Penname: Jordon Real name: Jordon
Member Since: May 24, 2007

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Summary: The Dunder-Mifflin crew works at West Scranton High School.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37055 Read Count: 54057 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2008 Updated: April 27, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: March 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prologue

As an english student and future english teacher I declare this story AWESOME. Very fun, keep it going!

Author's Response: I declare this review of my story deemed awesome to be awesome. Thanks.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed
Date: April 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prologue

Awwww... I love this story, but the last line from this last chapter was a wonderful way to wrap it up.

This was a great first story, I hope you keep writing!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do have another idea that I worked with a little today that I haven\'t seen before so I may actually write another story when I get the chance.

Summary: After-Dinner Party. Pam and Jim get friskay.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4269 Read Count: 11089 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2008 Updated: April 16, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: April 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Gah, this is just fantastic, as usual. Smut and humor, combined with a healthy dose of reality (who hasn't had the leg cramps?) make it perfect. 

Quiet by shootingstars Rated: K [Reviews - 31] 21
Summary:

It’s been a week to the day since he burst into the conference room and started the rest of his life.

Spoilers for Chair Model

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3082 Read Count: 4572 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: April 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Quiet

God, this was fantastic. Just wonderful.


Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Summary: Jim's out of town. And it's really hot outside. Sound like a lousy night for Pam? Maybe not.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1781 Read Count: 5983 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2008 Updated: April 25, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: April 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Only Chapter

Wooooooooow... very hot, great first story. I hope you don't have to be prodded to write more!


Author's Response: Thanks...and thanks again for being my first review!

Summary:

Ryan/Karen, some Jim/Pam.

Karen has her own season of self-discovery. Only it's a little more subtle than coal-walks or love declarations.


Categories: Other, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4633 Read Count: 2089 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: April 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sigh, fantastic as usual. Very in-depth review, I know. 

Summary: How a little courage and honesty finally gave them both what they wanted.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31928 Read Count: 71068 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2008 Updated: September 25, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: April 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Hope is the thing with feathers

Good golly this is fantastic. Incredibly detailed and descriptive, and Jim and Pam are just perfectly written. Great, great job, are you sure this is your first story?

Author's Response: Thanks! What a nice compliment from an English Lit student! :)\r\n\r\nThis is the second story I\'ve posted, but i\'ve been writing for a long time. This is just such a fun, great place (and fun, great characters) to practice with.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: and sweetest in the gale is heard

This has really become my one of my all time favorite post-The Job fics. I love the alternating narratives, and the characters are written spot on. Also, some of the little details you've thrown in, like Cole Hamels (my favorite pitcher!) really add depth and flavor to a great story.

Lastly, was the quote you heard from Ben Stein from one of his appearances on Loveline? I was just listening to one of his shows with Adam and Drew on my iPod, and he talked about that exactly, along with his book.



Author's Response: Thanks Jordon! It\'s all in the details...I can get kind of obsessive about that sort of thing. Hamels really did almost pitch a no-hitter on a Wednesday in May of last year. As for Ben Stein, no, I was just cruising through quotation websites, because I am a sucker for good quotes, and that one just jumped out at me. Thanks so much for your encouragement and feedback! I\'m having so much fun writing this.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Hope is the thing with feathers

woohoo, update!

(very excited to see this, if you couldn't tell)

I'm really enjoying your story as you take us through the first months together, and the steps people take in being a couple. Everything is very real, and the characters are true to the show - if you were having problems with Pam, I couldn't tell. Anyway, a very fun update, thanks so much!



Author's Response: Thanks Jordon! I\'m glad you\'re still along for the ride. I don\'t know why but the Pam chapters are really making me struggle, whereas Jim\'s chapters just seem to pour out...but I\'m glad it doesn\'t seem like it. Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's been acting a little strange these days.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12504 Read Count: 31831 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2008 Updated: May 08, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This and the Job Fair that just finished airing have led to me just generally *flailing* in happiness. Fantastic chapter, great ending, perfect story. God, I'm a total wreck right now. 

Author's Response: That was such a sweet episode tonight. About time things started to go right for our boy. Thanks for all the kind words, I\'m glad you enjoyed my story!

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome vignettes into their personal lives, they really seem to fill in the blanks from what we see very believably (and of course it doesn't hurt that they are fun and written in character). I vote for continuing!

Author's Response: Thanks Jordon! So far the consensus seems to say keep going, so I\'m working on it!

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aaaaand I was totally psyched out there - I thought for sure Jim was going to propose in the car. Very well done, I love this story. 

Author's Response: Yay! That was exactly my intention, I\'m glad it worked. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this story, as I've said before. I wasn't expecting the flashbacks, but they were a great surprise and a welcome set up for what's coming next. Also, I really like your pranks. Or not so much pranks, but the way you have Jim suggest something that seems very real and in character, and is still fun without being antagonistic. Great job!

Author's Response: thanks! I actually wrote that whole scene a little while ago and thought it might be something she was thinking about while waiting for him to get on with it. Which is probably just my way of stalling while I figure out the ending...but I think I\'ve got a handle on it now. Thanks for sticking with me!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"The Job," Jim and Pam's first Saturday together as a couple.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3555 Read Count: 4644 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2008 Updated: May 03, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

God, this was so good. I will never ever ever get tired of Jim and Pam firsts, whether it's date/sleepover/kiss, and ESPECIALLY not when they are so well written. I love this story.


Author's Response: That is so sweet! Thank you! :)\r\n-Chels

Summary:

Jim takes a prank too far and finds himself facing off against Alan Shore, Boston's most capable litigator. An Office/Boston Legal crossover. Guest starring Andy, Karen, and Pam.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Andy, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4590 Read Count: 1597 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2008 Updated: May 04, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Sort of Man You Are

My name is Denny Crane. That is all.

(I haven't even read this yet, but I love it already for combing two of my favorite things). Off to read it now!



Author's Response: Hell Yeah!  Another Boston Legal fan!  By the way I just got the Wire, Season 1 Disc 1 from Netflix, although I imagine a crossover there might be a bit more challenging.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Sort of Man You Are

This was great. Alan Shore is one of my favorite characters of anything ever, and he's so well written here, which is really hard to do. Love love LOVE Alan tearing into Jim and giving him the wake up call. 

And yes, my ultimate dream is a Wire/Office crossover! I've had all kinds of ideas for how to make it work, but the heartbreaking Greek tragedy style of The Wire mixing with the comedy with a heart of The Office is so intimidating. 

 



Author's Response: I'm glad you like my Alan. He has won me over like no other character, and is amazingly fun to write.  He has to be one of the deepest, most mutli-faceted characters on TV, and the way his passion burns through when he argues is beyond cool.  I haven't started Wire yet but I'm fully expecting to like it based on what I've heard.  Thanks again.

Summary: Past Featured Story“Pam and I have hurt a lot of people, but mostly we’ve hurt each other. There’s no coming back from that.”
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: David Wallace, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63735 Read Count: 53304 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: July 27, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed
Date: May 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great - a real slow burn, that's been very satisfying to read. Please continue!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it so far! I know it\'s a lot of angst, but I hope you will continue to enjoy the story! Thanks for taking the time to review!

Summary: The worst six months of her life.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2700 Read Count: 3372 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow. I always love your writing, even if it's not the happiest of endings. I still think Jim and Pam have some stuff to work through, and a situation like this would definitely count as something that needed to be worked on. Great, great job, as usual. 

Author's Response: Thank you! Believe it or not, this is more along the lines of the stories I wrote in other fandoms before this one (something about Jim/Pam just brought out the squee in me), and now that they're having more mature and realistic issues with their relationship than the UST I felt like revisiting this kind of story.

Summary: Jim discovers a new thing about Pam that will lead to some fun and sexy moments.
This takes place in the unseen summer between seasons 3 and 4 where their romance is still taking off.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: First Dates
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667 Read Count: 7030 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Dare

This is very cute, please continue!

Stars by dundiefromgod Rated: T [Reviews - 42] 23
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Season Five Premiere in Script-Fic.
With office morale at a seemingly all-time low, Michael attempts to save the day with a new idea that is sure to bring happiness to everyone. Meanwhile, the couples of the office, and those who aren't quite there yet, react to the events of the Fourth Season Finale, "Goodbye, Toby."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: The Office Scripts
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11948 Read Count: 15274 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Cold Open

Yay, new script fic by my favorite author! I really enjoy your writing (clearly), and this style makes it feel like we broke into the set in Palo Alto or wherever they film the Office and stole into the writers room. Awesome stuff. 

Author's Response: Wow, what a nice review, thank you so much Jordon. I always appreciate reviews from you, they're so nice. I'm glad that you've liked it so far, and hopefully you'll continue to as I work on it.

Summary: "Oh, mister, wait until you see/What I'm gonna be/I've got a plan, a demand and it just began/And if you're right, you'll agree..." Let's have a bit of fun with our dear girl before TPTB let us know what she really did with her summer vacation, shall we?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 21572 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: June 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The First Month

Really, really enjoyed this - in fact, I'm just going to imagine this as canon for the rest of the summer. Please continu!

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: June 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The First Month

Wow, I fail at spelling continue. Anyway, great story, looking forward to the next chapter and all that - I love your Pam, and her adjustment to going back to school and living in the city. It's the small stuff about these characters that make them interesting.

Summary: Philly Jim and America's favorite pastime
Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8434 Read Count: 3679 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: July 02, 2008
Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10
Date: July 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Who's On First

Wow, baseball and The Office, two of my great loves. Really, really enjoying this so far, very well done! The characters are funny and I love your very original take Jim and Pam as completely different people. Awesome stuff.