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Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 08:31 am Title: The Carpet

Loved these last two, though the thought of Roy needing to use the computer made me immediately think it was to download porn to take with him to the poconos.  ;-)

Hope things are going well for you in Japan!!  Wishing you home internet, pronto!! 



Author's Response:

Ha, but let's not forget Pam said she only skied "a little" (ew, don't wanna think about it).

I can at least now hook up my computer to the school internet, so that's an improvement over getting error messages in Japanese, bah!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 06:10 am Title: The Carpet

Aww, how cute. Pam had missed Jim. And something about her saying, "...you look like you really need a jelly bean" is so cute. I love the ending. heee.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 03:55 am Title: The Carpet

I hope the Japanese gods hear your prayers.

Loved this part:

pambeesly: well, I haven't talked to you all week, plus you look like you need a jelly bean

jimhalpert: hmm, maybe I do

pambeesly: so maybe you should come get one

jimhalpert: maybe I will

pambeesly: :-)



Author's Response: hehe, I love that part too

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 10:10 am Title: The Secret

Great ending... wow.

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 06:17 am Title: The Secret

Ohhh, I think my heart just broke a little.

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 09:11 pm Title: The Secret

oh this chapter was so so sad!  I wanna cry for poor Jim-Bag.

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 07:44 pm Title: The Secret

WOW. Those last few lines changed this from a light, easy read (which is good) to a powerful piece of work. Good job. But poor Jim :(



Author's Response: Thank you very much

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 06:35 pm Title: The Secret

Awwwww! Break my heart, why don't you!


Author's Response: Hey, it broke my own heart to write it. Ugh, these kids.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 06:32 pm Title: The Secret

oh ouch... Jim!!!  Like talking to a dial tone. 

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 06:27 pm Title: The Secret

Oh Jim... the things we say when noone can hear us... sigh.

 

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 05:43 pm Title: The Secret

Oh, break my heart, why don't you! Another great job of tapping into the Season 2 angst. I wonder if Roy really needed to use the computer or Pam just didn't want to hear what Jim had to honestly say. Great job as usual.

Author's Response:

Ah, well, I guess it's left up to your interpretation then . . .

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 05:43 pm Title: The Secret

That ending make me gasp.  Oh Jim!!!

Perfect.

Reviewer: schrutebucks Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 05:41 pm Title: The Secret

No need to explain, I totally got it, and sighed. Another great one! We're getting close! 

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 05:38 pm Title: The Secret

The end of this chapter just shattered my heart. I love this series so much.

Author's Response: So you love getting your heart shattered? hehe, thanks

Reviewer: sorano916 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 05:38 pm Title: The Secret

Oh, ladama... this was a heart-breaking chapter. Heh... I hope you are having a good time in Japan.

Gambatte ne! 



Author's Response:

I'm having a pretty good time, but I also haven't offically started working yet, so we'll see.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 04:29 pm Title: The Injury

What's wrong with Japanese computers?  Us uninformed people want to know.

Author's Response: It's not really the computers as much as it is the keyboards. The punctuation arrangment is all wacky. I have to press shift-2 to get quotations marks, shift-7 to get an apostrophy, and if I press the wrong key it will just start typing in Japanese. Oh, and the space bar is about a 3rd of the sixe since Japanese doesn't really have spaces. Gah!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 04:09 am Title: Booze Cruise

I think all of our hearts broke for him on that Booze Cruise.

You've done a great job of capturing heartbreak through IMing!



Author's Response: Yeah, I can't watch that episode without my heart breaking for Jim, even more than Casino Night . . . Thanks for your comments :-)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 04:06 am Title: The Injury

Pam didn't know that The Rainbow Connection was coming her way.

Hope you're enjoying Japan!



Author's Response:

No, I don't think she could have even imagined someone like Andy at this point.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2007 10:40 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Oh, Jim is so good at lightening the mood with a joke. And I am glad that Pam expressed her feelings for Jim and thanked him... even if it pales in comparison to Jim's feelings/declaration of Casino Night (which I am looking forward to reading your addition to!).

Author's Response: Yes, I feel the need for Pam to give Jim a little more to go on in these messages. I don't know how the Casino Night chapter is going to quite yet . . .

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2007 10:37 pm Title: The Injury

I love all talk of pranks, and this is fun and fitting, and slightly flirty. Nice job.

Author's Response: I'm partial to the slightly flirty as well. Thanks.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Booze Cruise

YOU'RE BACK! Yay! And the plot thickens. I loved how Jim's answers in the Booze Cruise chapter seemed a little clipped, like you can tell he's still hurting pretty badly. And I also liked how Pam didn't spill the beans on Dwangela even though she totally could have! Hope you can post again soon :-)

Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Jim. He's trying to keep things humorous but I don't he could have helped but act hurt the day after the Booze Cruise. I'm looking forward to when Pam and Jim figure out that the other one knows about Dwangela, hehe.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 09:37 am Title: The Client

Aww. And this is why Jim was drowning, because she would give him just enough to keep him in the water, but not enough to let him float. 

Author's Response: Yep, she always gave him just enough to keep his hope alive.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 09:35 am Title: The Fight

I love it best when they collaborate. The cuteness continues!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 09:29 am Title: The Fire

Hmm. Something old and romantic like "Roman Holiday"? These vignettes continue to make me nostalgic for the old episodes, and excited for what is new!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2007 09:26 am Title: Office Olympics

"Office Olympics" has always been one of my favorites, but recent events make it even more special.

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