Two days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.Wow that was sad! Very well written I might add! I hope you continue it.
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Oh, I'm definitely continuing it! (...Says the woman who spent literally four hours this afternoon writing, then gulped down her dinner -- after conning the husband into cooking it -- just so she could get back to the writing. Obsessed, much? Not me. LOL)
I'm glad you're enjoying this, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Excellent as usual!
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Some of your best work! Please continue.
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Simply great!
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Huge Police fan and a huge fan of this story! Chapter 4 is fantastic!
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I enjoyed this story. well written.
That was great! Short and sweet!
Thanks,
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What if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....Mox I'm really enjoying this story. Chapter 3 worked well from Karen's pov. You are simply the master of the Jim & Pam interaction! You never disappoint. You really are extremely talented and should persue writing! Just my opinion. I hope you continue this story and I eagerly await more of the Squirrel Mcpants part 2 story as well. I hope to see more of JAM and Mrs. Halpert as well.
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great job!
Author's Response: thanks, batman!! I'm always happy to see you've commented. :-)
excellent! please continue! looking forward to the next chapter.
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Your parents seem to really like her, and she blushes when she hears that she's the first girl you've ever brought home. She's adorable when she blushes, and you add it to the ever growing list of things you love about her.
awesome light and fluffy. Nice read. I hope you continue.
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very nice
Author's Response: Thanks!
Outstanding!
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Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.This is an excellent story!
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This story is excellent! I eagerly await the payoff!
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Phyllis Lapin Vance seems on the surface to be the friendly, slightly-maternal face of the office. But Pam's been around long enough to know a little better than that. Pam knows who her friends really are, and Phyllis certainly isn't on that list......
Solid story Mox! you don't miss a detail on this great show. I get the feeling Jim like Phyillis as well like a big sister or something. I think Phyillis actually is happy for JAM but does say some silly things at times that annoy Pam more than Jim.
Great Job.
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PS I eagerly await more appeasing Miss Beasly... But no pressure LOL.
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Good job you know your Office! Keep it going.
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That was Excellent! You're becoming one of my favorite writers!
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great story I await the rest!
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I Love cheeze wiz!
Great Job!
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Please keep going it's a good story.
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Excellent job! Its wel written and very descriptive. I hope you continue it I'd like to read your opinion on how things progressed between them!
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WOW!
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Absolutely fantastic! I usually reserve that for Moxie's work but this is relly excellent! I hope you continue it through at least the engagement. I'd like to hear your take on that big event.
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