Date: October 15, 2007 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
And you definitely deserve that shiny red ribbon. Excellent job!
GS
xxx
Date: June 12, 2007 05:02 am Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful! So Jim and Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw. So much love for this story.
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2007 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful! I love everything about it - the fancy restaurant being too swish for them, fries theft and ball pits - it's so amazing. The narrative is great too, it really sounds like Pam in my head.
Please post again soon - this is amazing.
Date: May 24, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
"The simple gesture brings the giddiness back all over again" to me too.
This was beautiful. I love that they're talking about what happened when they were apart- they've got so much to catch up on!
This was just pure loveliness, thank you for writing it!
Date: May 24, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! Sneaking into the ball pit, Jim being "back" and him awarding her the 'medal' all made me extremely happy :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love the way you've written this! So beautiful, and yes, tears are threatening to roll down my cheeks, too.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really great! My favorite Post-The Job fic yet. It was really sweet and really THEM. I am a little afraid of how next season will start but if THIS is what ended up happening I will be very happy.
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tracey you are made of win. So is this!
Date: May 21, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was so sweet and so perfect and so them. I loved it!
Date: May 21, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really, really, REALLY good first date fic. I thought it was totally and completely realistic for Jim and Pam. I loved that they ended up at Burger King. Good and honest work here. Nice job!
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Several perfect little moments and the whole tone was just right. A beautifully imagined and executed piece. I think I've decided that this is, in fact, exactly how the first date went.
Date: May 21, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just wonderful. The "Are you back?" line is amazing, and that she kind of works up the courage to ask. Another line that struck me was this: It’s tender and sweet and nothing like the first time, which she’s now realizing really did feel final and almost desperate. wonderful!
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
This may be my favorite of all the new "first date" fics- because it is simultaneously comfortable and awkward, quiet and honest, funny and wistful. You've captured a lovely tone, here, and one that truly works. Wonderful!
Date: May 21, 2007 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I truly enjoyed reading this - it felt so real. I feel you really captured their first "real" date.
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just great. So wonderful. It felt like one huge sigh of relief.
Date: May 21, 2007 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, YES, YES! This is EXACTLY how Jim and Pam's first date should be! You nailed it! This story ROCKS!!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was amazing. One of my new favorites. Perfectly showed the awkwardness and how they fell back into familar territory with the joking and talking. And I love that Pam called him "herJim" (at least in her head). Absolutely wonderful.
9 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That is a very moving and well written story. Bravo you!
Date: May 21, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was adorable and so perfect! I love them going to Burger King, because it is so much more them, and I LOVE her asking him if he is really back. The perfect piece of dialogue. Great job!!
Date: May 21, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
My favorite Post-Job fic so far, I think so. I'd PAY to see this happen onscreen. It's just so sweet and innocent and so them.
And yay for Alexi Murdoch!
Date: May 21, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
It seems like I've already read dozens of date stories but this is my favorite. You've captured them perfectly and I like to think that their date went exactly like this! Good job!
Date: May 21, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this so much. Wonderful date at Burger King...so cute!!! Great final scene. Very them.
Date: May 21, 2007 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
You definitely deserve this more than I do. See you tomorrow.
-Jim
Awwww...so sweet. I have to start reviewing these wonderful post finale fanfics. Yeah, I can't see Jim taking her to a super fancy restaurant, since they're both so nervous anyway. But playing with the plastic balls in BK is almost as good as jumping around in the bouncy castle.
Great job with this!
Date: May 21, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet and perfect and so them.
I loved it!