9 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Labor Relations
Ohhh I LOVED this! So perfectly sweet. Jim would be the best daddy. I see this isn't completed...I really hope you do more soon, I absolutely adore it!
Date: January 11, 2007 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
Ooooh, Jim as daddy? *sigh*
Date: January 11, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Labor Relations
You have their banter down so perfectly. And then sweet, pathetic Michael at the end. Just really, really nice.
8 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
Awwwwwww! You have seriously made me love baby-fic. This is too sweet for words. And I giggled through the paragraph about the consequences that would occur if Jill is teased :-D
Date: January 11, 2007 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
SQQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
does that count as a review? cuz i think i'm too giddy to type anything beyond daddy!jim is TOO cute and TOO sexy for words... have i mentioned how much i love babies? or how much i love your writing?
Date: January 11, 2007 08:32 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
Jim’s first date with his daughter Wow. There's something about Daddy Jim alone with his daughter that melts me like the polar ice caps from global warming! So sweet.
Date: January 11, 2007 08:24 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
*sigh* Jim Halpert and babies! the last line of "Wow..." really got to me. so precious. thanks for continuing the story.
Date: January 11, 2007 08:19 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
sweet Jim and his daughter. He'd make a good dad.
Date: January 11, 2007 07:32 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
Daddies and their little girls -- so freaking adorable it makes my teeth hurt. This is really sweet.
Date: January 11, 2007 07:22 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
A-DOR-ABLE.
sigh.
Date: January 11, 2007 07:08 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
Aw :)
Date: January 11, 2007 06:44 am Title: Labor Relations
I couldn't begin to tell you how much I loved this story-- so glad you wrote another chapter! Please keep writing JamFamily stories!!!
9 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 06:09 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
OMG, Daddy!Jim- so sweet!
Date: January 11, 2007 04:53 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
This continues to take the lead in the Aw awards. Jim nervous and amazed and checking out his new girl...and still sounding just like Jim: He'd get Dwight to do it and Or that thought woulda been even scarier. And lots of other lines too. Just achingly sweet.
Date: January 11, 2007 04:17 am Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
Too lazy to log in, but oh man! Loved it. I was so excited to see there was more the the already sweet story of Jim and Pam's baby. I know I'm a geek, but totally made my morning!
If she got teased for any reason, he’d have to start beating up children
AWESOME! Does it make me sick that I couldn't stop laughing at the image of it. Too funny.
Date: January 10, 2007 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
You are the queen of fluffy jam babyfic.
It's all just big smiles and swelled hearts.
Another job well done.
<3
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!! I'll gladly wear that crown. lol. JAM baby just makes me smile and I'm glad it makes others smile too!
Date: January 10, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 "Everything"
This made my ovaries squee with happiness (TMI?) Adorable Jim with adorable offspring? I'm totally grinning. And this line was awesome: sorry…Dwight thoughts seeped through my fingers into your head
Author's Response: haha! Not TMI at all! Anything that induces a squee should be shared with all! Thanks for the props on the Dwight line. haha!
Date: January 06, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Labor Relations
This is the first Office fic I've ever read and it was a great way to start. You've got everyone's voices down so well. I loved how you captured the cringe-inducing awkwardness and then balanced it with sweetness, especially at the end. That's Michael...you want to smack him one minute, but then goes and does something that proves just how lonely and sweet he is. Wonderful fic.
Author's Response: Thanks a ton! That's SO true about Michael! You never know how you're going to feel about him from minute to minute.
10 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2006 04:18 pm Title: Labor Relations
Wow. Just. Freakin' wow. That was so cute and adorable and amazing. You have the characters spot on, especially with the little moments between Jim and Pam. I love how you had random people from the Office come in. This was brilliantly beautiful. I loved every second. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your kinds words Jade! It was so much fun! What's not to love about a JAM baby I ask you? hehe
10 [Report This]Date: December 07, 2006 02:21 pm Title: Labor Relations
Michael stayed! Wow, that really made me tear up. I love this. Fluff makes me very happy.
And yes, labor is very scary.
Thanks for sharing.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: My goal is making people happy when real life is dreary! Glad I could help out!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 08:56 pm Title: Labor Relations
So well done.
Funny and touching. Others have mentioned baby stories are tough sometimes. This story is a perfect example of the perfect way to do it.
Loved the end. I am a sap for a good Michael Scott emotional moment.
Author's Response: I second that...I am a sap for Michael too I must admit. He has fully accomplished having people "fear how much they love him" I think!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 03:02 pm Title: Labor Relations
I'm not usually a fan of fics with babies (I'm not in a very maternal place right now), but this was just so well written and fun. The banter was well executed...and I loved your Kelly.
Author's Response: I'm glad this could be an exception for you! Also...Kelly is so much fun to write!!! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:21 am Title: Labor Relations
This rocked my world. Perfectly charming and always in character - what a lovely, suprising story!
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2006 12:18 am Title: Labor Relations
This rocked my world. Perfectly charming and always in character - what a lovely, suprising story!
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Rose! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 12:10 pm Title: Labor Relations
so good!! made mefell so much better after last weeks epsiode. i especially loved the line: ‘Would you freak if I wanted to make a baby?’…and I said ‘Yes, because I really just had a craving for spaghetti tonight…nothing that exotic,’ and then you socked me in the stomach.”
this line literally made me laugh out loud.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Rebecca....unfortunately you're in the minority - everybody else thought that line sucked. ;-) Just kidding. Thanks again!