Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10
Date: September 14, 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The first one is what totally should have happened on the show--hello, Pam, drunken proposal does not equal romance.
The second was cute and fun and crazy enough to actually happen (if Jim wasn't in Australia).
Although Roy leaving her would be less satisfying for Jim, I'm actually shocked that he's so oblivious to not have done so already.
The fourth one was written beautifully, especially this part: Her life had been on this nice, simple, straight path until Jim came along. And now she was beginning to realize she didn't want that path, but there were no forks in the road, no way to get across to another path, another choice. Now Jim was practically offering her a ride to get somewhere new.
The last one was sweet and sexy.
Loved them all!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked them all so much!