Reviewer: gotkona Signed
Date: May 16, 2007
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: I'm writing on a little piece of paper; I'm hoping some day you might find
Wow I wasn't expecting Jim to recite song lyrics. Can't wait for the last chapter.
Author's Response:
I want you to know that I have been laughing hysterically for the past two minutes (seriously, I was wiping tears away) because I did not intend for that to read as though he'd actually said them out loud -- and when I went back and re-read it, it totally did come off that way, which turned that moment into something absolutely hysterical. (Maybe I have a sick sense of humor, but I'd written it like he was standing there staring at her, then all of a sudden burst out with those few lines from "Hallelujah." Oh my god, my shoulders are shaking...)
All this to say: THANK YOU for pointing that out (and for not asking me what the hell I was thinking in your review, hee). Seriously. Oh god, I'm wondering how many other people read that and thought, WTF??
My god, I am STILL laughing....
Thanks so much for the review (and the giggle fit!) --