thanks for boosting my authorship esteem!
Date: March 22, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Property of Andrew David Bernard
Oh, I am enjoying this already! What a great idea you have! I cannot wait for more chapters. I think you have Andy down so far. He seems like he would be hard to write.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it. Andy's difficult, but he also really cracks me up for some reason, so I wanted to give Andy fans like me something to enjoy.