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Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 11:01 pm Title: On Company Time

I honestly think that you have kidnapped John Krasinski, Jenna Fischer, and at least two of the writers on the show.

I think that you keep these people locked in your basement and when you want to add a chapter to this you make them write and/or act it out, because it's just so freaking hilarious and perfectly them

So yeah, you're either a felon or you're extremely talented.



Author's Response: Well I'll tell you what...if I had them locked up, you certainly woudln't be getting the crap episodes you're getting right now! lol. We'd have our JAM together! hahah. Thanks for cracking me up! LOVED the feedback! So cool to hear stuff like this!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Labor Relations

In a dark world where angst, and sketchy, not-very-well-written attempts at fluff prevail the fanfiction side of the fandom, this fic is absolute brilliance and just the right bit of tonic, except of course it tastes good

Adorable little conversations, awesome banter, and JimtheDad or SlightlyMad!Jim never fails to make me feel a little light-headed. 

Wow. Love this, to bits, seriously. Keep writing - goodness knows we need more of it!  



Author's Response:

AW!! Thank you so much! Is it wierd that I heard the movie announcer guy during your first paragraph there? I love it! You make me want to write more RIGHT NOW....if only I had an idea...lol. THANKS SO MUCH. You're awesome!

Reviewer: lostfox555 Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 09:16 am Title: On Company Time

Love Pam and Jim in this story.  See, now if this stuff happened on the show I would have no problem with it. 

Author's Response: Man, amen to that one! I need some JAM!!! Thanks for the feedback!!!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 08:37 am Title: On Company Time

Every chapter of this story is incredibly adorable.  Please keep 'em coming.  It's just the cure for all the "real life" angst we're going through!

Author's Response:

Thanks xoxoxo! I just enjoy writing these so much. I'm hoping the ideas keep coming. It's kinda hard to be upbeat these days with the Office giving us the blues...::sigh:: Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: Flick14 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 02:12 pm Title: On Company Time

it is INSANE how spot-on your characterizations are. seriously. i frakkin LOVE reading these. it reads like canon, only BETTER. did that make sense? sorry im still giggly after reading this chapter, so i apologize for any incoherence. anyway awesome chapter!

Author's Response: WOW!!! Thank you so much for your kind words. Nobody has ever said THAT to me before. Thank you!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 05:32 am Title: Labor Relations

I LOVE your Jim and Pam.  I mean you really have them down perfectly.  I adore this series. 

Author's Response: I adore your feedback! Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 03:34 am Title: On Company Time

I cannot tell you how much I love this series. Reading a chapter is like taking a happy pill. The part about Jim feeding the baby was so great - and you really channel their voices. Still so sweet and funny and sexy too (love the last line!)

Author's Response: A Happy Pill......THAT is great! SO happy to be the Office drug dealer!! Lord knows we need it! Thanks Colette!

Reviewer: jamband Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 11:13 pm Title: On Company Time

JHalpert: Oh hold on…let me ask your brother Dwight…

i think i just died oh my god. the banter.



Author's Response: YAY!!! I think that was one of my favorite parts to write! So glad you got a kick out of it. :-)

Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 10:57 pm Title: On Company Time

Ok, I am seriously in love with this story. It makes me giggle like a little girl. So thanks for that.


Author's Response: hahaha! Just like Jim squealed like a little girl! LOVE IT!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 10:36 pm Title: On Company Time

because you’ve put on some weight

oh no no nooo Jim Halpert...that was a VERY bad thing to say...pam is a whole lot nicer than me to forgive him...hah 



Author's Response: lol. Well she certainly didn't have much room for stone throwing, crazy as she was. But yeah, Jim was treading on thin ice with that comment. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: clairek47 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 09:32 pm Title: On Company Time

So much cuteness! And I love your IM stories....they just work. I love the little glimpse into their lives....so well done. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Dialogue is my favorite thing in the world to write, so IM's are just FUN! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tv_dream Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 08:44 pm Title: On Company Time

There's so much I love, but I laughed out loud at this:

 

JHalpert: Was there tongue in that?

PHalpert: Obviously

 



Author's Response: hehe. SO happy to entertain. There's something about knowing you made someone TRULY laugh out loud that's just great! Thanks for telling me that.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2007 11:07 pm Title: Do Not Pass Go

Ah! I can't believe I didn't notice there was another chapter! Sexy, funny and clever! Hee. I will never think of Monopoly the same way again!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Do Not Pass Go

Oh, man, this little dose of Michael was just so perfectly awkward. And filming the "furniture"? Yowza!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 10:48 am Title: Do Not Pass Go

I LOVE that he's literally counting down. Just...so Jim.
Hee. This wasa great chapter. I love that they call it Monopoly. I wouldn't be surprised if Jill grew to just be traumatized by the game. All her little kindergarten friends will ask her if she's played and she'll answer that she never has because her parents keep the game hidden in the bedroom...
oh yes. I love it.
Thanks!
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 10:42 am Title: Do Not Pass Go

HAHAHAAHAHAHA!!! oh lovefool, this was awesome, as usual!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 09:11 am Title: Do Not Pass Go

Hee! Love the latest installment. Oh, Michael! I can so see this - that is all SO him, especially the bit about improv-ing the scene and enrolling Jill in acting classes... Oh dear. Too funny :)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 07:52 am Title: Do Not Pass Go

This chapter was utterly adorable and funny as hell. Their dialogue is perfect!

Reviewer: mess of jess Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 04:40 am Title: Do Not Pass Go

That was just so cute. I love when Jim told Pam he had "passed Go." Soo cute. Great chapter :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 04:17 am Title: Do Not Pass Go

haha i love it. michael was so annoyingly in character...

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 11:12 pm Title: Do Not Pass Go

This is soo cute..Keep it up. I have been looking out for this story...so keep it coming. Like I said before, I love Jim as a dad and you do a great job portraying that! Thanks for a great story!

Becky

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 11:03 pm Title: Do Not Pass Go

oh i laughed so hard at the five times "poop" was written...that is funny no matter how old you get

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Do Not Pass Go

Jim started to lower the camera. “Are you…is that –

 

“Scene,” Michael said nodding to him to cut the camera.

 

Jim switched it to stand by. “That was…wow.”

 

That had me rolling! The whole thing did! This story is so cute!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Labor Relations

*sigh* I love this series.  You really do have their characterizations down perfectly.  I could totally see them living their lives together exactly how you've created it. 

 Also..you make the most normal parts of their lives such a joy to read about.  Really, I love this series! 

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Do Not Pass Go

honestly, you're freakin' amazing. I loved everything about this chapter. Monopoloy, Pam's outfit,the popcorn, Jim, Michael coming in and wow. It's just so well written and adorable and I can hear Jim/Pam saying these things. You have their voices well honed.

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