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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Humor, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 76608 Read Count: 29393 ePub Downloads: 4
Date: July 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
This story is so good. It's hilarious and heartbreaking, all at the same time.
Oh, and "the KGB used to kill people by choking them with snow, so there were no traces?…That’s all I’m saying."
Still laughing out loud, that was great.
Author's Response: I appreciate what you say in your review. I really tried to have it both be funny but also angsty/dramatic, so I'm glad you saw that. The KGB thing is real too! I read it in a book, somewhere, I think Dan Brown maybe. Either way, thank you for the review Jordon.
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
That was wonderful! I'd just like to add that I'm looking forward to this final chapter for pt. 2 of The Job almost as much as the premiere of season 4.
Author's Response: That is very nice of you to say/write! Part II of "The Job" should be a little while, but I won't leave you hanging. I'll try to keep it under 10,000 words too. Thanks for the review and kind words Jordon.
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
Yeah, I really love this. I especially enjoy that you take the time to really flesh everything out, and create an involving, in depth story that doesn't rush over anything. Awesome stuff, looking forward to the next (last? I hope not) chapter.
How the hell has this not gotten a blue ribbon yet?
Author's Response:
Wow, what a very nice review. I definitely try to take my time and flesh out a lot of the thoughts/anxieties/etc. in Pam's mind. I really like that aspect of writing fic, so that's what I'm going for in this story. My next chapter will not be my last one either. I'm not going to guess the word count that it will take to cover the first date in its entirety/complexity but it will be more than one chapter.
Ha, I have no idea how the ribbon system works, but I'm okay with it. I don't write for ribbons/read counts/reviews.
That said, I do like reviews, so thank you for yours, Jordon.
Date: September 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
this so needs an update!
/poke
Author's Response: Thank you for your support of this story! I admit, fully, that I update this story much too slowly (usually between 10-14 days between chapters.) It's going to take a bit longer this time, because I've been so busy, and had to feed my fic-addiction through 55 worders. But fear not! Because, unlike "A Game of Global Domination" (which I feel terrible about, by the way)....I am not going to leave this hanging (though I fully intend to return to AGoFD). Anyway, Devil/Pam/Angel and Jim will be going a-dating soon enough.
Date: October 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
I was on my way out the door and I see this has an update. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Now I know there's an update and can't read it for 8 more hours. /shakesfist
Oh well, I have something to look forward to tonight.
Author's Response: That is bad timing, ouch. I hope you've gotten the chance to read it though. Thank you again for your previous review about updating. It took me a long time, but I finally got there. Thank you for the review Jordon.
Date: December 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
Just a gentle /prod, this fantastic story really needs an update!
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you very much for your encouragement, I honestly feel terrible about how long it has been since I've updated this story. However, I can say that beginning later this week, I finally have enough time off to finish this story, and will be doing so. I don't care if it takes me 20,000 more words....its getting done. So thanks again Jordon, and I hope you'll keep reading when its updated!
Date: January 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Problem
I finally got back from vacation yesterday night and spent all afternoon reading up on my favorite stories here, and I was so thrilled to see a new chapter waiting for me.
I know the first date stories have been done to death, but there are some out there (this one especially, though it's only maybe 1/3rd about the first date) that are just fantastic and amazing and I reread quite a bit. We couldn't see the first date over the summer break, so it's left to fanfic to speculate what happened. I'm perfectly fine with that when we have stories like this one - Pam's conflicting emotions (and Devil and Angel) were terrific, and while I'm dreading the time when those two characters disappear, the fact that Pam has finally reached that point where she doesn't need them anymore will make it worthwhile.
One last thing, I've always thought that the argument of "who loves who more" would be extremely fitting as their first big fight. Not so much about who in fact loves the other more, but just the pain that the two of them caused each other, and the fact that it was overlooked before they finally came together would make a great (and realistic) starting point for drama in their relationship.
Thanks again for updating your story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
What a great review, as usual. I really appreciate your support for my story, its really nice to hear.
I was definitely apprehensive about launching this story into first date fic territory, because you're right, it has been done many, many times. I think the reason that I decided to do it was to really try to emotional encompass Pam's feelings and experience (I've devoted over 30,000 words to it so far). I really like digging into the character and trying to see what she is thinking or experiencing, which is where Devil and Angel are handy. And the end for them is nigh, but they're disappearance isn't a sad thing for Pam, as it is a reaffirmation of her strengthening of bonds with Jim.
About the argument, I'm glad that you agree with me on its nature. I was nervous about including something like that in this chapter, because of the fact that it happens fairly quickly. So, I *tried* to segway into it a little, so that it sort of showed the underlying tension and anger over their respective situations, and how it bubbled to the surface. Again, they love each other, but they've also hurt each other deeply, so this is sort of a first step in acknowledging that.
Thanks for the review Jordon, and I hope to be able to post the chapter with much less of a break then this one was with the previous chapter.
KaPam slash that I am crazy proud of. Complete.
Also! I demand more KaPam love from you people! I DEMAND IT! I'm taking away poor precious Jim Halpert until my demands are met. And I will hurt him.
Categories: Other
Characters: Karen, Pam, Pam/Other
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Slash, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8113 Read Count: 10849 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part I.
Actually, please write more kkthx.
How Jim became a 28-year-old virgin.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11710 Read Count: 22837 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh poor, poor Jim. This chapter hits a little close to home, but I love it anyway.
Also, great touch with the Green Bay stuff - Brett Favre's #4 on each cheek and swearing at the tv? Yeah that's a dreamgirl.
Author's Response: Aww. I'm glad you liked it anyway. I loved writing this chapter. It's my favorite so far.
(first bits are Jim reflecting on some sadness. it will eventually lead to 'first date' business.. and smut)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11067 Read Count: 72631 ePub Downloads: 6
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: i never said that it was time, i was just hoping it
I really love this story. I know, not an enormously in depth review, but I just love it.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4232 Read Count: 12305 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: August 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Whoaaaa...
I know we've talked before about our mutual appreciation for angry/possessive/non-perfect (but more realistic!) Jim, and that was fucking awesome.
Author's Response: Jordan, I checked through my old reviews, but didn't find your username... Have we chatted before in a different forum? Thanks so much for the praise though. Flawed Jim is my absolute favorite for some reason...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5534 Read Count: 8093 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: September 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Morning
This was really, really good - I'm personally of the opinion that Jim and Pam would make great parents, but that doesn't mean perfect parents, which is why I really liked this.
Author's Response: thanks! i\'m so glad you liked it. i agree with you about the kind of parents they might be. they are, after all, human. plus it\'s far more interesting than an argument about who will buy the diapers. so... thanks for your comments.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10255 Read Count: 21379 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: September 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Awkward Years
This is all kinds of awesome.
Author's Response: well, you are all kinds of awesome for saying so!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3044 Read Count: 10349 ePub Downloads: 3
Date: September 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Fun Run Redux
Guh. About time you wrote something again!
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1010 Read Count: 2949 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: September 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part One
This is exactly what I imagine happened after (during?) The Job/Fun Run flash back, really really awesome.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: The Office Scripts
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11706 Read Count: 18709 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: November 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Cold Open
Best. Christmas. Ever.
I really enjoyed that, it felt like a real episode. Well done!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad that it read that way to you. Thank you for the review Jordon.
Categories: Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3631 Read Count: 2781 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was just perfect. Just perfect.
Author's Response: Really glad you liked it!
“Are you free for dinner tonight?” (Hello)
"Yes." (Hello)
For a long time it's just missed opportunities and crossed wires.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14247 Read Count: 28937 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: January 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night
I can't even tell you how perfect that was. I've been following this story since the beginning, and really looking forward to this chapter since you started it. Jim's thoughts about Pam, his future, and everything she meant to him was flawless. It brought me right back to last May, and how I just felt exactly like Pam in this chapter - she tells him everything, her great moment of truth, and basically nothing is made of it for an entire week? I mean, come on! This last chapter really just brought me back to that time, and how it ended and there was this huge sigh of relief and happiness, and how the future was just wide open. I loved The Job, and I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I\'m glad you\'ve followed this story from the beginning and stuck with it to the end. I had a bit of trouble getting Pam\'s thoughts down for \'The Job\' so I\'m glad you felt it expressed them well. Thanks so much :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other, Roy
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15287 Read Count: 33586 ePub Downloads: 3
Date: November 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I had chills when I finished this. Just. Amazing.
Author's Response: Wow...I'm a little speechless at that. Chills is a very, very good thing! Thanks so much.
Categories: Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2360 Read Count: 2805 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: November 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Dunder Mifflin Sketch-Off
I really, really liked this story. I'm just going to accept this as what really happened from now on.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, that\'s awesome! \r\n:-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday, Romance, Suspense, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2816 Read Count: 1235 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Lift off
Whoa. Did not see that coming. Anyways, I liked it and hope you continue.
Jim Halpert takes a journey through his own personal inferno with a little help from the characters we know and love (or hate). Will it lead to paradise and a reunion with Pam, or will he be sidetracked along the way?
A takeoff of the classic Dante Alighieri work The Divine Comedy.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21480 Read Count: 18308 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: December 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Airing Dirty Laundry
Wow, this is really really good - the last 2 chapters with Jim's flashback/memories were excellent, I especially liked how you captured the intimacy of Jim lifting Pam up to put the star on the tree. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you Jordon! I'm glad you liked it...I thought the tree star thing was something very Jim and Pam, intimate but not terribly so as to go past the friend boundary. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17207 Read Count: 27114 ePub Downloads: 14
Date: December 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Noooooooo!!!!
You can't stop there! You can't!
This is wonderful, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yikes! I am sorry to leave you hanging, but more is coming. Thank you so much Jordan, I am really happy that you're enjoying it! I know people say reviews make me smile, but seriously when I read that people are invested like this, you have me practically giddy! Thanks again. Motivation to write asap.....
Date: January 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I was so happy to see this updated! And the wait was worth it, this 3rd chapter was excellent. The card and her drawing of her own "teapot" and all the memories and mementos of her and Jim's relationship was great. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you Jordan! I really struggled with it, but it all came together yesterday. I'm glad you are still reading and I really apprecaite all your wonderful support!!!