Date: August 15, 2009 06:53 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
I don't know how I missed this story, unfold, unless it was because you wrote it right after the finale and I was too busy praising the heavens and bouncing around on my sofa to notice it. I could have sworn I read all the FDF's out there. So I apologize for missing this lovely little picnic story. Very "them", a quiet spot, two normal kids eating a simple meal, and basking in the enormity of finally being together.
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2009 11:59 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Su-weet, unfold. I always love your work. I especially like the way you let Jim talk with his hands and body, like
She feels his laugh through her entire body and she tries to settle in even closer to him.
His chin against her hair tells her he’s nodding.
Jim's always been the kind of guy who expresses himself as much through face and body as through words. You capture that so well. As always, it was a pleasure to read this.
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 02:26 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
This was so PERFECT!!!
Date: August 09, 2009 05:48 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
I'm very late to the party, but I had to add my comments. This was wonderful, and I can really see this as the way it happened more than all those fancy dinners and steamy bedroom scenes. It's so in character for both of them. Awesome.
9 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 09:04 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
A Target picnic in the park. This is more Jim than most other first date fics I've read. Certainly more original which is what we'd expect from him. Hmmm...I like it.
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 10:10 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Sniff.. so happy... happy happy happy happy.. (i apologize for my lack of words. this is what the finale has done to me. not that i'm complaining!)
Date: May 19, 2007 02:21 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Loved it. So glad we are starting to see post finale fics. They should help for the long summer.
9 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 05:34 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
This is really nice. You set the mood perfectly, I feel like I'm there with them! Well done!
9 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 02:14 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Oh, that was just awesome. I feel like I've been crying all day, and this DID NOT HELP. Heh. At least it's happy crying, right? Awesome job, beautiful characterization, and perfect descriptions. I could totally see where they were. Thanks for writing this!
8 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 01:46 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Ah. Snuggly!Jim. So, so sweet. Thanks.
Date: May 18, 2007 12:48 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
It really HAS been a long year... and now we can look forward to happy stories like this all summer long!!!! :) So sweet.
Date: May 18, 2007 11:31 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
It has been a long year. Perfect last line. This was sweet and lovely. Wonderful job!
Date: May 18, 2007 06:25 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
AWWWWWW!!!!! A wonderful, quirky aftermath-fic of the finale. Braveo. :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 04:57 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
She says quietly after a while, “Can it really just be like this?”
She feels his lips on her temple, “God, I hope so. It kind of sucks any other way.”
*sigh* Yeah. Beautiful. It's so good.
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 02:28 am Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
yes.
that's all I really have to say. :)
Date: May 17, 2007 11:21 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Happy happy, joy joy! It has been a long year, and I thank you for your sweet fic of first dateness.
Date: May 17, 2007 11:20 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Beautiful. I love that this is what Jim had in mind when he said "a date". So simple and yet so them. And Pam's line about it being "a long year"...perfect. It's been a long year for all of us but the payoff is amazing.
Date: May 17, 2007 11:07 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Yes! I just hope their first date is that sweet. This was so good. Just what I felt like reading.
Date: May 17, 2007 09:14 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Ohhh I was hoping you'd write something before I got to sleep on this glorious finale night. I just love your style, with the stylistic run-ons and descriptions and guhh store-bought! Lovely work as usual.
~misao
Date: May 17, 2007 09:10 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
*claps*
I loved it. YAY!
Date: May 17, 2007 09:08 pm Title: i'm stuck on a boy who fills me with joy
Oh this is sweet and tender and just freaking perfect. My brain is breaking trying to process it all, so reading your vision of the first date is like a little band-aid (the kind with the medicine already on it) for my aching brain. Ahhhh.