10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2008 01:46 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
So cute! What a great story! You rock!
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2008 06:14 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
LMAO the ending was excellent!!!
Date: July 13, 2007 12:25 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
Oh man. I needed some good fluff tonight and that totally satisfied my craving. Thanks.
Date: June 02, 2007 11:26 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
Oh I'm so glad you resisted the smut urge! It's so much better to have them just sleep, actually sleep, laying next to each other, spooning and holding hands. But I cracked up that they're going to tell everyone in the office that they Did It. Bwah!
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Wow...this was incredible. I love the cute awkward stuff. One of my favorite first date stories so far. And the last part made me laugh. I just am speechless...loved it.
Date: June 01, 2007 12:13 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
Awwwwwwwww!!! Too cute for words. I loved their snuggling up together and all the happy moments. Yay for happy Jam, finally!
Date: May 31, 2007 11:19 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
Loved this! This is the image of them I'm going to take with me this summer.
Date: May 30, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
That was too cute especially the last lines.
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 09:52 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
This is exactly , perfectly right. You just...*sigh* I love this so much. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 09:25 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
haha!! loved it, mox! the banter, the nervousness.. the fluff.. just loved it all.
Date: May 29, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
LOVED IT!!! You totally had their characters down, and I could hear them saying those things... it was great! keep up the good work! And you should really come to the boards more often... :D
Date: May 29, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
This story was one of my top favorites in the FDF category. It just made me say "aww." Great work!
Date: May 29, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Another excellent chapter, Mox. Really enjoyable read.
Date: May 29, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Hooray! They're back to being on the same page! (And even in the same bed - woo!)
I like the thought that Jim might know about "It Happened One Night". Those walls of Jericho should come tumblin' down, don't you think?
Date: May 29, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
YAY loved this! I'm kinda a fluff-o-holic so I've been enjoying every post hiatus story with giddy great big smiles...this was so sweet! I loved that they ran inot Kevin! And I think he's going to tell the whole office they had sex...I think the last two lines may have killed me, they were so in character...
BTW Thanks for the "It Happened One Night" reference thats one of my favorite movies and normally no one's heard of it! Too bad Jim didn't have to build the walls of Jericho or buy a trumpet...
~tizzy
Date: May 29, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
This story was just too cute. When Kevin was talking I totally pictured him in my head. So funny, so like Kevin, too. Great first date fic!
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 02:22 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Well done Moxie, well done. Nice an fluffy, just what we need to get through the long hot summer.
BTW, adding Kevin and the list was brilliant
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
Moxie, you could not have done a more amazing job with the end of this! Beautiful!
I think the following perfectly encapsulates what would be going through their mind on their first date:
"You can hold my hand," she said, squeezing it warmly. "It's kind of the only way I believe you're really here."
She could see his smile even with the dim light from the outside. "I know what you mean," he replied, squeezing her hand back. "I think it's going to take some time to get used to this."
Date: May 29, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
"True," she replied. She paused a moment, then smiled into the darkness. "I'm still going to tell everyone we totally had sex tonight." "Yeah, that's good," Jim yawned. "So am I."
I love it all....but especially where you left it.....DO go on, dear Mox.....
Date: May 29, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
SO cute and adorable. I'm pretty much dedicated to reading everything you write, because I just trust Pam and Jim in your hands. You always write them so perfectly- even when things might not go as smoothly as expected. My only wish is that you'd include the night they really do get closer! ;)
Date: May 29, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Thinking of a second chance
I'm stopping by to give my official love to your lovely, realistic first date fic. I love the way Pam misread Jim in the most adorable of ways, their movie date, and the ending is so perfectly them. Wonderful, wonderful job my dear.
Date: May 29, 2007 11:40 am Title: Thinking of a second chance
I love having new chapters up so fast!!! I am way to impatient to wait... I think I love this fast updating almost as much as I love JAM.
I think I have decided that bathrooms may just be some of the most romantic spots in the universe... but then I also remembered that Creed does number two in the ladies room and that image totally disappeared.
How can those two insult each other and just make is so darn cute!?
Ya know, I was so certain I was going to get off and actually do work... such as clean and do laundry. But I am so glad I got to read this before I did. I now get to just smile and think of happy JAM who just slept, and who are going to be happy and just all great things. YAY! This is awesome. Um... yeah, i will shut up now.