Date: January 17, 2007 11:25 pm Title: Shampoo
Cute! I totally sleeptalk and my BF makes fun of me for it all the time. More than once I told him to be careful not to knock the plates off the bed! LOL
Date: January 13, 2007 07:13 am Title: Shampoo
Woo! Yay for drunk Jim (and Roy/Karen)!
Date: January 07, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Shampoo
can't be bothered to sign in....but GREAT stuff! LOVED this line:
Their relationship right now was a badly xeroxed copy of the friendship they’d once had.
Date: January 06, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Shampoo
hehehehehehe... i love drunk jim... ^_^
Date: January 05, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Shampoo
Aw, I love the relief of the end. The sudden knowledge that maybe everything will be all right, even though almost nothing has happened yet.
Date: January 05, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Shampoo
Wow, these lines were so perfect - "To the left, disaster, in the form of pig-latin, frisbee golf, and ass-kissery on steroids. To the right, heartbreak, in the form of a dream she had let slip through her fingers."
8 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 03:23 pm Title: Shampoo
Oooh, that was just ridiculously yummy.
Date: January 05, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Shampoo
Ooh. Just the right amount of sexy. Thank you!
Date: January 05, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Shampoo
Aw. Sweet. I liked the line about their friendship being a badly xeroxed copy.
Date: January 05, 2007 02:41 pm Title: Shampoo
Ha! That was very funny: “Come on, Beesly. You know me how well? And that’s the thing that tips the scale towards perv for you?”
Poor Pam though, I really felt for her, with sentences like: "To the left, disaster, in the form of pig-latin, frisbee golf, and ass-kissery on steroids. To the right, heartbreak, in the form of a dream she had let slip through her fingers." This was so uncomfortable. Yet, a little moment with Jim can turn that around. Sweet.
Date: January 05, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Shampoo
Their relationship right now was a badly xeroxed copy of the friendship they’d once had.
Wonderful line.
Sometimes, when you weren’t paying attention, I’d run my fingers through your hair a few times
I don't think this is physically possible. There's no way someone would NOT feel that.
“Come on, Beesly. You know me how well? And that’s the thing that tips the scale towards perv for you?”
Ah. Wonderful Jim line. I can hear him saying this.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked (most) of it, lol. as for the fingers through hair thing, i really should have described that better. in my head, he's only playing with the ends of her hair. my boyfriend does that a lot, and i never notice it. most of the dialogue is actually based on a late-night conversation i had with him. re-reading it, i totally agree with you, so i'll probably change that a bit to get the visual right. thanks! :0)
Date: January 05, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Shampoo
Please let this be chapter one of a series! Sweet and fluffy, but still in character. Great job.
Date: January 05, 2007 11:57 am Title: Shampoo
oh. my. SexyJimVoice. *thud*
Date: January 05, 2007 11:46 am Title: Shampoo
mmm... jim halpert can sniff my hair anytime ;) this was cute, i love fluffy Jam stories aswell, so thanks
Date: January 05, 2007 11:41 am Title: Shampoo
I love drunk!Jim. Just too adorable.
I've also got a pretty good visual of Andy, Pam, and Jim sitting awkwardly on a small couch. *laughs*
And yey for Karen/Roy!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: January 05, 2007 11:27 am Title: Shampoo
Oh yum!!! That was perfect. Just the kind of fluffy fix I needed.
Thank you ever so much.
Date: January 05, 2007 10:41 am Title: Shampoo
What a perfect, simple, subtly sexy moment. Very believable dialogue too. A great antidote to Pam crying last night - really made me smile. Hope you don't mind that I just rec'd it at TWoP. Thanks for this.
Author's Response: woot! thanks! that's awesome. wow...i've never been rec'd before. wrecked, yes. rec'd, no. lol. you're awesome. for that, if you'd like, i'd be happy to drabble for you. pick a couple of characters, and a few keywords, and i'll do what i can. :0)