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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2009 02:46 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

oh my goodness, this is exciting. i couldn't resist not reading ahead, so here i am. and i love 'adorkable'. it's so jim and pam! great chapter, and i'll keep reading after yoga. i'm actually getting up from my computer this time! sadly.... :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 02:54 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Ooooooooooh what do they have planned for him?:) Seriously so well written.

Reviewer: MoraDae Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

I am SO happy you are writing a sequel for Squirrel McPants. I loved the first one so much and I remember when I finished it wishing that you had continued so we could see what Jim's tasks would be and what the reactions of the chatters would be. I'm excited to read this as you write it. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, MoraDae - I appreciate it.  Hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!  

Reviewer: missheather Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

This is so great!!  I can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much - I'll try to get chapter 3 up asap!  Thanks for taking the time to review - it means a lot!

 

Reviewer: HemlockMartinis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

YES YES YES YES! So glad you're writing a sequel!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!  And I love your username!  :D

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

And a surprise to us the readers, too!  Grrrr...

Nice segue into and out of the actual events of the episode.  Totally unnoticable if you had missed that one.



Author's Response:

Totally unnoticable if you had missed that one.

Awesome - then I did my job right!! Chapter 3 coming soon.... thanks for reviewing, belsum!! 

Reviewer: jecksia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

oooooh. what could it be? I'm on the edge of my seat!!!


Author's Response:

All I can say is that it involves 100 pounds of dark chocolate......and a slingshot.  ;-)

Thanks for reviewing, Jecks!!

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

I can't wait to see what the surprise is going to be! Nice job on incorporating the conversation about Dwangela into a larger convo on secrets. And, lunch for a year?! Jim is gonna need some tasks that end sooner than that or Pam is gonna have him worn out. Year long tasks do suggest that the relationship will be a long one, though :)

Author's Response: thank you for the review!!  I have a feeling Jim will end up with a whole variety of tasks to keep him busy.....

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

This story makes me happy.  Good job weaving in the actual episodes and making them fit in.  And if I were Pam, I'd make Jim make lunch too.  That gets so boring doing it everyday.  (well actually my husband does it most days because I did get sick of it.)  Anyways...happy Jim & Pam = happy me.  Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, FIP - Happy Jim & Pam is my number #1 goal!!!  

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2007 05:04 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

What?  Unforgivable! </Jim>  Well, I'll forgive when you update, I guess.  Moxie, so nice, so fluid, just great.  I love the image of them in the kitchen together, the picture of happy domesticity.  Love it.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sweetpea - I so appreciate the kind words and encouragement!!  Chapter 3 is on its way.....

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2007 12:15 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

GAH!! Why the suspense?!?! MORE!!!

In case you couldn't tell, your story owns me... again.. 



Author's Response: LOL - that's okay, StarShine - it will take good care of you!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PamWannaBe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Moxie.... this story is so addicting.  Go write more ..... now.... please? 



Author's Response: Working on it, PWB!  Thanks for reviewing, dear!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed


Leikha> Yeah, so how long have you liked her?


Squirrel_McPants> Liked her? From the first day I met her. :-)


MairzyDoats> And when did you know you more than liked her?

Squirrel_McPants> About five seconds after I knew I liked her.

You don't need to apologize for fluff because that is great stuff.  I cannot tell you how much I'm looking foward to chapter 3.

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much - I hope you like Chapter 3 too!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 02:07 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Oh come on! [/Andy]
Not fair. Tell me you're updating soon!

Author's Response:

Okay - I'm updating soon.  Honest!!

Thanks, BBG!!!  :D 

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Apologizing for fluff is overrated.  That's why I never do it.  I liked the conversation re: Toby.  I'm still not happy with him.  Where is the hot chick he took the wedding?  I meant really....

Anyway - thanks for the fluff.   I appreciate it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, where the hell is that hot chick??  I mean really, the writers need to work on their continuity issues. 

Thanks for the review, dear - hope the rest continues to entertain! 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 01:51 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Gotta love the fluff.  Talk about leaving us in suspense.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks, jinx - it should be up soon....

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Totally awesome, but that's just a given. I love that we get to see them interacting both on and off-line now. Like when Pam's chatting and Jim isn't, but he's still in on her conversation. So cute! And I love that she made him dinner because I think it just proves that even though she's making Jim do all these things for her, it's not like she doesn't want to do things for him too. They really are adorable. Also, it was fun to hear your slant on the scenes from the episode! It's so much fun to imagine Squirrel fitting in with season 4. :)

Author's Response: What a lovely review, Azlin - thanks so much for taking the time to comment. It helps when I'm feeling a little uninspired and uncertain about my writing. 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

I'm so happy to have another series from you to enjoy, Moxie.  Another great chapter.  You incorporated the actual dialog so seamlessly.  It's nice to have the chat room characters back.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, Nan!  Chapter 3 is on its way......

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Just realized I didn't review the last part...woops, sorry, Mox! But, anyway - this story is a drug. Just when I was feeling all proud of myself after detox from the first Squirrel - you pulled me right back in. They're so sweet together, and I love the idea of his 'tasks' - lunch? Kid stuff. Bring on the real chores! (And I know you will.) Can't wait ;-)

Author's Response:

"Real chores"?  What ever on earth could you mean, dear colette??  ;-)

Pam will be richly rewarded, you can bet on that.  Thanks for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 11:56 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

No apologies are necessary, Mox, that was perfectly fluffy and happy and fun. Except that ending... not fair!
Their domestic life together is just so satisfyingly quiet and normal.
And I love how you are weaving the show's dialogue into your story. Really cool.

Author's Response: thanks, desert!  I'm working on bringing more fluff in chapter 3 - stay tuned!!  (and thanks for reviewing!!)

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 11:55 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

I was hoping that you did a follow up story.  Naturally you never disappoint!   Simply fantastic! We know the actors who play Jim & Pam but who would you cast as Vexin etc..I like to put a face with a character.

Thanks,

B



Author's Response: Good question, B - I'll try and post my character/actor choices as we come to the chapters that focus more on the chatters.  Thanks so much for reading and supporting my fanfic habit!  :)

Author's Response: Good question, B - I'll try and post my character/actor choices as we come to the chapters that focus more on the chatters.  Thanks so much for reading and supporting my fanfic habit!  :)

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 11:48 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

???? cliffhanger much?! hehe. this chapter was great! please post more soon!!

Author's Response: Thank, ISB - more soon, I promise!!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 11:36 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

ooh great.  Who wouldn't love their lunches made by Jim? 

I'm interested to see what Leikha is making Jim do for Pam.... *dreams of athe possibilities*

Lovely chapter :)



Author's Response: Thanks, WildBerry - hope the future chapters continue to please.....

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 11:31 am Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

ahh Moxie. I can't deal. This chapter was over way too soon!!



Author's Response: Sorry, nbyevu - but more is coming, I promise!! 

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