Date: May 05, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great description of Pam's days, just the right amount of boring nothingness, spotted with just a bit of angst and a whole other life she has that has nothing to do with Dunder-Mifflin. Great Pam voice.
What did her receptionist foremothers do all day long without Google Maps to help them plan their getaways?
Oh, hee.
Date: May 04, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gosh, that was fab. My gut twisted a bunch of times. Love the passive-aggressive deals she made with herself. Very Pam.
Date: May 04, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very enjoyable. Poor Pam. I especially liked this-- ""i wish the back of his neck would shut up."
Date: May 03, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I ADORE this.
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was fantastically written and a wonderful Pam voice. Just amazing.
Date: May 03, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, man, this is just FANTASTIC. The details, how she's doing okay, how she plays games even with just herself, the rhythm of it and the wonderful spare writing. I love how she's not super-angsty, and she has all these life details that are her own entirely apart from any relationship drama, without ignoring that entirely. And the google searches are just brilliant. I hope you write more in the future!
Date: May 03, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I really liked this. It's very Pam, funny and creative with the teensiest bit of melancholy, but mostly adjusting well to life on her own. Very cool!
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your line at the end of the game: one at-bat, one HR.
I can't believe that this is your first post. Truly awesome, yet so understated.
(PS. I love the imagery of just seeing Buddha walking along and kicking the shit out of him unexpectedly. This might say too much about my mental state at the moment.)
9 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like this - are you going to contiue?
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is fantastic - I love how ordinary it is, how you've captured Pam's day so well, in this way that she's getting by okay. Incredibly realistic and amazing.
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Baggage stuffed with landmines
Your Pam voice here is stunning. It's got the soft, wry humor and the insightful sadness of our favorite receptionist. This is by turns funny and sad, and it captures exactly what her days must be like now. Brava!
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing! It was really realistic, kinda what I've been thinking Pam is going through in her head.. I think exactly like you wrote Pam thinks, so... I don't know if I find that funny or weird, haha. Well anyway, I really loved this.
Date: May 03, 2007 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this! You captured Pam's thought process and the stifling boredom really well.
Date: May 03, 2007 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Pam. This so perfectly captured her situation in s3. She's just sort of there, drifting, and it's heartbreaking and real and you have that overall tone down so well.
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
the office feels like a waiting room
Brilliant observation!
I love Pam planning her getaway to San Francisco via Google maps. Your observation that everything outside of Dunder-Mifflin has changed for Pam, but nothing inside has changed, is excellent and thoughtful. I really like the whole tone of this piece, and I feel you really caught Pam's pensive side. Congratulations.
Date: May 03, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! It's such a real, sassy take on what poor Pam's miserable days must feel like!
Date: May 03, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is GREAT! And exactly how I feel at this moment... Though thankfully, it's 4:02, so I have an advantage on Pam there. But what I'm trying to say is that this is witty with a dollop of angst, just like the show :) There are so many great touches that it's hard to pick out one, but the google searches are priceless, her plans to rile Angela, and the fantasy getaways. Oh, and making it through Michael's forwards... I hope Pam DOES spring free one of these days!