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Did I tell you I loved this?   I did?  Well I'm telling you again.

Thanks for this lovely glimpse of hot and bothered pregnant Pam.   And Jim as her own virtual Disney World.

:)

Shan - you're killing me.  Once with this incredible story and twice with the fact that I still haven't finished what I'm writing for you. :(   Help a sister out and please email me with some prompts...any prompts.  If my writers block doesn't budge soon I'm going to fold up my keyboard for life. 

Ok - that might be a little dramatic - but it's how I feel when I read such spot on dialogue by both Jim, Pam and Dwight and that card....such a lovely, perfectly in character take on the contents.

Yay you.

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What.  You wait for me to write something fluffy and then smack me down?? Nice.  Reallllllll nice.  I see how it is.

I wish I could be mad at you - but with words like these I simply can't.  My heart aches for Pam and the poor guy on the other side of the phone - whoever that was.  

Like lis said - the imagery is so vivid throughout.   I felt like I couldn't breathe at times.

Or maybe that's just my sinus infection. ;)

All kidding aside - because this was too good to make light of - I'm so very glad to be reading something you've written - even if the angst makes me feel like I'm drowning too.

Yes.  This is how it happened.  :)   Thank you for this Lis.  I'm beginning to forget why I love them so much.  I need lots of reminders - so keep writing.

Author's Response: We need a "JAM day of remembrance" or something- stupid strike! But yes, my love is still strong and it bursts forth in tiny snippets of fic. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

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Adorable and sweet - the perfect dessert for my lunch today.

Thank you Lis. You made me smile. :)

I thought this was pretty damn spectacular when I first laid eyes on it - but you've perfected the perfection (if that makes any sense).

I tend to take care of Karen rather neatly (and unrealisticly) so yay you.   Absolutely awesome as usual.

Whoa.  I can't even imagine what it would have been like if we'd really seen all that.  Well - actually - I can, since you wrote it so vividly.

Soooo dinner huh?  :)

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Oh yay!!!  When you told me you posted I expected to be left at the same point I was when you first let me read this.  It was a lovely surprise to see the new sections with Jim and Pam. 

I love how you describe the "demise" of Pam and Roy's relationship and the way you've written Jim's thought process in regards to other women is precisely why I adore him.

And I suspect it's almost fixed - or at least on it's way so I'm happy.

And of course - that's what's most important. ;)   LOL!

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Work has dragged on and on and on today.  My eyelids are threatening to close due to a mix antihistimines and boredom.

This?   Makes it much better. :)

No surprise - but fyi - I loved every single syllable.

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I had to read it twice before I said anything 'cause I adored it too much for once to be nearly enough.  One of the reasons why I love Jim and Pam so much is because they are so simple.  Not in simple minded at all but I just think that they are not very complicated creatures.

There's enough that's complicated in this life - it's nice when something is effortless and easy.   Love as simple as theirs is precious and rare and you've captured it here just beautifully.

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Lis - this story makes me want to propose to you.

You know if you were available and I wasn't straight.  ;)

LOVE IT.

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Ummm.  How awesome is this story???  Incredibly awesome - that's how.

It was perfectly utterly them.  Thanks for sharing w/us.

I'm super incredibly busy - don't have a lot of time and am sneaking just to read this.

Since I can't write the review I want to I just gave you a ribbon instead. :)

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