Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10
Date: September 07, 2007
Title: Chapter 7: Looking Into The Mirror
Okay, by the end of this, I had a huge smile on my face and maybe I was kindasorta crying a little but that's only because I'm a huge freaking sap and I loved Jim's gift for Pam because that's just so.. Jim. And I loved that you had Pam wear a Nirvana shirt as opposed to something a little less casual because Jim would truly find that awesome. Heee. The thing I love most about this story (among a lot of things, mind you) is that you have Pam and Jim down so perfectly and it makes it so fun to read because I can just see it happening. I've said that before but it's definitely worth mentioning again after this incredible chapter. You continue to awe me, dundie, and I absolutely cannot wait to see where you take Pam (and Devil and Angel) next. I'm sure it'll be as beautiful as every single chapter already is.
Author's Response:
As always, your review is wonderful and awesome. I'm glad that you liked the Nirvana shirt and Jim's gift. I tried, and will continue to try, to be a little different with respect to their date. Also, I figure that despite the fact that Jim decided that day to go on a date with Pam, he must have thought it through a lot of times, for many years.
Also, thank you for your comment on characterization. I try to get Pam and Jim somewhat close to how I think they would work/speak off-camera. So I'm glad that you find that believable. Thank you for the fantastic review, oobadnama.