Penname: grammarfreak Real name: Allison
Member Since: December 21, 2007

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Shift by thirtypercent Rated: MA [Reviews - 140] 93
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Jim never went to Stamford? What if Pam started making life changes a little sooner?

An AU look at season 3.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23367 Read Count: 98197 ePub Downloads: 57
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2007 Updated: May 15, 2013
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: January 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Oh, you're changing your heart

This is great. It's very realistic!

Author's Response: Thanks grammarfreak!  I'm really striving for realism here, so I'm glad you think it works.  Thanks for reviewing. :)

Summary: Last holiday season, Jim found his True Love. This year, it's his turn to pull a few surprises. A follow-up to My True Love Gave to Me - and yes, Parma's back!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35249 Read Count: 40852 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2007 Updated: August 06, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: February 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: May

cute last line

Summary: Past Featured StoryWatching the documentary as a favor for Ryan, Toby learned that almost everyone at Dunder Mifflin could probably sue Michael for something and win big. And he learned a few other very important lessons as well.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Darryl, Jim, Kelly, Michael, Ryan, Toby, Toby/Other
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4640 Read Count: 4519 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2007 Updated: December 31, 2007
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: January 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great, and very original. Good job!

Couch by nomadshan Rated: T [Reviews - 21] 8
Summary: Jim and Pam have a ritual.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Still
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 494 Read Count: 5206 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2008 Updated: January 04, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: couch

Wow! Was not expecting that.

Author's Response: Thanks, grammarfreak!

Summary: Five wedding presents that Jim and Pam got from members of the office.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1312 Read Count: 5256 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2008 Updated: January 05, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really adorable, and well thought-out character wise. Good job!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam and Jim reconnect after the events of Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1517 Read Count: 6262 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2008 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: January 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Rings and An Answering Machine

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!

Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184377 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Fair Dinkum Drongo

the circular language thing is actually cockney from wales in the uk, if you were interested

Author's Response:

Do you mean like the crazy derivation of "seppo?"  How do you know about this?

I love your name!

Summary: AU- Starts with Jim leaving for Stamford, ends in a happy place. Inspired by "Message in a Bottle" by The Police.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, In Stamford, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5750 Read Count: 19505 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: February 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

adorable!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed 9
Date: February 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Love Can Mend Your Life

love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She couldn't be sure exactly when he ceased to exist, but the first day she suspected something was the day after she canceled her wedding.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10705 Read Count: 46555 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: March 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: then I can't remember caring for an hour or so

creative idea

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Things I did not know at first I learned by doing twice

love the ending!

Summary: 5 times Pam or Jim utters the classic line through their relationship. Some of it is now, some is future. Spoilers for The Deposition (kind of)
Categories: Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 926 Read Count: 1937 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2008 Updated: April 02, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: April 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that last part - adooorable

Summary: Past Featured Story


NOW COMPLETE!!!

"Jim, why don't you tell Pam how you really feel?" 

 Jim and Pam deal with the stuff that comes with being on a hit show...talk shows, radio call-ins, and press junkets. They say there's no such thing as bad publicity, but is that really the case? Watch as Jim and Pam deal with being in the public eye and under the thumb of manipulative network producers. The story is told through interviews, transcripts, web pages and photos.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54070 Read Count: 70547 ePub Downloads: 32
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2009
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: May 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Transcript : The Dr. Stephanie Wilkins Show

this story is really original - i like it

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I really appreciate it!

Summary: If you knew Toby Flenderson long enough, you wouldn’t like him.
Categories: Present, Past, Future
Characters: Toby
Genres: Angst, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4723 Read Count: 3671 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2008 Updated: April 28, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: April 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: And the Song Remains the Same

Different, and tough - but really good

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!

Summary: Some of the people at Dunder Mifflin Scranton do nice things for Angela. This was written in February during the Writer’s Strike for the MTT Word Challenge. Each chapter is a drabble (exactly 100 words.)
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Angela, Ensemble
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Word: Two-Week Fanfic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339 Read Count: 22937 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2008 Updated: April 29, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: April 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: End: Michael

short and sweet :)

Author's Response:

I have to say, there are a lot of times I check out the number of words in a story to figure out whether it's a major time commitment.  Sometimes I have to just leave it for later when I can dedicate more time to it.  It is nice at times to breeze through something quickly.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, grammarfreak!   

Summary: Jim gives Pam a weekend she will never forget.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5477 Read Count: 14410 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2008 Updated: May 06, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Applause

adorable!

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's been acting a little strange these days.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12504 Read Count: 31866 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2008 Updated: May 08, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: May 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i like it - i can totally see this happening (chapter 2). can't wait for more!

Summary: "They wanted to take the romance and literally break its back, as an homage to you… we took the romance of the show and we pushed it downstairs… and it's slowly recovering." -John Krasinski, EW.com interview with Jenna Fischer. Pam is injured in a high heeled-related incident and faces a recovery, a new relationship, and a sex-less summer. Rated: T
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 656 Read Count: 6066 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2008 Updated: May 21, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: May 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Dates four through fifty-five were the same.

that link to youtube distracted me for several hours, haha

Author's Response: as it was meant to!

Summary:

Somewhere between the Dairy section and the cereal aisle he has an epiphany.

Spoilers for Goodbye Toby


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3089 Read Count: 3158 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: May 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i need this jim in my life, stat

Author's Response: Yeah me too :) Thanks for commenting!

Summary: Jim is able to share some sincerity with Dwight, a scene that could preclude the final scene in "Goodbye, Toby"
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 961 Read Count: 1848 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: May 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Little Bit Weaker Than We Used To Be

perfect. can this happen on the show?

Summary: "Oh, mister, wait until you see/What I'm gonna be/I've got a plan, a demand and it just began/And if you're right, you'll agree..." Let's have a bit of fun with our dear girl before TPTB let us know what she really did with her summer vacation, shall we?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 21572 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: June 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Third Month

this is a fantastic story - so heartfelt and realistic

August by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 55] 33
Summary: The Brooklyn Bridge, a tiny elephant, dim sum, ancient Mayan princesses. Your basic Sunday in New York.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4546 Read Count: 12546 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2008 Updated: June 29, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: June 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Over The Brooklyn Bridge

love it

Author's Response: Thanks, grammarfreak!

Summary:

This will be a series of self-contained chapters (oneshots) exploring various "what ifs" pertaining to episodes spanning seasons one through three. Each chapter will examine how things would've gone differently if either Jim or Pam had responded to a given situation the way that (most) fans had wanted or almost expected them to.

For example, the first chapter focuses on how things would've happened differently if Jim had confessed during those twenty-seven seconds of silence on the booze cruise when we were all holding our breath and hoping he would.

Among the other chapters I have mapped out: What if all the reminders of Jim in "Gay Witch Hunt" had provoked not a small, sad smile from Pam at the end of the episode, but rather, had motivated her to take action -- drive to Stamford to see him for the first time in four months? Or what if Jim had responded to Pam's text in "Diwali" via a post-Jagermeister phone call? What if Jim had walked in on Pam crying at the end of "Back From Vacation"? (...You get the idea.)

Again, though, each chapter will be confined to an episode, so it will essentially be a series of oneshots that are unrelated to each other.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6304 Read Count: 10148 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2008 Updated: January 16, 2009
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: My Memory Serves Me Far Too Well

both chapters were great

Philly Jim by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 380] 118
Summary: Past Featured StoryIs there life and love after Jam?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64237 Read Count: 83854 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2008 Updated: September 05, 2008
Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: July 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

this is very, very good. the first anti-jam story i've actually enjoyed.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks grammarfreak! Quite a compliment. Glad you\'re enjoying it!

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

never thought i'd like seeing jim without pam, but this is fantastic

Author's Response: Thanks so much, grammarfreak! Yeah, I never imagined writing a fic without Jim and Pam together ... but you know how things go. Glad you\'re liking it, and thanks for reading!